Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

finally the ganda bacha did her res edited 😃


Oye Khabardar jo mere bache ko ganda bola to... 😡

And Choti ko kyu bol rahi hai... Tu bhi ja xam pe dhyan de na... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Firstly to Ritu dee, mei biig biig sholly for being late yar😭... SOWWIEE!!!!
Ammazing part thi dee, i just LUBBB ur poetry, they are jst FABB.⭐️
Haaye! kya tareeka hai jazbaat bayaan karne ka!😉
Oww, so Maan proposed her but she rejected.🥺 OUCH
Uff! yeh aur isska ateet🤢,Kitnaa tadpaayega bechaare Maanu ko.
So finally humare MSK ne Geet ko dhund hi nikalaa.
Woh bhi Kashmir ki vaadiyo mei, HAAYEE! too romantic.

Uff! the last poetry was just shocking, So yeh tha Geet ka pst.
Zaroor wo idiot DEV hi hoga as alwayzzz😡, And wo Geet ka last wala question ka ans to sab ko hi knwn hai- Maan to defo use uske ateet k saath accept karega,😉 umm, meri toh yehi HOPE hai.
Continue soon, And lubbb ya Ritu dee,
Ummaahhh nd get well soon😃


Dnt be sorry re... Its ok...
And Oops Maan ne propose nahi kiya use abhi tak...
Geet ne uski aankho me padh liya tha wo...

Ab ye tum log decide karo wo DEv hai ya koi aur...😆

Wait and watch... Kya pata Maan waha se chala bhi jaaye...😉

and Thank u sooo much... Hugsss
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

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aowww what to say U know Ritzie I always wonder kya heart break k baad humare sab emotions cease ho jaate hai, kya ek insaan k dhokhe k karan we forget to live, to love !! aisa hota hai kya Ritz
agar aisa hota hai I serious dont wnna fall in love as it will make me week to see the toughest coz I know dat day I will lose myself

You know the each word was a melody to ear, i was reading it as if I am humming some song and singing it's lyrics LoLz

aowww the start was too touchy, he was waiting for her, she knew it, but she failed to show up, she failed to tell him her heart, beacuse she was fearing another heart break

gossshhh how could anyone do this, that bloody pervert in her past feel like killing that bas***d, shit...bloody hell with him

sheesshhh thn how can she run away, U know what i actually loved of Geet in GeetHSP she never ran away, she faced it with all her might she did it

but wo kehte hai ja *jab kisi se sidhat se mohabbat karo to puri kayanat aapko uss se milane main lagg jaati hai* how could she run away from him

aowww I just love it
that was actually stupendous

hayeee Ritzie even u wnna go Kashmir na issilie un dono ko pahuncha dia LoLz

hush finally he know everything n now I trust him he wont let her go


Bacha Then u stay out of these Love things...
Ek baar heart break ho jaaye na to use sambhalna bahaut mushkil hai...
As if Baaki kuch maayine nahi rakhta... Hum apne hi gum me dube rehte hai...
Its very hard to come out of it.. until we get more love from someone...

And Ha She ran away bcoz she was afraid of another heart break...
She was still in trance of her past...

Hehe... Song samajhke padh rahi thi... Hehe...

Aur Wo Bas***** mile to meri taraf se bhi maarna usko...

And I have visited Kashmir Bacha.. Isiliye maaneet ko bhi bhej diya...

Hehe Kya pata What if maan goes away...????

And Luv yaaa sooo much... Hugsss for this lovely comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heya Chandru... Sorry yaar wo Post read kar rahi thi... dhyan hi nahi gaya yaha pe... Howz u...????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
mbd abb kaisi tabiyat hai aapki! heya GK😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me achi hu chutki... :) Tu bata... and GK...???? Full form plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Le Dono gayab ho gaye... :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chalo chandru.. Chutki... My Time up... :(

Need to go now... Byeee Tc... Luv ya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
he he GK prafulla ke liye tha :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh chandru ke liye... :) okiezzz...

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