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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

I don't know if Geet would get her vision back, i don't know what you've planned for her..for them. But, for me this story is already perfect. She might not have her vision but she has light in her life, in the form of him. I don't know why but this update had me in wet eyes. Mind you, i never am a cry-reading-a-book, or cry-watching-a-movie person...
I will be frank. When he asked her how she found the red color, i felt a slight anger understanding that it is her blood. I wasn't angry on Her. In fact i am not sure whom i was angry at. Maybe destiny, maybe god. I don't know. I couldn't blame her entirely because i supposed she wanted to express her love towards him and hence did that. But when she explained why she'd actually done that, her musings, her uncertainty, the certainty at last about the color and what she finally had chosen to paint out of it, everything left me with wet eyes. This Maan and Geet are one of the few couples I am in love with. Awesome.



I would like to admit that i eagerly wait for your comment every time i update😳..your words makes me wonder whether i have really written this much good???or you are praising unnecessary???😆Your reading makes my writing "worth"😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Hey dear, your writing and ur story are jst perfect⭐️,... Havnt read such beautiful story yet.
Aftr reading almost hundreds of FFs i can easily say tht its something totally new.👏
The title nd the concept is jst awssmm. Cud never imagine Geet being blind nd Maan's total support nd Love for her...
U knw, i first read part 4 bfore reading the othr parts, nd the Green rose bit totally confused me...
Then when I came to part 3 almost aftr half of the update I was like WOW, the green rose bit now felt "Perfect".⭐️⭐️⭐️
Oh man! nd part 4 to made me speechless, Geet's helplessness was soo clearly nd beautifully portrayed by you, I jst fell in love wid the part nd the essence in it.
Kudos to you dear, really waiting for next parts... And do you have any other maneet writings too??? In case I missed them??????😕
Continue real soon😃

-LUV Anyaa😳


Thank you so much..No its my first and only work on "maaneet"...Hope i will write someday something else on my favorite couple after completing this one...😊By the way if you are following gurmeet's new show punarvivah,i am writing a comic os in that forum..If you want to read, i am giving the link below-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3166246
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: palindrome



I would like to admit that i eagerly wait for your comment every time i update😳..your words makes me wonder whether i have really written this much good???or you are praising unnecessary???😆Your reading makes my writing "worth"😊.



Rofl. Just wait and watch girl, soon you would receive praise from many more, let readers come and find this piece of work. Then you will get used to praise ;)
Oh and don't question the worth of your story. I read a lot of works here in IF, and out of them, I follow only hand picked ones, and comment in much more specific ones. Trust me I comment only if the author's work makes me comment. And believe me your each update till date compelled me to comment :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: palindrome


Thank you so much..No its my first and only work on "maaneet"...Hope i will write someday something else on my favorite couple after completing this one...😊By the way if you are following gurmeet's new show punarvivah,i am writing a comic os in that forum..If you want to read, i am giving the link below-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3166246

thnx for the link dear,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-1

fantastic start...!!!
...i got it...!
...geet is blind...!
Hai na...??

Add me to u'r pm list plz plz plz
Edited by ZAHRAN99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part-3
Just Beautiful...seriously...it was magnificent...the inner meanings are just soul-touching...!

u described her facial expression...in a beautiful way...!!!

Wow..! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-4

I haven't read such beautiful concept in IF...seriously...hats off to u...!

Seriously...blood...i really didn't see that coming...!


Your writing is amazing...but i won't tell u to make it a long story...cause the intensity in u'r writing speaks for itself that this concept doesn't need continuous flow to make a place in readers heart...cause it already has done that...atleast in me...

Love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZAHRAN99

Part-4

I haven't read such beautiful concept in IF...seriously...hats off to u...!

Seriously...blood...i really didn't see that coming...!


Your writing is amazing...but i won't tell u to make it a long story...cause the intensity in u'r writing speaks for itself that this concept doesn't need continuous flow to make a place in readers heart...cause it already has done that...atleast in me...

Love u


Thank you so much for all the appreciation..
Length of my updates is always an issue about which i always remains conscious ..As a reader,whenever my favorite story used to end i always wished for it to be little longer..but now when i have started writing..I have understood that unnecessary exaggeration of the events though makes the story longer but writing and especially words looses their "essence" sometimes..Thank you so much for NOT telling me to make it long...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

thnx for the link dear,...

pleasure is all mine😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cloud9.



Rofl. Just wait and watch girl, soon you would receive praise from many more, let readers come and find this piece of work. Then you will get used to praise ;)
Oh and don't question the worth of your story. I read a lot of works here in IF, and out of them, I follow only hand picked ones, and comment in much more specific ones. Trust me I comment only if the author's work makes me comment. And believe me your each update till date compelled me to comment :)


Please keep on commenting on my next updates too even if they don't compel you...It does not matter for me whether your comments will be positive or negative..you have complete right to criticize my work too..your criticism would help me to write better next time...😊

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