MG - bandishein mohabbat link to thread 4 pg/1 !!! - Page 54

I dont knwo what to say, i just dont want maan to marry pareenita.

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

nice update buddy ⭐️
but if ur asking fr an honest opinion now i feel tht maan deserves to b left alone he doesnt deserves an ounce of geets love ...if arjun did nything to annie which i dont think so thn still tht doesnt gves him d r8 to do d same wid his sis i must say hes worst thn arjun also whts d diff bet him nd arjun using d poor gal who only needs nothing frm him but only love on top of tht hes getting engaged to tht pari ...thn wht does geet mean to him ...m sorry buddy but this maan m hating ...but as far as ur description in d present u hv shown maan shouting on pari nd disagreeing to marry her ...so i wanna see this maan realizing his mistake soon or else he shd b left in isolation 😡
thnx fr d pm buddy😃
nd do cont soon 😃
coz criticism doesnt mean ppl hate u or ur work coz hving a gift of writing stories is something which not all hv so dear tk it positively😃 nd i didnt mean to hurt u just giving u my view rest i will love if u cont this story nd mk maan rectify his mistake by punishing d real culprits nd show some respect fr geet rather thn using her like a tissue 😡

Originally posted by: anmirza

Loved the update but it's a sad one =(( I truly feel bad for Geet =(( but what makes u think that we don't want u to continue it??? Khabardar Jo quit kiya tumne or else I will be really upset!

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

Hi dear..
you know what.. i just read prologue and part 1 Once again..now.. and it sooths some of our pain seeing Maan repenting..

It had been three days geet left the house leaving a letter for him and maan still remained on the same bed feeling guilty for his uncontrollable anger for venting it out on her!!! His eyes turned teary reading it for the nth time

Maan,

I know u wud definitely search for me knowing abt me leaving the house. Pata nahi if I can trust on the word love eva again duwa karongi ki jis uljhan mein aap ho usse aap bahar nikal jaayee. Aapne pyar ko kabhi nahi maana aur aapne apne iss pagalpan se mera bharosa pyar par se utha diya. I wish u a happy life with parineeta plz mujhme aur sehne ki shakti nahi hai aur main aapki jindagi mein wapas nahi aana chahti atleast not as ur keep!!!

That means she believed him getting married to parineeta!!!... tumne soch bhi kaise liya geet ki main shaadi karonga?? I know maine tumhare saath jo bhi kiya galat tha par I was trying to sooth myself saying that u cant be that bas***ds sister and making love to u I wanted to wipe off ur existence and fill u with my love. Mera tareeka galat tha. Bt still this game hasn't ended yet!!! its high time I teach ur brother a lesson I was fighting with myself bt my love for u is overpowering me so much. I wont let u leave me this way!!! Tum sirf mere saath rahogi only with me aur mujhe bhagwan bhi nahi rok sakta

Today prem and heer were returning back to delhi from London along with yash and meera completely unaware of the happenings between maaneet. And the evening there was a party for the for the success they got on the project and also for the merger of the companies of khuranas and junejas. Geet knew if she wud attend this party she will have to face maan bt she did not want to run away even. She wanted to face him with courage. Otherwise heer wud definitely feel bad for her not being a part of the success party

PARTY @ HOTEL:

Maan tried fooling dadima saying that he wud marry parineeta thinking that once she wud get well he will back off with his promise!!! This was the truth bt tonight things will turn upside down, he didn't know it. As the party started geet entered alone petrified to face maan, she knows she will have to be strong. Soon heer came to geet to be with her for the entire party, the junejas and khuranas family were present bt of all dadima was damn excited for the announcement she is gonna make this night!!! Engagement of maan and parineeta!!! This news is not known to maan he was so drowned in his misery!!! The party started with first the happy news of the merger of khuranas and junejas. Maan and prem stood infront of a gathering explaining in detail abt the merger and then maan congratulated prem for the hard work he did on the London project. Geet stood at a corner observing maan talking to the ppl around him, she cud make out the pain in his eyes, which did not go unnoticed by him. He knew she was watching him bt as he lifted his head to find geet she disappeared. After a long search he came to the centre of the hall where he heard dadima telling everybody that parineeta wud be her bahu. She called maan on the stage, geet who was now with heer held her arm firmly as she felt the ground slipping away. Maan walked in a dazed way as it's a public place and wat dadima made now was a public announcement

Dadima held maan and parineeta's hand into hers and showed everybody her grandson and her to ' be ' daughter in law!!! Maan was dumbfound, he wanted to shout on dadima bt he cudnt knowing this wud be the page3 news for the next day. He decided to deal with her after the party.

