Beauty,chapter 9-pg141,Nxt thread-152 - Page 19

"Maan accelerated his bike"''*thud*' u opened ur chapter wid a SIXER over d boundry line'.bike,rain n maan lethal combination fr me.

"There is definitely something different and unique with raindrops"'..oh yes, its natures shower so pure n serene.

"He stopped his bike and craned his neck upwards.Soothing touch of raindrops on his face made him close his eyes." My my m feeling each n every word of it, it's a bliss'. my fvrt gesture of maan, as a calm n composed man, who can cherish d beauty of nature, can also better undrstnd n see d human beauty

"efficient staff was the chief asset " he is a true leader.

"confidence",a "calm",an "honesty" oozing out from her"'..vry big words, bt it shows how much he's able to undrstnd a person'

"drenched from tip to toe thus making his white shirt hugging his strong upper body more closely. His well brushed hair were carelessly kissing his fore head today"''me faint '.."A soft blow of chilled wind made him close his eyes in contentment letting his thick eyelashes flaunt their beauty" Nvr read so beautiful abt anyone's eyelashes. Bt he has d kind of beauty in his eyes. Which speaks volume.

"Raam"''.perfect lyk u said stubble does'nt match wid Raam's features'..bt who d hell is talking abt physical features all dat is goin wid him is his character, dats perfect fr Raam.

"She did not find that "warmth" and "deepness" ''..its lyk body is lyfless without its soul so as seeta's character is nothing without these characteristics. Lyk u said she can be an "beautiful angel bt nt goddess"'..awsm lines dear

"Maan could not remove his eyes"''''I lyk d reality of dis line it shows still he's a human n pretty face has its own impacts. N when it comes to frst impression its definitely a plus point.

M very excited abt d "crushed paper"'..another poem

Ps I luvd rain luving, soft spoken, humble MSK.

Fabulous update n I luvd d part where maan was enjoying rain coz it throws more light on his character''luvd it.

Originally posted by: Shonameet

...now geet is working as maans secretary...(hero-heroin alredy know eachother!)
geet is excited to go on work(maan se milne)
she is affected by maan...coz maan has accepted her the way she is...without any diffrence, without any sympathy.
...
Geet is a secreat admirer nd reader of maans writing...n has made a collection(maan ka batau??)
...
The poem was beautiful...maan was relating the dark clouds n rain with his pain...but nature made him change his "nazariya" by showing the beautiful side n aftermath of the season...
...nd now he is waiting for next pour...so he can enjoy it fully nd paint it dark"pink"
...
(why pink??){Not any special reason,,while writing the poem,i just wanted to use a bright color against the darkness of black..and first color that came to my mind was bright pink}
...(just a ques--did maan left these paper intentionally??){i don't think so...}
...luvd it...🤗
CONT.SOON

u have no idea how much i am loving this concept ! in every FF i read GEET is beautiful n MAAN got attracted towards her but in this GEET is indeed beautiful but not at physical appearance but at heart ...n which has attracted maan n will lead to beautiful n pure bond ..i hope so :)

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Palin, me here *bow down everyone*{I am doing "dandwat pranam😆}. Looks like that someone is taking my dhamkis seriously. Well, i want to point out a thing in starting itself. As a writer, you are free to expirement your creativity and as far as trust is consider, me have plenty of it for you.{🤗h🤗u🤗g}

As you know very well by now, when it comes to THEM i prefer to ignore every other thing unless something really important catch my attention. The new entry does the same. The way you choose words and than quote it, cherry on cake. The Maan Singh Khurana loving rain on bike and in 'nicey boss' avtaar was defo a surprise. His entry was really unexpected and beautifully written. See, how the word 'beautiful' is involved in our life.{Yes it is but it never loses its beauty inspite of being used so frequently} The way you sketched both of them, amazing. The navratri can't be more mesmerize than this. Well, after my wahe guru, i found my own pair of almighty. You again gave me the chance to love them. Although, sameera's entry was out of blue but i guess that is needed for the story. It's like beauty have different aspects and views from now onwords. {👍🏼}He knew her much before the interview. I simply adore the fact where you described their's entry, character and thinking for each other. Its not love but still LOVE the feeling. Duniya ne meri Geet ki thinking par bhi asar dhikha diya. She picturised him as lord 'ram' but finding another 'sita'. The line where you wrote, she is an angel but not the goddess, splendid{😳😳}. Well, the whole concept is being all real and pratical. Overall, yet another thoughtful part. It is not that lengthy as your part but you know the reason already. I am really looking forward to know what will beauty make out?{You will know as the story would progress😊} And not to forget, we are talking about not just any other couple or mere characters.

Do cont soon and do PM me.