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meettu

@meettu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Nice update
What about shruti illness
Want more parts

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Last Part...!!! So sad! Maan is so caring n loving! Well written, pls post epilogue! Loved this OS !

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Last Part...!!! So sad! Maan is so caring n loving! Well written, pls post epilogue! Loved this OS !

thanks a lot

let me see how many readers want epilogue
will c and then post

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

that was a fabulous ending lovd it

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

man that was just beautiful
finally she broke free of it all
she let it all out
all those bottled emotions she had kept inside her
finally she let them all g
her hears for her only loved ones who are with her leaving her
not falling for maan more
becasue if she did then she could loose him too
but of course maan wasnt and isnt gonna let go of her
no matter what happens he will be with her always
that was needed for geet
she needed to be told that all shall be okay and soon
and with them both confessing how much the other means to them helped geet to open up
and that kiss that too was perfect
cheers for pm
dammit even this is finished nahinnn