Beauty,chapter 9-pg141,Nxt thread-152 - Page 22

Originally posted by: Diva7

"Maan accelerated his bike"''*thud*' u opened ur chapter wid a SIXER over d boundry line'.bike,rain n maan lethal combination fr me.

"There is definitely something different and unique with raindrops"'..oh yes, its natures shower so pure n serene.

"He stopped his bike and craned his neck upwards.Soothing touch of raindrops on his face made him close his eyes." My my m feeling each n every word of it, it's a bliss'. my fvrt gesture of maan, as a calm n composed man, who can cherish d beauty of nature, can also better undrstnd n see d human beauty

"efficient staff was the chief asset " he is a true leader.

"confidence",a "calm",an "honesty" oozing out from her"'..vry big words, bt it shows how much he's able to undrstnd a person'

"drenched from tip to toe thus making his white shirt hugging his strong upper body more closely. His well brushed hair were carelessly kissing his fore head today"''me faint '.."A soft blow of chilled wind made him close his eyes in contentment letting his thick eyelashes flaunt their beauty" Nvr read so beautiful abt anyone's eyelashes. Bt he has d kind of beauty in his eyes. Which speaks volume.

"Raam"''.perfect lyk u said stubble does'nt match wid Raam's features'..bt who d hell is talking abt physical features all dat is goin wid him is his character, dats perfect fr Raam.

"She did not find that "warmth" and "deepness" ''..its lyk body is lyfless without its soul so as seeta's character is nothing without these characteristics. Lyk u said she can be an "beautiful angel bt nt goddess"'..awsm lines dear

"Maan could not remove his eyes"''''I lyk d reality of dis line it shows still he's a human n pretty face has its own impacts. N when it comes to frst impression its definitely a plus point.

M very excited abt d "crushed paper"'..another poem{why???he can write something else too...😆}

Ps I luvd rain luving, soft spoken, humble MSK.{even i have also started liking him...}

Fabulous update n I luvd d part where maan was enjoying rain coz it throws more light on his character''luvd it.{thank you so much sweetheart...😛}

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

The simple words make a whole new meaning in your story and make us to think that they are not as simple as they seems.
Color, Beauty and Nap are the perfect example.

Originally posted by: Shonameet

So, maan enjoyd the rain today. And yes, its totally diffrent feeling to bath in rain...when the drops touch ur skin...it feels cold n sharp..,n i luv that!
...
He know her from before...n has seen her face...thats why never asked anything...
(why only with rain? ...i like 'ginger' tea in winter also!)
...
The contentment n that simle on his face made her heart to imagin him as 'RAM'..
...though she find sameera beautiful nd elegant...she cant imagine her as 'SITA' coz major quality of 'sita' was not there...
...
Maan considerd geets suggetion nd even gave her a opportunity to proov her self...
...
Maan is surely affacted by sameeras beauty...but...???
Lets see wat happen next!
...
...
{its normal to be affacted by ones physical appearence at first meet...it makes u to approch them or want to talk to them...but..u can actually like them or make a bond with them only if ur heart find their heart beautiful,their inner beauty...
...and if ur heart couldnt find 'that' in them...u can never like them for their appreance, however hard u may try!}
...
And haan, not only geet, even i am waiting for that "crushed paper"