MG SS: A Path To Reach You..!! Part 13: Pg 141 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for coming late wahi am least active these😳 part 4 is lovely ...thxs for the pm 🤗

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hey wahi at the end of part 5 i had tears in eyes😭 bechari geet she suffered loads...hope she ll accept maan...thxs for pm 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MissPurpleFreak

Such a great update! Poor geet has gone through soo much

Lol even my sister says turn that frown upside down hehe 😆
Continue soon x


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Originally posted by: -Priya01

Sorry for coming late wahi am least active these😳 part 4 is lovely ...thxs for the pm 🤗


aww its okay priya 🤗 and thank u so much 😃
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Originally posted by: -Priya01

hey wahi at the end of part 5 i had tears in eyes😭 bechari geet she suffered loads...hope she ll accept maan...thxs for pm 🤗


thank u so much priya 🤗
awww n i promise 2 make u smile soon 😃
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Part 6

Gayatri and Geet were on their way back from the temple when suddenly Gayatri had a slight trip causing her ankle to twist. Geet took her to a nearby bench and made her sit and started to look around for any taxis.

Geet (worried): Maa, I don't see any taxis here

Gayatri (in pain): don't worry beta, nothing happened.. we both will manage to get home slowly, lets go.

Geet: no Maa, you are not moving from here unless we get a lift

Gayatri knew there was no point arguing with Geet, as when Geet has to show her stubbornness, no one can win against her, so she remained quiet.

A posh white car was driving pass, when the lady inside saw a young girl asking for a lift.

Lady: driver, stop the car

Driver: yes ma'am

The lady stepped out the car and came near the young girl.

Lady: what happened dear, you seem to be worries, everything okay?

Geet: woh.. actually we were returning from the temple and my mom has twisted her ankle and she can't walk back home and there are no taxis here, no one is ready to stop to give us a lift, we've been here for a while

Lady: beta calm down, don't worry, I'll drop you home.

Geet (happily): you will, aww thank you so much

Lady: my pleasure darling, by the way what is your name?

Geet: ji my name is Geet

Lady: Geet, what a pretty name, just like you

Geet: thank you (she said with a smile)

Okay so now they were all in the car on the way home, Gayatri sat in the middle and the Lady and Geet on either side at the back.

Gayatri: thank you so much for the lift

Lady: if one more time you or Geet say thank you I'll get mad (she said smiling, which made Geet and Gayatri smile too).

They reached home and Geet ran to get some first aid for her mom, the Lady was quite impressed with Geet, the way she cared for her mother, the way she spoke, the way she does everything so fast and efficiently.

Geet applied cream to Gayatri's ankle, Payal also came home after picking up Simi from school, she saw Gayatri feet all swollen and got worried.

Payal: Maa what happened.

Gayatri explained the incident to Payal.

The Lady was really in aww seeing the love for one another these people had. Geet saw the lady smiling to herself and then she suddenly slapped herself on the head.

Geet: oh my god, I'm so stupid, and I am really sorry, you have helped us so much and we did not even ask if you want anything.

Lady: no no its fine...

Geet (stops her in between): if you leave today without eating then i'll get mad Dadi...

Geet stopped herself from completing her sentence, even she did not know how Dadima slipped out her mouth. The Lady who seemed to have understood her look and said:

Lady: it's okay beta, you can call me Dadima, I'll really like it

Geet got emotional and hugged Dadima, whilst Dadima also hugged her back.

Payal was on her way to the kitchen when Geet stopped her.

Geet: Bhabhi you sit and talk, I'll go prepare the snacks.

Payal: okay, just give me a shout if you need help.

Dadima, Gayatri and Payal were sitting in the hall chatting away, when Dadima spoke:

Dadima: your daughter Geet is a real gem, which ever house she goes to, she'll sparkle it

Gayatri and Payal faces saddened, Payal placed her hand on Gayatri's shoulder, Dadima noticed the expressions..

Dadima: what happened, did I say something wrong?

Payal: no Dadima, you did not say anything wrong, bus Geet ke saath hamesha se bura hota aaya hai..

Dadima: kya matlab?

Gayatri: actually, Geet is not my daughter, she's my Bahu, the wife of my late son Prem who dies whilst on the battle field

Gayatri pointed to Prem's picture which was hanged on the wall with a garland around it.

Dadima: oh my, I am really sorry, I did not know.

Payal: aap sorry kyun bol rahi hai Dadima.

Gayatri explained how Geet and Prem's marriage took place and how things went on after wards.

Dadima: poor girl, she has suffered so much at this tender age, and I should also praise you and your family who stood by Geet when her own blood relatives did not.

Gayatri: she's become my daughter now, all I wish for now is to see her married and well settled, and I know Prem also wishes the same (she said whilst looking at his picture).

Payal: we all wish to see her happy, but she has been through so much that she is scared of making new relationships

Dadima: you cannot blame her, I pray that she soon finds someone who will love her immensely and respect her too.

Payal notices Geet coming out of the kitchen and nudges Gayatri, as Gayatri knew Geet does like this topic being discussed so she quickly changes the topic.

