SS- colors,link for my new story page-20 - Page 2

Nice story
Beautifully written
Maan bringing colors in life of geet
Continue soon

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Oh god, you made my day again. When I was reading the update and when I read him caressing her cheeks with a rose, and her question about if it was a red rose, I was chanting repeatedly "No it must be green, it must be green" and ta-daa it is green. I googled it immediately. Even I didn't see a green rose before. I even searched for the meaning and found it symbolizes fertility. I thought this update might relate to something on those lines..having a baby and all that but you bought another meaning altogether. The last line, the very last line bought a huge grin on my face. Awesome!

PS: Updated my comment in the previous page too :)

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Oh god, you made my day again. When I was reading the update and when I read him caressing her cheeks with a rose, and her question about if it was a red rose, I was chanting repeatedly "No it must be green, it must be green" and ta-daa it is green. I googled it immediately. Even I didn't see a green rose before. I even searched for the meaning and found it symbolizes fertility. I thought this update might relate to something on those lines..having a baby and all that but you bought another meaning altogether. The last line, the very last line bought a huge grin on my face. Awesome!

PS: Updated my comment in the previous page too :)

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Oh man, I am falling for your writing. Initially I was over joyed to receive a part two, but then the first thought I got when I saw the update was about the color of the update since it was little difficult to read but girl the moment i started reading it then I understood why you used it. Ah, Man, I never thought I would say this but I love this Maan. Geet and her insecurities, the slight melancholy in her words is rightly understood and rightly portrayed..And I loved this idea of yours.. Using each color to depict what he feels for her.. aww I suddenly want to have millions of colors in the world so that I could get to read many such updates from you. Did I mention the sunshine symbolism? Oh god, that touched somewhere. Bravo girl!

IT WAS AWESOME DEAR

Girl, each and every story need not have twists and turns, the one which you are writing now, as you have mentioned is coming straight from your heart and may be that's why it touches the hearts of the readers whoever reads it :)
Ha-ha, I am no awesome reader. I just appreciate aesthetic works ;)

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I don't know if Geet would get her vision back, i don't know what you've planned for her..for them. But, for me this story is already perfect. She might not have her vision but she has light in her life, in the form of him. I don't know why but this update had me in wet eyes. Mind you, i never am a cry-reading-a-book, or cry-watching-a-movie person...
I will be frank. When he asked her how she found the red color, i felt a slight anger understanding that it is her blood. I wasn't angry on Her. In fact i am not sure whom i was angry at. Maybe destiny, maybe god. I don't know. I couldn't blame her entirely because i supposed she wanted to express her love towards him and hence did that. But when she explained why she'd actually done that, her musings, her uncertainty, the certainty at last about the color and what she finally had chosen to paint out of it, everything left me with wet eyes. This Maan and Geet are one of the few couples I am in love with. Awesome.

Hey dear, your writing and ur story are jst perfect⭐️,... Havnt read such beautiful story yet.
Aftr reading almost hundreds of FFs i can easily say tht its something totally new.👏
The title nd the concept is jst awssmm. Cud never imagine Geet being blind nd Maan's total support nd Love for her...
U knw, i first read part 4 bfore reading the othr parts, nd the Green rose bit totally confused me...
Then when I came to part 3 almost aftr half of the update I was like WOW, the green rose bit now felt "Perfect".⭐️⭐️⭐️
Oh man! nd part 4 to made me speechless, Geet's helplessness was soo clearly nd beautifully portrayed by you, I jst fell in love wid the part nd the essence in it.
Kudos to you dear, really waiting for next parts... And do you have any other maneet writings too??? In case I missed them??????😕
Continue real soon😃