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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Cloud9.
Sigh. Happy sigh. I am totally in love with this fic i tell you. Like every other updates of yours, this update has few gem of dialogues. The blindfold analogy for instance and catching of hope. Aww. I am speechless. But what caught my attention was pink star. Star gazing is beautiful and..intimate isn't it? There's something beautiful in just watching the wonders of the galaxy standing in your balcony or lying on your terrace. Sigh. You reminded me of my childhood. Our ancestral village was on hills, and whenever you look at the sky, you'd not find an inch of sky. It is studded with stars literally. All thanks to light pollution in metropolitan cities, we are devoid of simple pleasures. Sigh. Girl, your updates always remind me of a page from my own life. Beautiful as usual!

Yes,Its hard to find star illuminated skies these days in the blinding lights of cities😕..anyways i am glad that my updates makes you walk down your memory lane..😊

ps- this chapter was not entirely pink based,there was black too..may be there were only two lines but that one line where maan says pink star is looking more beautiful because of blackness of night had made geet not to hate black atleast...

Edited by palindrome - 13 years ago

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

removed😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

well writen N very nice update.. looking forward for next update...

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Superb! Todays color symbolise 'perfect balance'. I think their relationship is also 'perfectly balanced' by both of them. When one is drown in negetivity, sorrow n darkness... The other will replace it with posivity, hope n light. I feel agar 'sun set' nahi hota toh we wouldnt have given that much importance to 'sun rise'. Geets view made maan to see the better side and not to hate orange color... Just like maan has brought new hope n confidence in her to get her eyesight back.

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Again a perfect update dear. Never knew orange cud be this significant.
Oww, so maan hated it because geet was wearing the "orange" coloured dupatta tht time.
Loved the way maan hated tht colour which witnessed his loves dreadful pain tht moment.
An once again got to knw new meaning nd the theory behind the Orange colour.
And also the reason behing taste of the Orange fruit.

You knw aftr reading the update I felt as if this SS needsa story telling too like how nd wat happened wid geet, in short the story need to move on besides colours, Bt then I thought Its jst perfect this way too, jst their colourful life. Beautiful... Pls Continue sooon😃

-LUV Anyaa😳

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
Again a perfect update dear. Never knew orange cud be this significant.
Oww, so maan hated it because geet was wearing the "orange" coloured dupatta tht time.
Loved the way maan hated tht colour which witnessed his loves dreadful pain tht moment.
An once again got to knw new meaning nd the theory behind the Orange colour.
And also the reason behing taste of the Orange fruit.

You knw aftr reading the update I felt as if this SS needsa story telling too like how nd wat happened wid geet, in short the story need to move on besides colours, Bt then I thought Its jst perfect this way too, jst their colourful life. Beautiful... Pls Continue sooon😃
-LUV Anyaa😳

Thank you so much for not asking to make it a proper story and accepting it the way i am writing it😊 I am trying to tell a little story but story telling is limited till it is perfectly mending with "color" i am writing about...

Any ways there are only two more colors left and it will end after that..I will complete my story in next two colors...

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thank you so much for not asking to make it a proper story and accepting it the way i am writing it😊 I am trying to tell a little story but story telling is limited till it is perfectly mending with "color" i am writing about...
Any ways there are only two more colors left and it will end after that..I will complete my story in next two colors...

Oww, very sad it ends aftr next two colours, plss try giving a beautiful epilogue na...
And eager to knw tht wats next aftr colours😉? Try starting some cute lovey dovey story as I thing u wud write it beautifully.

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
Oww, very sad it ends aftr next two colours, plss try giving a beautiful epilogue na...
And eager to knw tht wats next aftr colours😉? Try starting some cute lovey dovey story as I thing u wud write it beautifully.

Cute..lovey dovey story..hmm😆 there are many such wonderful stories going on india forums dear..I am so sorry but i am planning something entirely different after colors..hope you will like that too...and i am extremely glad to know you want to read more work of mine...😛Thank you so much...

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

So no lovey dovey one*pout*. well thts true there are many on IF bt thts wat we all love.
But thts really awsm tht u wanna try something different⭐️, ab to me aur eager😉

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
So no lovey dovey one*pout*. well thts true there are many on IF bt thts wat we all love.
But thts really awsm tht u wanna try something different⭐️, ab to me aur eager😉

Even I love such lovey dovey stories but when it comes to writing them..I suck at that area..😆Hope i won't disappoint your eagerness in future..😊