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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting Prologue
Waiting for update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept dear waiting for next

LARAIB
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Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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wow nice yaar.waiting for the update
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khah gyae waiting
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Chapter 1


Today like any day sun rose from east and after sunset when darkness spread Moon came to assure all living beings..Sun ll come again to shine on you.So try to smile.Look at me fill me in ur eyes ...I am the symbol of your happiness , Sun bringing for you in its rays.Try to fell calm frigidity of my rays .It well give you courage to bear bright sunshine.

Yes for every one this was any other day.But why the people in this big Royal Mension are much happy ? Is there some special occasion.Since morning there is too much gaiety all around. Like whole city has been gathered here.

This place is not an ordinary place not any ordinary mension.In the mid of Delhi's most advanced prestigious posh area this is Khuraana Mension the royal residency of Khuraanas.One of most richest families in whole country

Whole KM has been decorated like a bride from last three days.After all marriage functions today Mrs.Savitri Devi Khuraana's elder grandson Maan got married and its about 7 he is back with his newly wed bride Geet .Now Savitri Devi is preparing for her Bahu's Greh Prevesh

Maan...Maan Singh Khuraana 27 year old Grand son of Savitri Devi Khuraana.A successful business man .Maan a Perfectionist He has every thing which makes a man perfect...Brain , Power, Good Looks. Attitude and will power to get what ever he wants. He is the youngest billionaire of country who inherited his construction business Khuraana Constructions (KC) from his Grand Father Mr Ranjit Singh Khuraana...he lost his parents at tender age of 9 . For him his Daddi Maa is his father and mother both.

Maan every woman's desire till now always kept a distance from not only girlz ...but from whole society...For his social circle he is a mystery...After wait of 3 years he said yes to his Daddi for marriage But why he not looks happy.When he got a life partner who matches him in each and every aspect.


He got Geet...Geet Handa as his life partner . 23 year old beautiful educated daughter of one of biggest names in Hotel Business Mr Mohinder Handa .This was an arranged marriage A common friend of Handas and Khuraanas suggested Geet as perfect match for Maan to Savitri Devi .After thinking for months Maan said yes to this proposal.

After Maan said yes Daddi fixed marriage date without thinking twice just after 9 days Maan got married to Geet now they were in front of main entrance of KM

Daddi welcomed her newly wed Bahu with open arms...Where each and every eye was on this beautiful couple...Most of girlz were cursing Geet for being such lucky...She has Maan... After Aarti..Geet spread rice pot with her right foot and entered KM with new hopes new dreams...Daddi and every elder gav the couple blessings from hearts.

One lady : Mrs Khuraana u r really lucky that u got such a beautiful bahu which is perfect match for ur Grandson and from family which matches u in reputation in society

Daddi Maa : Yes Mrs Verma after long wait at last my son got his right match ...aab humme bhi kush aaraam milega (she sighs)

Where every one s happy..There only one person was not happy who was really one among all Maan...He himself said yes to this proposal...why he was unhappy only he knows...Just Daddi Maa some where is aware about his condition only she can understand the pain he has inside.


After all functions most of guests had been left ... Just some staff members from KC wer here as for Daddi they were like own kids Pinky,Tasha,Aaddi,Romeo.and few more..Geet was with Daddi Pinky and Tasha...so Maan should be with boys.

Daddi : Pinky...Tasha beta its too late I think we should take Geet to her room.She may b much tired

Pinky : Ji Daddi Maa...per Maan Sir ko bhi Geet k pass hona chahea where is he ?

Daddi : Geet is with us so Maan should be with boys...hum dekhte hai...till then take her too room (petting Geet's cheek Daddi left to hunt Maan)

Daddi just said in front of Geet that Maan should be with boys But it was just to make her comfortable.. becoz she can't tell her that Maan should not be necessarily with boys He may be present in any lonely dark corner of this big mension.This thing can disturb Geet that why at this time he was not with all.

Daddi checked he was not with boys.

