Yaadein: Truth is out Pt12 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
truly intersting nd different concept...so much of mu realy wanna knw third party who is reason behind dis confusion...although i nvr read anythn othr den maaneet bt it appears 2 b realy nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
hey nice new concept
hop u continue soon:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
BOTH THE ET THINKS THE OTHER BETRAYED THEM
THIS MEANS SOMEBODY ELSE HAS TO BE INVOLVED
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Yaadein:Complicated memories Part 2

Thanks a lot 4 supporting this complicated SS

ylaraib wanted me to write a SS based on my Maaneet OS Last days.But i was not confident enough to write a full fledged SS based on Last days.But in this SS, Maaneet track is inspired by Last days.So I am dedicating this SS to ylariab.


I thank geetsweet (Tanu)for making an emotional VM for my SS.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8aD0m5tFrPM&feature=youtu.be








Khushi's tears rolled down her cheeks.

Flash back…

Arnav and Khushi exchanged rings.
That day only they saw each other fot the first time.Arnav's parents Shashank Singh Raizada and Meetti Singh Raizada only fixed their marriage.Arnav and Khushi had just seen each other's photograph.They got impressed seeing the photograph itself.On the engagement day they exchanged sweet glances as if they knew each other for a long time.

Arnav stood near Khushi and whispered:I feel that I have been knowing since ages.May be we were a couple in the previous birth also.

She blushed.

A:To be frank I never thought I would fall in love at first sight itself.

She blushed.
A:Do you believe in love at first sight?
She smiled.
A:If you d not believe in love at first sight you tell me.We will meet every day.
She was shy.He was enjoying her gesture.
They both got lost in each other's eyes which were filled up with love.

Their hearts beat fast:

Rabba ve…rabba ve…..

Present…

Khushi wiped her tears thinking:Arnav's each and every word was a lie.He never had feelings for me.He just needed a high class wife to show public.But he loved a third class girl secretly to satisfy his physical needs.Disgusting.I will not cry even a bit for that unfaithful rascal.


Geet rested her head on Arnav's shoulder.

She thought:I always wanted to be in your shoulders Maan.But you ignored me…you did'nt care for my feelings.When you left me it is Arnav's hand which held me.It is his shoulder which gave me warmth and comfort.

Flash back…

Maan entered the house.He saw Geet draped in a beautiful saree.He saw a cake kept on the table.

M:Why that cake?And why have you dressed up like this?

G:You forgot today's speciality?Today is our wedding anniversary.

M:Oh!I forgot.I have so much of work to do.How can I remember such silly days?A home maker like you won't understand it.

G:So for you our wedding anniversary is silly?

M:Ya…every year there will be anniversary.Why should we give too much of importance to that?But my Business success is more important to me.Without success there is no life.

G:You are right.But in between there should be nice moments to remember.Right?That's why I decided to celebrate our wedding anniversary.Come on…let's cut the cake.
He looked at the cake once more.


M:Chocolate cake?I don't like it.

G:Oh sorry Maan.I did'nt know that you hate it that much.But since there is no other cake let us cut this.

Maan shouted:Maan Singh Khurana's word has value.It can't be changed.If I say no to chocolate cake it is no.

Geet got scared.She started shivering.She is always afraid of Maan's Angry face.

G:But Maan….

M:You can cut it and eat the whole damn thing.But don't ask me to do it.

G:Today is our wedding anniversary Maan.We both have equal importance today.So we need to cut the cake today.How can I cut the cake alone?

M:Oh!Really?If so why did'nt you consider my taste before ordering the cake?

G:I did'nt know that you hate chocolate cake this much.Because last year you did'nt have any problem with it.

M:But this year I have problem.You got it?

G:Please Maan…don't be so stubborn.Please cut the cake with me.

M:I said no.

Geet burst into tears:Maan…why are you always ignoring my feelings?It's true that our's was arranged marriage.I was chosen by Dadima.But I thought after marriage you would love me.But you are not able to love me?

M:Stop shedding your fake tears Geet.

G:You think even my tears are fake?How can you be so rude Maan?

M:I am like this.I can't change.If you have any problem with my character you can leave.

G:If you don't want m I will leave.

M:Ok…if you want you leave.

G:You have no problem with me leaving?

M:No.I have no problem.I don't need a partner to survive .I am not that weak to come behind you and beg you to return.

Geet was shattered.Suddenly she remembered their passionate wedding night.

