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If anyone is curious, by the way, the quote Geet remembers is from 'Sputnik Sweetheart' by Haruki Murakami. And the story the father was telling is, of course, that of Heer and Ranjha.

superb writing .

"She was the forgotten words of a favourite song...somewhere in the recesses of the mind but never quite within reach"

"But that is the sad truth of this world often,your enemies are much closer than you think"


Today ,i felt both d above thots were for me,strangely i cud relate wid them.Not that i m unhappily married but sometimes life's monotny do give me a gloom.And d enemies cud be found in ur best friends,unexpedly.

Wenever i m on a ride,i love to take d window seat and glide away wid my wave of thots and dreams,and sometimes i dream d impossible.

I dont know if i am at all able to express myself but your updates as i said earlier too ,always leave me wid a particular emotion.

But buddy,i think to comment on ur updates i my self need to develop sm writing skills within me.See you give us a pool of emotion and i m not even able to praise u properly.

Anyways,fm i last update,i cudnt recollect fm where u picked Mrs. Bulani,can u please tell me???? I only remember one of this kind in d movie "Dharkan".

And yes tell me ur name too.Adress karne me awkward feel nahi hoga.

Bye.

Sharad made Geet Khurana nostalgic about her past which got buried somewhere

Who is heer???

The best thing of going out on a holiday is...you have lots to catch up when you're back. I have read three chapters at once (Wooh wooh wooh) and hence I can't complain about the size.

The hair gel scene had really taken me off by surprise. After reading their first meeting, I began to think that they might have thought they were in love and rushed into marriage only to regret later. However, this scene showed that they were in love after all.

Right from the start of this fic, in fact the very first part had kept me thinking.


He had done it all for her and he used to believe that he would do it again in a heartbeat.

He used to believe a lot of things.

Nowadays, he couldn't quite think of his wife's name without that little bit of bitterness and frustration poisoning his thoughts. She had grown tiresome to him and everything about their pairing felt stale and ugly.

These lines then had kept my grey cells overworking. My only question from the start was : Does the indifference had a reason? Or is it a natural process?

The bold lines however make me believe that there was a reason...

Anyway this is an infinite loop. I feel like a broken record mentioning the same thing in every comment. Never mind me.

Heer and her story seems intriguing. And on a lighter note, I love Heer Heer song from Jab tak hain jaan. Though I hardly understand the bits and pieces of the song, it tugs my heart and I have wet eyes.

I have to mention something. I love your writing style. I love the brevity you show. You don't describe the surroundings, you don't waste too many words in showing what the characters think...yet every emotion of the characters is conveyed properly. Keep up the good work. :)

D mst intriguing part ws MAAN's hold on steerng wheel... D descrptn gve me a ques... Has Sharad GEET chemstry sparkd smthng in him?? V need a monologue here..dont u think so? Wel its u to decide.. Knwng GEET HANDA thru flashes of GEET KHURANA's memory ws mch betr dn readng it in ful updtes... Btw HEER? love SANJH

Wow. My heart feels like it's going to burst right now. Seriously. Thank you all so much for the wonderful feedback. Really, I don't even know what to say right now.

Since you are in a good mood, can I take chances and whine like a little girl that I wasn't added in your PM list? *Huffs*