SS- colors,link for my new story page-20 - Page 4

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till part 4
awesome story dear...
so very touching...
the way u have written really so fantastic...
Geet is blind and Maan is trying to make her think positive and make her mind to not give up...
the emotions involved are so beautifully described...
cont soon dear and pm me...

PS - thanks Shiku hon for posting this link int he updates thread...

I was stunned to silence in this update. I left the update mid way to fetch my diaries and there it lay. Same words. "...she asked me why i like chocolate flavor? I told her, chocolate isn't enitrely sweet. I guess i may not have liked it if it was sweet either. There is a tinge of bitterness at its end. You'd feel it when the delicacy melts in your mouth...especially in the last moment. For me somehow chocolate depicts life. A mixture of happiness and sadness. And the tinge of sadness is what makes it all the more beautiful.." These were the words I've written in my diary long ago. I was surprised to read this update hence. It felt like a deja vu for me. You ask me why i like this story na, it is because it mirrors my ideas and ideologies so very much apart from it being aesthetic. And again one line stole the show again..the mixture of green and blue. But what touched my heart and had me grinning is her comparision to his eye color. Sigh!

Uff lovely yaar..their bond is so great..love the update..

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

I was stunned to silence in this update. I left the update mid way to fetch my diaries and there it lay. Same words. "...she asked me why i like chocolate flavor? I told her, chocolate isn't enitrely sweet. I guess i may not have liked it if it was sweet either. There is a tinge of bitterness at its end. You'd feel it when the delicacy melts in your mouth...especially in the last moment. For me somehow chocolate depicts life. A mixture of happiness and sadness. And the tinge of sadness is what makes it all the more beautiful.." These were the words I've written in my diary long ago. I was surprised to read this update hence. It felt like a deja vu for me. You ask me why i like this story na, it is because it mirrors my ideas and ideologies so very much apart from it being aesthetic. And again one line stole the show again..the mixture of green and blue. But what touched my heart and had me grinning is her comparision to his eye color. Sigh!

Originally posted by: spvd

PS - thanks Shiku hon for posting this link int he updates thread...

My pleasure Deeps. I just wante people to know about this work and what better place than dialy updates thread? 😃

... Its beautifully written. We all know that every color symbolise sumthing... But we dont realate them with our emotions nd situations like this. Every person wish for a colorful life...but i dont think we realise the depth of wat they symbolise. Liked the way, their every feeling nd emotion is expressed through particular color. And after reading this, colors seems more valuable n COLORFUL.

Originally posted by: palindrome

I am very fond of chocolate..Every time my taste buds enjoy chocolate,It stimulates some philosophical nerves in my brain😆 I am glad to know there is someone else in world who is able to find meaning of life from bite of chocolate...Even I am shocked with the "exactness" by which your words matched with mine..i think you have written in much better way...and that makes me wonder whether i am missing some stories of yours???If you write on India forums then please let me know about your work..I would love to read each and everything...😊

p.s.- its mixture of green and red that produces brown..I think you accidentally wrote blue instead of red...😊

Oh yeah I said "Blue" instead of "Green" by mistake. I often do this..misplacing words I mean. Especially if I do two things at once, that happens😆
I still remember once I was making my project and typing a story and accidentally placed few lines of it in my report. Of course I noticed it immediately and removed it. Just imagine what would have been to our lecturer had she got to read about Maan and Geet in between the project🤣
Anyway I am rambling. Ignore me😆
Bingo! Even little things do simulate philosophical nerves but I always thought I am the odd one out. Now I have company😆
Yes I do write in IF. But frankly, they aren't this beautiful. Nor they have the feel this story has. If you still want to try, I would give you the link of the thread which has the collection of all that I have written. Here you go :)

Shika's Writing Corner...

Hey by the way, update the index and give page numbers of all the parts. It will help new readers :)