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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

absolutely awesome...
Maan was affected by Sameera and i love the practicality you have shown here. Physical beauty and it's effect can not be discarded...
But the thing which caught my attention was that though Maan is Raam, Sameera can not be Sita. As Maan does not have all those physcial attributes as Ram but his demenar makes him so, similarly thought Sameera may have physical attribute but lack of same demeneaor makes her less tahn Sita...{Exactly what i wanted to say in this update...😊You have given perfect words for describing it...hats off to you...👏
That obnservation was wonderful
I am sure we will get to read another lovely poem in next update highlighting Maan's POV about Sameera...
Right now Geet is more of an observor than anything else...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...!😳
U specially pmed me...!so sweet of u babes...!😳

The update was so smooth...and has a diffrent aura...i loved it...it oozes a gentleness...which a beautiful should have in itself.

And yes babes...i loved the gentle 'Maan' so much...sam's entry was beautiful...but i was sad...thinking about geet...she was more beautiful than her...not that she isn't now...but still...i felt so sorry for her...

But what amazed me was maan got affected by sameera's beauty...way to go girl...u really r a practical writer... Thats the thing i loved about this ff...it's close to reality...and i belive reality is much more fascinating than fiction...Thumbs up babes

Wonderful efforts and minblowing piece of writing...

Now after this comment i can expect another 'special' pm...
can't i??😉
Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i didnt think you would be so quick to tell us of the professional relationship between maan and geet but cool
so our maan loves the rain and loves the cool feelings that it gives
and he is the same maan in the office but he is different as in knows all his employees by their name
oaky so geet found ram in maan and almost seeta in sameera but not quite as she didnt have the same warmth in her eyes as seeta should and would have
wonder if there is more to that observation or am i reading too much into it
like your other readers even am wondering if maan leaves those crushed poems on purpose but i doubt it
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
So, maan enjoyd the rain today. And yes, its totally diffrent feeling to bath in rain...when the drops touch ur skin...it feels cold n sharp..,n i luv that!
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He know her from before...n has seen her face...thats why never asked anything...
(why only with rain? ...i like 'ginger' tea in winter also!)
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The contentment n that simle on his face made her heart to imagin him as 'RAM'..
...though she find sameera beautiful nd elegant...she cant imagine her as 'SITA' coz major quality of 'sita' was not there...
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Maan considerd geets suggetion nd even gave her a opportunity to proov her self...
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Maan is surely affacted by sameeras beauty...but...???
Lets see wat happen next!
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{its normal to be affacted by ones physical appearence at first meet...it makes u to approch them or want to talk to them...but..u can actually like them or make a bond with them only if ur heart find their heart beautiful,their inner beauty...
...and if ur heart couldnt find 'that' in them...u can never like them for their appreance, however hard u may try!}
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And haan, not only geet, even i am waiting for that "crushed paper"
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love this humble and kind Maan...i've never liked him in a strict avatar anyway so am glad to read him in this kind of role...you are a great writer...will be eagerly waiting for your each and every update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVE THIS HUMAN MAAN
HE VALUES HIS EMPLOYEES AND THE WORK ENVIRONMENT
HE HAS GIVEN GEET A BIG RESPONSIBILITY
AND HE KNEW HER KIND NATURE AND HER SCARS EVEN BEFORE SHE JOINED HIM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saying that I loved your update won't do any justice to it. It simply filled my heart with a warm and fuzzy feeling. The absolute delight of getting drenched in rain and the ginger tea makes it all the more irresistable.
How true it is that the same water ina shower can't make you feel all this. May be it's not just water alone but all the other elements of nature that makes rain so alluring and so divine.
I really liked how you differenciated between an Angel and a Goddess. May be the reverence that springs in our heart for a goddess is what makes her different from an angel.
Love
Mayukha
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply wow
I loved simple maan who loves simple things in his life and yes very humble and poigant He is attracted towards sameera , and me loved sameera dresscode as we see always c sameera with western clthes and once again maan attract towars simplicity .
Agree with ritzy words regarding sameera cant b sita .
And waiting for words written by maan describing sam . continue soon , cant wait for next update .
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This new MSK with the charecteristics of raam is very nice yaar!!!
The soft spoken MSK does really suit him and we can relate it easily to RAAM...
So he is attracted to sameera's external beauty...but i believe he will get to know that what a person should notice is internal beauty in a very short time...
Update soon...Will be waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh i dnt knw u strted new ff ..thx 4 pm...again unique concept n amazing writing style n here our maan write poems..so geet got scars aftr accident bt d way she emerges out it in strong way is terrific..basically maan has to realize difference between inner n outer beauty as he is highly impressed by sameera's outer beauty...loved it..

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