They all chat a little more whilst enjoying the snacks prepared by Geet.

Dadima: alright now I'll take your leave, thank you so much

Geet walked with Dadima to the car and gave her a tight hug, she felt some unknown peace when she hugged Dadima, Dadima patted her back and gave her a kiss on the forehead.

After 2 weeks at Khurana Mansion:

Dadima had called Dev, Naintara and Anwesha to the hall, as she wanted to discuss something important with them.

After they all had gathered in the hall Dadima told them how she met Geet and found her totally suitable for Maan. All 3 seemed pretty impressed by Dadima's words and they all felt that this maybe the girl made for Mr Maan Singh Khurana. All were eagerly awaiting his arrival so that they can bring this topic up.

Anwesha: but Dadima who will bring the topic up, you know how Maan bhai reacts whenever this topic is brought up.

Dadima: don't worry, I'll handle everything. If he is Maan Singh Khurana, then I am his Dadima.

After sometime Maan had entered with Raj and Priya, as they decided that today they will tell the family about Geet and Maan's feelings. Everyone sat together in the hall chatting away when Dadima, Dev, Anwesha and Naintara were all nudging each other, and whispering things to one another.

Maan: Dadima, what are you all up to?

Dadima: nothing beta

Dadima (thinking): hmm let me start off with Naintara, if she brings the topic up Maan cant say anything to her.

Dadima: actually Maan, Naintara wanted to say something to you.

Dev, Naintara and Anwesha were all shocked hearing this from Dadima, she just said that she will handle the situation and here she threw the ball into Naintara's court.

Naintara (shocked): me, Dadima...

Dadima gave her a nod and Naintara was fumbling with her words.

Naintara (fumbling): Maan bhai woh Ahana wanted to say something to you, but she fell asleep early today so she'll tell you tomorrow now.

Dev let out a little giggle which annoyed Naintara, so she smirked to herself and thought why not give the lime light to Dev.

Naintara: Dev you told me you also had something to say to Maan bhai...remember...

Dev (chocked on his snack): What.. me???!!!

Naintara: yes Dev you!!! Remember you were eagerly waiting for Maan bhai to come home, you wanted to discuss something with him.

Dev (stuttering): woh, Bro I wanted to say that... The atmosphere at the office today was really good, don't you think?

Nainatara and Anwesha tried really hard to burst into laughter, Dev was glaring angrily at them and Dadima just hit her hand on her head at Dev's stupidity.

Maan gave a 'what the hell look' at Dev whilst Raj and Priya were just looking from one person to another.

Maan (sarcastically): Dev was it your first day at KC today? This is what you wanted to tell me???

Dev just looked down and he knew he made a stupid excuse and then he looked up to see Anwesha showing her tongue at him.

Dev (thinking): now watch Anwesha what I do (he said smirking).

Dev: actually Bro even Anwesha wanted to say something to you, she's been pestering me to call you home as soon as possible.

Now Anwesha was the one to choke on snack, she shot daggers at Dev who was smiling at her. She looked towards Dadima for help but Dadima gave her a helpless look.

Anwesha: Bhai I wanted to say that... I love you

Maan: acha??!!!

Anwesha: yes Bhai, woh I have not said it to you in a few days so that's why. (She said innocently).

Dadima (thinking): these youngsters are useless, they're scared of Maan Singh Khurana, well if he is Maan Singh Khurana, then I am his Dadima.

Dadima (clearing her throat): Maan, I wanted to say something to you.

Maan: now you too Dadima, please it better be something important as I want to say something important to you all. (He looked kinda pissed off, listening to everyone's excuses, he knew they were all up to something).

Dadima (hesitantly): woh Maan bete I wanted to say that... I have selected a girl for you (she said the last half in one breath).

Maan, Raj and Priya were shocked listening to this, and Dadima, Dev, Naintara and Anwesha were awaiting Maan's reaction.

When the sentence sunk in Maan knew he had to open up and say this to Dadima now before it was too late. He looked towards Raj and Priya who also gave him a nod to speak up.

Maan (in a low voice): Dadima, actually I wanted to say that... that... I saw someone, and that...

Raj: argh stop right there Maan, you won't be able to.. let me take over.

Raj: Dadima: at my wedding Maan saw this girl, her name is Geet and she is Priya's best friend. And Maan has fallen in love with her.

Dadima (surprised): kya!! Maan the girl I have selected for you, her name is also Geet

Naintara: OMG can these 2 Geet's be the same person?

Anwesha: I hope so, Priya Bhabhi do you have any picture of her?

Priya: umm yeah one second, I should have one in my phone somewhere.

Priya skimmed through the pictures on her phone when she found an image of Geet and Simi.

Priya: yes found one (she gave the phone to Dadima).

Dadima: yes she is the one I met a few days back, she was on her way back home with her mother. And we have met a few more times at the temple. She is a gem of a person, to be honest when I first saw her; I knew she was made for my Maan.

Maan smiled to himself listening to this, which was noticed by everyone but no one teased him, because it has been years since they last saw Maan smile. Everyone was truly happy for him.

