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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Diva7
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so kya chal raha hai?????

sare stories compile ki hain...in one thread..."once upon a blank paper"

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3249460/once-upon-a-blank-paper

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

sowwieee me again late... devi matha ki seva main lagi hoon aaj kal... i want her to be impressed u know... so getting less time now a days...

any ways coming to the update... totally loved it... shuru se aakhir tak maan... hayeee... and that too such a rare maan i should say... as u said rain lover, humble and soft spoken... but am loving this maan too...

i loved ur description of maans bike ride... true, drenching in the rain and on a shower is complete different... he is so caring, even towards the security guard...

so we have got two opposites here... geet with physical scars and sameera an epitome of beauty... geet with such a big heart, ready to help others at any time ... sameera though runs orphanage is she a kinder one too???? i think we have to wait for that...

continue soon...

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

rocking. plz do add me to ur PM list.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

arre maan getting attracted to sameera...nice part...loved it

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Really loved the update it was too good

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

me too love rain alott...barish mei bhig ne ki feelingd hi alagg hoti hai
Loved it...
Sameera kaha se aayi stry mei...
Cont soon

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

You very well portrayed maan's simple, loving, caring nature which is exactly opposite to his as per GHSP...

I loved geet's weird habit of imaging faces around her which suits the characters of Ramayana...and she chose maan as 'Ram', adi as vibhishan...but could not related Seeta as sameera and maan is attracted to her outer beauty...

OMG you described sameera as always everyone does for GEET...but she cant be Seeta as she can not be a GODESS as she missed 'warmth' & 'deepness' in her...

Ohhh...maan already met her and already impressed by her kind nature...

Happy that maan involved geet in the project

Hope now he can differentiate inner beauty of geet & outer beauty of sameera

So...geet is waiting for another poem by him after seeing crushed papers

Cont soon

Eagerly waiting

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Ritz.k

@Ritz.k

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

nice part...

waiting for next part...

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: palindrome

Yes,a real orphanage is my inspiration for geet's words...But it was not SOS village as you mentioned...I really appreciate those architects who actually thought to design these orphanages this way...👏

I saw that orphanage's each house plus I met all the children there, it has got the exact number of houses that is 21 as yew also mentioned so my thoughts drifted to SOS instantly and I asked yew 😃
I hope yew didn't mind 😛

Naureen 😃