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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: gudmeet
wow very nice
though we maan geet lovers did not like maan pari closeness i am sure u will come up with some interesting twists so that we can see maan and geet together in this ff also.

was there something else which pari wanted to tell maan beside the obvious?
Pari is 3 weeks preg and she was away with her mom for 15 days is it that pari is cheating on maan?
3 weeks means 21 days..they might have consummated before that..so i think she is not cheating.😊
oh i am so hooked to this story

what abt geet's love for maan

this is quite interesting

waiting eagerly for the next update

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nats0101

@nats0101

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

interesting n intriguing indeed

so pari is d patient..

n nw evry1 including pasi herself knows of her obsession wid poems..

bt wht nxt?

waiting 4 more

love ur story!!

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

source of poems maybe from net in her lappy
I too thought that she married him in trance state
actually she dosen't love him & she is regreting for her decision to marry him
I don't like romancing maan & pari but I also trust you to make it maaneet story

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Very nice but am getting late, wont be able to comment much, sorry but thanks for the pm.

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Loved it and complicated one . loved the poems which potrays all d emotions of pari . beautiful one . continue soon .

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

😛

Originally posted by: hermoso
Loved it and complicated one . loved the poems which potrays all d emotions of pari . beautiful one . continue soon .

Thank you so much for liking those poems..I really tried to find some good poems which could be fit in this story{which could depict pari's behaviour at certain situation like her feeling pregnant etc} but found none..hence i wrote them myself..Initially i was reluctant in doing so but then i thought i should write them..only a psycho like pari could like them😆😆 and strictly it does not imply that i am calling you a "psycho"..I am very much humbled and happy that someone liked my poems,,,😛

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

a big twist..pari is patient..

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

PARI IS LIVING HER POEMS

BUT WHAT WILL BE THE SOLUTION

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

so all three are aware of some facts...but I wonder what next. Maan has to keep her away from mental stress so he decides to not talk abt it. But is knowing enough on part of Pari. Yes she knows but what if she is not able to fight it.

I think Maan should have asked Geet to treat her...a regular consultation would ahve helped. Now it is burried in her heart but what if she is not strong enough to keep those feelings at bay. Poem can talk about sympathy after loosing a baby...loss of love due to attention being diverted somewhere else. What if under the influence of some poem, she harms herself or the baby...

Let's see where this goes but very worried for Pari