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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

No no yaar,I dont think doing house chores is anywhere 'anti-feminist' I said that because I thought ppl may think low of Geet to do that,but for me its a wierd kind of romantic.

Anyways,wishing best of luck to you and waiting.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Let me comment on your note before going towards this chapter. I think a story cannot really be divided into a good, a bad and an ugly just because it is a mix of all these and more that make the story what it is. Talking about Gehraiyan, the only thing that could be an issue for readers is the pace though I have a different opinion on that. The current pace of the story is what truly makes the story even more connected with its title so I'll tell you to carry on just as it is unless of course you want to alter it. 😊

Yes, I've noticed that the pace of the story is quite slow and the pace of my updates are slower still. But one thing I've realised is that I'm obsessed with the details of this story. Whereas in other stories, I've skipped days at a time from scene to scene and let readers fill in the parts in between, with Gehraiyan I just find that I can't. Guess you guys will have to grin and bear it 😆 I've been trying to compensate with quicker updates.

This chapter was probably one of those few where I felt Geet to be a very ordinary woman - ordinary in a sense that the usual gloomy clouds which linger around her weren't there as she wished for a simple thing: some time alone, as she felt pleasure at being quested after and as she took the kurta to wash. That was one action which made me smile. No matter how much a couple fights, there's still concern and care for each other deep down in the heart. The concern that made Geet shudder and made her willingly go back to the place she was so eager to get out of.

When she spoke earlier of all this being tiring, it was about exactly what you've said. Carrying around gloomy clouds until they become a part of your personality... it's not fun. It's not her. She always seems happier in the moments she's distracted by the present and doesn't have to think too much.

That little shared smile and the silent understanding, that was a flicker of hope for me. A hope that perhaps this is where they will start everything afresh, like two individual personalities rather than two halves which have to stay together to form a whole.

👏 Better to be propelled by something rather than feel compelled by it.

Thanks for the PM, Z! Waiting for more. 😊

Thanks, M!

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Reserve.

Okay happy days are here. Let me stop my grinning. Comment will be edited then.

I am starry eyed right now. Yeah yeah I know I tend to behave out of character in this thread but what to do. As I said this thread is my Sach ka saamna.

She really meant what she said, I so understand her feelings there. I explained the same thing to mom today morning when I was telling her how I don't want to eat an ice cream and she thinks I want some pampering. 😆

😆 No comments there.

Anyway as everyone already said, I too liked the washing his Kurta scene, though I may not entirely understand the concept of taking care though miffed right now... it is still fun to read.

What actually made me love this update was a belief...a small sign of hope.

See I don't expect them to miraculously fall in love with each other all over again when they were dropped in a different place under different circumstances, but yes I do believe in rediscovering each other. There will be so many facets to you that you yourself might not know. And when they are caught in a place with RK (I know he hates the shortforms but oh well I love irritating him) and his rules, the beautiful cottage and the amazing nature surrounding them...their own rules and silent acceptance of non disclosure of their relationship...ah dreammyyy😆

You'd be irritating him even more since his name is Gopal Kaka 😆 (I would never use RK. The man irritates too much ;) ).
The idea of rediscovering each other is quite exciting. They've both changed, so it's like falling in love with a mix of old and new.

Were you expecting me to end the above sentence in something great and wise? High hopes GF, you know your BF by now.😆

If I wanted great and wise, I would not have picked you, BF 😆

Originally posted by: honeygrape

are we getting an update now????/😃

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

loved the update

like is not working..

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I'm working on it right now 😊 Just have to finish replying to the comments first.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

okiess 😃 will be waitinggg😃