Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
haila itna rondu update mere liye., ab sab ko lagega meri wajah se update is 😭 he he joking yaar! kya yaar rula diya... awesome update... omg geet left !!! poor maan waited all day long awww she was fearing she may lose her heart again to wrong person when she had already lost it to maan hayyyeee awww she was fearing she may lose her heart again to wrong person when she had already lost it to maan hayyyeee awww maan is so sweet!t he didnt lose hope to find her hayee ergg that bloody kamina in her past So wanna kill that guy... No worry maan hai na ;) phew! maan finally remembered! Kashmir! her fav place! awww ! finally he found her... geet now realised he is a part of her ! how wont he know where she is finally she realised her love for him... awww maan determined to remove every bit of her bitter past and fill it with his love hayyyeee chalo chalo ab jaldi se mila bhi do dono n ko cont soon mbd luv u dc;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...wow...wow...
I am speechless Ritu...literally Speechless
waise thanks for dedicating this to me...that was quite a surprise
and the poem...or rather the story which you told in form of a gazal...absolutely stunning...you have so much talent...how using some simple words, you expressed ocean deep emotions...
her fear and going away
his not let go attitude and finding her out
her accepting that he knows her so well that she can not hide from him even if she wants
her plea for trusting her
and finally her bayane-dard...
it was just beautiful
Kashmir ki hassen wadiyon se bhi zayda khubsurat...
haye..that was the best way of describing her beauty
and also the part where she realises he knows her so well that he will always find her
tum likhto hi to lagta hai ki dil bahar nikal dala
ek boond se hi sara sagar bhar daala
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

haila itna rondu update mere liye., ab sab ko lagega meri wajah se update is 😭 he he joking yaar! kya yaar rula diya... awesome update... omg geet left !!! poor maan waited all day long awww she was fearing she may lose her heart again to wrong person when she had already lost it to maan hayyyeee awww she was fearing she may lose her heart again to wrong person when she had already lost it to maan hayyyeee awww maan is so sweet!t he didnt lose hope to find her hayee ergg that bloody kamina in her past So wanna kill that guy... No worry maan hai na ;) phew! maan finally remembered! Kashmir! her fav place! awww ! finally he found her... geet now realised he is a part of her ! how wont he know where she is finally she realised her love for him... awww maan determined to remove every bit of her bitter past and fill it with his love hayyyeee chalo chalo ab jaldi se mila bhi do dono n ko cont soon mbd luv u dc;)


Hehe.. :P Aww.. Nahi kisi ko nahi lagega kuch aisa...
and Luv ya... Meri chutki... Hugsss
And pata nahi ab next update kab dungi...
Not well... Shayad se bahaut late hoga next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u sooo much Jas...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow...wow...wow...

I am speechless Ritu...literally Speechless
waise thanks for dedicating this to me...that was quite a surprise
and the poem...or rather the story which you told in form of a gazal...absolutely stunning...you have so much talent...how using some simple words, you expressed ocean deep emotions...
her fear and going away
his not let go attitude and finding her out
her accepting that he knows her so well that she can not hide from him even if she wants
her plea for trusting her
and finally her bayane-dard...
it was just beautiful
Kashmir ki hassen wadiyon se bhi zayda khubsurat...
haye..that was the best way of describing her beauty
and also the part where she realises he knows her so well that he will always find her
tum likhto hi to lagta hai ki dil bahar nikal dala
ek boond se hi sara sagar bhar daala


Aww... Thank u sooo much di...
Luv u... Hugsss...
And hehe and I love kashmir...
Sachi main waha jannat hai.. and that why I included it...

Ye lines mere liye...????
Hayeee Me dead *thud* *thud*
They are Awesum di... Thank u.. Thank u sooo much...
U don't knw what they meant to me...
A tight bone crushing hug to you... for these...
and lots of kissi wissi as well... Luv ya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Kyu gussa hai..????

Ja rahi hu baba yaha se... Gussa mat hona plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu


Kyu gussa hai..????

Ja rahi hu baba yaha se... Gussa mat hona plzz

thats like a good girl😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

thats like a good girl😊


Mein to pehle se hi GUD GAL hu... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu


Mein to pehle se hi GUD GAL hu... 😊

😲yeh galat info tumhe kisne kaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
mai aapse baat nahi kar rahi😡 mai mbd se puch rahi thi

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