And the celebration for the night began with a shocked maaneet and premeer!!! The music started and all the couples started to dance. Then after a lil while the music stopped as a beautiful girl clad in a transparent sea blue saree came onto the dance floor. She was drunk completely and the song begun!!!

Its got me drinking high
In my body yea
I'm drinking not every shot
In this party yea
Ab ke suroor chha raha
Mujhpe iss kadar
I'm not so much up
My head iis heavier
Heavier

Geet moved her hips as the drink started its work. She was all lost in the announcement made a while ago. She watched maan and parineeta standing beside each other

Naughty naughty naa
Naughty naughty naa
Naughty naughty naa

Heer tried holding stumbling geet, she shoved her hand away and taking heavy steps she went to the bar for more drink. She gulped two glasses in one go

Jaane hoga kya

Padh gayi main poori sunn
Ho gayi tun
Pee gayi neat main
Bandh kar angrezi dhun
Naache sun desi beat mein
Mein..

Dadima closed her eyes in shame as she found the party has turned out to be a cocktail party with the drinks ppl started to have looking at geet, enjoying her dance

Ahan ahan ahan ahan

Raat jaise ye badh rahi hai
Mujhpe behoshi chadh rahi hai
Saaf kuch naa de dikhaai
Aankhein dhundhli si padh rahi hai

Geet went to maan and went round and round around him touching his hands and chest while all the ppl watched this in amusement

Poori masti mein jhoom loongi
Kone kone mein ghoom loongi
Koi mujhko rok le naa
Warna tujhko main choom loongi

She held maan's collar and brought his lips close to hers and stopped herself, she pushed him and laughed like a maniac!!!

Padh gayi main poori sunn
Ho gayi tun
Pee gayi neat main
Bandh kar angrezi dhun
Naache sun desi beat mein
Mein

This time heer to tried to stop geet as the media were present there and they were clicking the images of maaneet. Bt tonight there was no stop to her. She didn't want to stop actually!!!

Walkin' walkin' walkin'
don't you love the way she walkin'
Dropin' dropin' ..
Walkin' walkin' juicy
Everybody here is lovin' it
When you got dropin'
Everybody fantasize heavenly

Ho
Don't stop this party
Ho
Don't want this party
Ho
I'm burn this party
Ho
Cupid on the dance floor
Ho
Don't stop this party
Ho
I want to burn this party
Ho
I'm burn this party
Tell me do you want more more more..

Few boys joined geet and she was surrounded by them as she danced, heer's eyes turned teary unable to take the pain of geet. She asked prem to rescue her bt no use. Maan's anger was raising to peak he was controlling himself bt now those boys around her made him even more angrier

Khali pyaalo ko phir bharu main
Sochti hoon ke kya karoon main
Okhli mein sar diya toh
Phir zamane se kyun daru main
Iss taraf ya udhar main jaaun
Main naa jaanu kidhar main jaaun
Tum hi aakar bolo kaise
Aise halat main ghar jaaun
Na re Na re naa
Aage hoga kya

Maan held geet's arm and just dragged her out of the hall, she fought with him bt there was no use he was a way too stronger than her!!!

Padh gayi main poori sunn
Ho gayi tun
Pee gayi neat main
Bandh kar angrezi dhun
Naache sun desi beat mein

Maan: enuf geet wats all this?? Pagal ho gayi ho?? Kya tamasha laga rakha hai tumne yaha?? U are drunk?? Teen din kaha thi tum??

Geet: none of ur concern Mr. khurana stay away from me I hate u!!!

Precap: geet and heer's confrontation!!! Next wala update with a dhamaka hold on girls!!!

thanks to all those girls who supported me plz thoda yakeen karo mera with this story and this immediate update is to tell u that i am continuing with the story hope ull like it

amrutha!!!! u have been my biggest support and pillar of all this thanks so much lucky to have u😳

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