Daddi : Addi where is Maan (she asked to KC...GM)

Addi : Daddi Maa he is invisble as usual kahan milegay we don know only u can smell and find him (he teased)

Daddi : Ya only me can smell..humme to aadat ho gayi hai (sighed and left)

She hunted Maan every where but he was missing.Driver informed that Maan Sir went out of KM in car about half an hour back.

Daddi : Now what excuse I can make in front of Geet ..shaddi ki pehli raat he Maan gayab hai (ST)


Worried Daddi moved toward Maan's room where Geet was waiting for him.



In Room Geet with Pinky and Tasha

Tasha : Geet u r really special issi liye to Maan Sir tum per flat (fida) ho gaye warna kissi ladki ko line nahi detay .I m working with him for two years but no effect (she regrets )


Geet she was feeling shy as well as honored to be only girl Maan selected for him.

Daddi some how made her mind to face Geet and asked girlz to leave

Daddi : Betey hum abhi Maan k pass se aa rahe hai..his friends r not letting him come to room.But wo aa rahe hai ..plz beta wait for some time.Apko pata he hoga shaddi per dulhe dulhan ki kaise leg pulling ki jaati hai (what n excuse)


Geet : Ji Daddi Maa...I ll wait...no problem ..aap bhi thak gayi hongi u should also take rest (she said in hesitation)

Daddi : Its okey beta I ll stay with u till then

Geet : I m fine Daddi Maa don worry

Daddi : Theek hai beta but if u want any thing plz ask me...(she kissed her )



After this excuse Daddi left and Geet she was alone in this decorated huge ultra mod room.But where was Maan.

After three hours around 2 in the early morning .

Maan returned home..where poor girl was still waiting for him When she heard voice of his feet she jumped frm laying position and set on bed hiding her face in her legs.


She looked toward door with thief eyes . Maan was standing there.Looking at her blankly.After standing for about 10-15 minutes at last he came inside


He slowly came near to bed and set next to Geet

Geet : Bahut der ho gayi apko (she said slowly)

Maan: Mera intzaar kar rahi thi (Maan said in husky voice ) ha Geet ...bolo na..mera intzaar kar rahi thi

Geet : aap k muh se smell aa rahi hai...shraab pi apne

Maan : Ha pe hai...fir socha meri bibi akeli hogi..main bhi akela wo bhi akeli aaj mujhe tumhare sath rehna hai..isliye socha kyo na apni bibi k sath he pe-u...dekho I also bring this for u (he took out bottle of liquor from his side pocket )

She looked at him with shock what he was saying.She never expected this from him.How he can be such.

Geet : Maan aap (not able to speak)

Maan : Dekho Geet this is same brand which is Handa's Hotles's specialty..tumhare hotels ka sabse mash-hoor (known) brand.Yahi hai na dekho (he placed bottle in front of Geet )wait let me put in glass taste karke batana (he got up from bed to take glass.)

Maan was not able to place his feet firmly on floor . Lik can fall at any moment.Shocked Geet was not able to think what was this a stream of tears started to flow from her hazel eyes .




Hows this guys hop u ll like .Plz tell us.This is bit different .If u want to add more or hav suggestion plz tell .waiting for u

Comment and hit lik plz

Lov

Sonia



Precap

Maan Geet's SR


tense liberties r must
Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
omg me 😃😃😃😃
marriage in first part wow

bt my maanu is not happy
hope no girl in his past..😕


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omg dadi made him married in 9 days
y not dadi knows na kab maanu ka irada badal jaye😆😆
haww only dadi can smell him
ye kya baat hai b...😆😆😆😆

tasha is r8 geet is only 4 maanu
bt omg wt maanu did
made me 😲😲😲😲

poor geet first night pe hi 😭😭
dil ke armaan asoonon mai beh gye

babaji
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
my poor angel
saree armaan mitty main nil gay
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
nice start

but hope he does not mis behave

he should share whatever in his mind when he sober
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Posted: 12 years ago
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saare sapne fanna ho gaye.poor geet

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