Everyone was passing Priya's phone from one person to another, they all were saying one thing that Maan and Geet are meant for one another.

Maan: but Dadima, there's something you should know..

Dadima (understood what he wanted to say) bete I know everything, Gayatri told me everything and she also told me that they are looking for a suitable young settled guy for Geet.

Maan: but Dadima, Geet is hesitant about making new relationships.

Dadima: yeah, even I have realised this after meeting her a few time, but she has really charming nature, I am sure she will adjust easily in our household, and we all will keep her happy... right??

Everyone: RIGHT!!!!

Naintara: yes Maan bhai, we all will give Geet Bhabhi all the love and respect that she deserves

Dadima: okay done, tomorrow morning I'll call Gayatri and ask for Geet's hand.

Next Morning:

Everyone was settled in the hall, Raj and Priya had also come, Dadima dialled the number and they sat impatiently hoping for the best. The phone at the Sharma's was picked up and Dadima put the phone on loud speaker

Dadima: hello, it's me Savitri

Geet (happily): Dadima! How are you? How is your back pain now? Did you rest as soon as you got home? Did you take your medicines? Hello Dadima, why are you not saying anything?

Dadima (laughing): Geet bete, I'll only speak if you give me a chance to answer.

The Khurana's were impressed seeing the bond between Dadima and Geet, the way she asked about her health all in one breath. Maan was in dreamland listening to his Geet's voice. Raj nudges him and brought him back from his dreamland.

Dadima: Geet I am perfectly fine now, you don't worry.

Geet: okay Dadima, but please take care of yourself..

Dadima: I will

Geet: promise?

Dadima: promise, acha Geet would you pass the phone to your mother please I wanted to talk to her.

Geet: sure Dadima, one minute.

Gayatri: hello Maa ji, kaisi hai app?

Dadima: hum bilkul theek hai, Geet ne toh phone utake hi uski question chalu ho gaye.

Gaytari: haan she's like that cares for everyone but herself

Dadima: Gayatri I know someone who will take care of Geet all his life, who will love her immensely, who will stand by her like a showdown, protect her from all evils.

Gayatri (with a ray of hope): Maa ji..

Dadima: yes Gayatri, I am not just praising this person as he's my grandson but I have seen many people in life, good and bad and I know my grandson really well, I can see the love he in his eyes for Geet.

Dadima looked at Maan who sat next to her, she placed her free hand on his and blinked her eye lids telling him that all will be okay as she read the nervousness on his face. Everyone was really happy, as so far so well.

Gayatri: ji your grandson

Dadima: yes actually he first saw Geet and Raj and Priya's wedding. Raj and Maan are best friends from childhood and since then Geet has made an impact on Maan's life. My grandson who did not think about anything else apart from his work has now felt the greatest feeling of all. He has fallen in love with Geet.

Gayatri: but Maa ji, does he know that Geet is a widow.

Dadima: yes he knows, and his feelings have not changed in fact they have only increased.

Gayatri (happily): really, may God bless him.

Dadima: toh, can we come to your house to officially ask for Geet's hand?

Gayatri: Maa ji, you don't know how happy I am today, can you all come the day after tomorrow, till then I'll speak to Geet, you know how she always tries to avoid this topic.

Dadima: I understand, and please do not force her, we will all respects Geet's decision.

Everyone nods accordingly; they all understood how difficult it would be for Geet to make new relationships can come into a new household.

Gayatri: ji, I don't know why but I have this feeling that she will accept this proposal. Oh can you please send Maan's photo.

Dadima: sure and let's pray for the best, so we will meet you the day after tomorrow.

Gayatri: ji.

Precap: Gayatri, Payal & Priya talking to Geet, and Geet's point of view.

And maybe a MAANEET meeting (that depends on the likes and comment).

Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Superb update Partner🤗
Geet is so caring towards her family luv the bond she share wid her family and her mom gayatri understands her so well😛
From the first meeting only dadi is impressed with geet and they shared the special bond..after knowing all about Geet's past she wanted to make her DIL that was so sweet of her😃
luvd the way everyone was fumbling and passing it to each other their excuses were so hilarious🤣
Finally when they came to know Dadi maa and maan have selected the same girl they all were so excited and i was just imagining maan all happy and smiling to himself😳😆
luvd Dadi maa when she was convincing and assuring gayatri that maan is perfect for geet and he will keep her happy always..they are meant of each other maan and geet😊
Hope geet accepts the proposal excited to know geet's point of view😳
Thanks a lot partner for the awesome long update as always beautifully written..PERFECT🤗
Luvd it...Pls update soon❤️

PS: partner it's more than 100 words comment now i want a biggg rply😳😆

Edited by ..tanya.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely update
har taraf se connection😉
waiting eagerly for next one.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini28

wow lovely update

har taraf se connection😉
waiting eagerly for next one.


thanks shalu

well maaneet are meant 2 b, so connections are bound 2 arise 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update dear...i am so glad Maan's whole family is happy with this and even Geet's family is ready...sooner or later, Geet will alos accept Maan's feelings but the first step is an environmen which is conducive to it...

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