G:Maan…if you had not loved me what about the passionate moments we spent together?Was it just lust?

M:If you think that was just lust I am not going to give you any clarification.And to have lust Maan Singh Khurana does'nt need to marry you.I could have gone to a brothel.If I just move my fingers I will get thousands of girls.Note that Geet.

G:Yes,it's true that you will get a better girl.I am leaving.

She left the house shedding tears.

She thought:Maan did'nt even stop me.He does'nt care if I stay with him or not.


Present….

Geet wiped her tears.


Though Khushi was in front of Maan,he could see only Geet.

He thought:Damn it.Why I always see the face of the person I hate the most?I hate Geet. Khushi has replaced Geet in my mind.Still why…?

Flash back…

Geet left the house.

Maan was shocked as he never expected Geet to leave the house.Maan wanted to call Geet back.But his ego did'nt allow him to do that.

M:No,I can't bend before her.Just because I said something in anger how can she just leave me and go?

Maan was getting restless.

M:No,she can't just go away like that.She will come back.Only if I be romantic like filmi heroes my love will be proved?How stupid!

He was not able to sleep.

M:Where must be Geet now?She must have gone to Shashank Uncle's house.Where else?She is not independant enough to work and find her own residence.

Maan's phone rang.Maan wasa excited.He picked up the phone.

"Maan…I am Khushi".

M:Khushi…you?

K:Were you expecting someone else's call?Geet's call?

M:Nothing like that.

K:Are you sure?

Maan lied:Yes.

Slowly Maan asked:Did Geet come over there?

K:Why?She is not there?

M:Actually….

K:Maan…I am your best friend.I know your present state.Don't lie again.Geet and you had a fight and she left the house.You know that Geet is in our house now.

M:A silly fight.I never thought Geet would leave our house like this.

K:Maan…this is your problem.You want Geet to tolerate your anger silently.She is also a human being and she is too sensitive.Don't hurt her always.At least during special occasions you be with her.

M:I don't believe in such stupid special occasions and celebrations.

K:But if you love Geet you should join her in celebrations.

M:For her every day is a celebration.I can't celebrate everyday as I am busy with my work.You are not like Geet.You also handle business.You know my condition.Right?

K:Yes,but you should find time to be with your wife.And don't release your work pressure and tensions on your wife.Arnav and I are busy with our work.Now he is in Delhi for a meeting.He will come only tomorrow.But still we find time for each other.Maan…you have to be more softer.

M:Tomorrow I will come and pick up Geet.I miss her.I understand her value after she left.

Khushi smiled.


Present….

Maan said in his mind:I was willing to change myself for you.I wanted to make you happy.I wanted you to be with me till the end of my life.But you…..why did you do this to me Geet?


Flash back….

Geet and Khushi's friendship grew gradually.They used to hang out together.
Drashti Dhami and Sanaya Irani
They used to go for picnic.
They used to go for dinner.
They used to attend functions together.

Present…

Khushi said in her mind:I always considered you as my dearest friend Geet.I tried to unite you and Maan.But what did you do to me?Why Geet?Why?

Khushi's face became red due to her anger for Geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Thanx fr pm dear.

Its seems to b a nice concept.

I dont promise bt i'll try to read it.
Reasons
1st is i CAN'T bear to read/see/imagine maan n geet wid any othr speclly in romantic/intimate scenes.
It breaks sumthing within me n leaves me frustrted. Kya kru crzy fr my gurti/maaneet.
2nd is kisi aur couple ke liye padhne ka mann nahi krta n here arnav-khushi will b havng equal role.Infact i didnt saw their show except fr 2-3 epi in strting.

Bt ur story really seems to b strong.
If u promise me no such scenes of maan n geet wid any othr except among them then i'll read.

Gud luck
n
sorry i disappointd u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Interesting update! Everyone has been cheated upon then who is the culprit???
N please lemme know if u r gonna reunite Maaneet in the end or not??? Coz if they are not together then it just kills the Maaneet fans =((
Edited by anmirza - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
AWw that was sad updates
i'm eagerly to know when Arshi gonne meet
do cont soon n thnks for pming
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Nice update
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
awesome update.
loved it.
Nice concept. it's really very interesting.
Are Arnav and Geet merried? and Kushi e Maan?
I feel that Maan in this one is more like ASR o maybe worse than him.
Thanks a lot for the Pm
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
awesome update
loved it
nice concept
thanks for the pm

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