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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hw r u ritu???
N poem udya vachen nivant velet...
Tula mahiti a na mala poem jhepat nhi...so w8

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wel being honest i didn't lyk it...

I LUV'd IT...

I don't knw how many tyms i had said bt again i m repeating...u r mindblowing...ur poems always speechless...

Thnx for again giving us such a wondrful os...

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was sho sho sho shwweeettt MBD!!
Lovely!!
Jis Milan ko khuda bhi na rok saka woh milan toh janmo janmo ka hai...😉😉😉😉😉
Simply loved all the three parts TOO GOOD👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Really MBD aapke haathon mai jaad hai... Your poems can make anyone drown in them... I was so so immersed in the poems
Just like them

Haaayyyeee!!!!! MBD you really bring out the feelings through the poem,s too welll
Milan is a brilliant Master Piece HEAVENLY!!!!!
Love you MBD😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Chutki... I love u.. Par tu bhul gayi... Tune page 2 pe res kiya tha...

And last OS pe bhi res hai.. wo bhi hata de... :P

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
Chutki... I love u.. Par tu bhul gayi... Tune page 2 pe res kiya tha...

And last OS pe bhi res hai.. wo bhi hata de... :P

Love you too MBD <3 ! He he mai ghajini ban gayi :p haan haan hata dungi :p

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Blushingqueen

@Blushingqueen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awww loved ur Milan haiyeee
sooo deep...
sowie ritu cant comment long net prblem n mama ki health nay to ban baja diii:((

its sara khan from fb:P

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

omg omg omg...
Ritzzz... dis is absolutely beautiful...

I love the flow of the feelings in all the 3 parts...
beautifully etched...

lolzzz... u knw me nah... so cnt say much on poetry... lolzzz

I love you... ❤️
n ur work is absolutely amazing...!!!!!!!!! [l]

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awww! Shooowwieee Ritu dee for being shooo late *again*🤢
yaar how can u be sooo creative? apki all poems are like WOWWW.👏
This one too yarr,... The Judaai bit was very emotional.
Lekin My Favourite was The third one.
The actual MILAN, it was just superbbb.
awww, once again an ammaazzing poetic OS tha Ritu di.
Yeh hunar sirf app mei hi ho sakta of writing such beautiful Poeitic Os's
Ummaaahhh to u Dii,😳
Lubb ya, nd again Sowwieee

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393794

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

ok nowaniee holding her earsand comming here chupke chupkeand the word sorry was about toe scape from my mouthbut then i realized that this one word would meanan extra dant session from rituso i just said it in my heartsorry for commenting late:(mind it i didnt say it out loudi just said it in my hearthehehehcoming to updatei totally loved itawesomefaband as i told u earlieri am loving the concept as wellso hats off to u girlmuahz

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

awesome as always ritu...
Sply he line khup avadli
Jo Dil mile hi nahi unka milan kaise ho sakta tha Kismat ko manjur nahi wo rishta kaise bun sakta...
Gr8 yr!!!
At strt vatla sad stry a bt happy endin vachun i ws lyk...neva eva predict future of d stry!!! Hehe
Lub u ritu...