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Posted: 12 years ago
part 19
awesome part...
my God Maan is so naughty...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely story. read it all in one go. nice concept. above all the photos along with the update was great. maan making everything to patao geet. waiting for more such romantic moments. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVE THE WAY MAAN IS PURSUING HER - HE IS PLAYING HOT AND COLD
AND THE WAY HE HELD HER HAND UNDER THE TABLE AND SHE COULD NOT DO ANYTHING
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Maan is trying to make Geet think of him and her feelings
It seems to be working well so far...
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naughty maan
full of masti
teasing geet n making her think about him
gud going maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
waiting fr nxt prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
so geet feeling something fr maan...not bad geet...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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H2 - 20





Geet went to get medicines, wen she was going to kitchen to get water, suddenly some one pull her and pinned to te wall

Geet was shocked : MAANJI

Maan who saw Geet going to Dadi ki room, hold her and pinned her on te wall

Geet was shocked seeing Maan so close , Maan was staring at her , Geet avoid seeing Maan , Geet try to move Maan put his hand on te wall, again she try to move from other side, Maan trapped her between him and te wall, Geet don't know wat to do, she divert her gaze and looking here and there to avoid him




Maan watching her restless , Geet trying to not look at Maan ki eyes, Maan hold her chin with his finger raise her face to look at her eyes, Geet look at him, at once she saw his eyes, she started to stared at him. Geet drown in Maan ki eyes.




Both are drowning in each other and searching they hiden feelings. Maan slowly put her hair strand behind her ear , caressing her cheeks, Geet closed her eyes feeling some feelings in heart, but she don't want to realize it




Maan came close to her still they body didt touch, Maan breath was fanning her, Geet came back to sense, and shocked to see they position, felt guilty,




Geet : pls Maanji ,

Maan : wat Geet

Geet : pls leave me, Dadi is waiting for me

Maan : wat I will get if I leave u

Geet : wat

Maan : nothing

Maan left her and pulled himself away from her, at once Geet felt free from him, she run to kitchen, holding her heart

Geet (st) : wat is happening with me wen ever Maanji cums near me I feel some thing, wat kind of feel is tis, I cant avoid him , no I should not think like tis. I cant see him in pain. I have to talk to him, he cant spoil his life with me, who don't have nothing else to give him




She calm herself, and wipe her tears and came to hall to give te medicine to Dadi


Maan and Dadi sitting in te hall and discussing some business issues, Geet

Dadi : hare Geet u came , she took te medicine and had it

Geet try to go to her room

Dadi : Geet sit with us wat u going to do now

Geet : nothing dadi

Dadi : then cum here,

she made to sit Geet to sit with Maan,

Dadi : Maan beta u can take tis project as Tandon is my old friend

Maan : hmm

Dadi : and one more if ur dadaji have not proposed me, Tandon have been proposed me

Maan : Dadi

Geet : Dadi so many have proposed u in ur college time

Dadi blushed ,

Geet : oh god Dadi ur blushing

Dadi : chup

Geet : then say ur love story naa Dadi

Dadi : we can deny our destinty, it knows whom to make together in one tie, we cant avoid it, wat ever we try we cant change our destinty

Dadi saw both of them, Both looking at each other , Geet avoid her gaze on Maan and looking at Dadi

Maan was staring at her, he smirks and went near Geet , pretending talking to Dadi, Geet can feel his presence so close to her



Maan came close to Geet , took his hand to back and started to touch her waist, Geet felt like current passed through, she jumped at once

Dadi : wat happen Geet

Geet : noth in nothing Dadi

Dadi smiles and started to talk with Maan, with out knowing wat his naughty grandson doing at her back with his wife


Maan slowly caress Geet ki waist and started to go slowly towards her arms, Geet felt goosebumps all over her body, Geet was wriggling to escape from him, but didt feel to create scene in front of Dadi


But Maan was enjoying teasing her, he started to caress her back now, Geet was struggling controlling her heart beats which increasing by Maan ki touch. Geet pleading through her eyes, Maan cant deny it, he left her

Anni came : Dadi u said we have to go for shopping

Dadi : yaa Geet beta u too get ready

Maan : im also cuming

Dadi holds her heart : Maan u and shopping

Maan : why any problem

Anni : no bhai wow thanku bhai, I decide to buy so much

Maan smiles : sure princess and stares at Geet, who knotting her duppata



Dadi : Geet beta go get ready

Geet : dadi im not cuming

Dadi : wat then wat u wear for te party

Geet : no dadi I have some of my old dress

Anni : Geet cum yar first time we are going to shopping with family why u denying

Dadi : Geet wat kind of wife u r , ur husband is taking u to shopping but ur denying it

Geet : but Dadi

Maan in stern voice : Geet get ready fast or else

Geet scared at him,

Anni hugs Geet : pls Geet for me

Geet smiles at her and went to get ready

Maan look at her



Geet murmured : dust dhanav


Maan sat in te car, Geet sat back with dadi and anni sat in front, Maan was glaring at her , but she avoid looking at him.


Mall

Te whole shopping, Geet was mingling with Anni to avoid Maan,


Maan (st) : u u r avoiding me Geet how long we will see, wait till evening I will make tis night so special for u, we will remember tis night forvever. Tis night is going give a meaning to our relation


Three of then selecting some dress Geet was least interested

Maan went out as he got a call, wen he entering into te shop he saw a sari, brown colour with golden border, he imagine it on Geet,

Maan : beautiful , he smiles

Maan ask te sg, to pack it

They all went to jewel shop

Dadi ; Geet, Anni till now I didt get any jewels for u, so now select wat u both like

Anni was selecting , Geet was standing still

Dadi : Geet beta tis is too, bad, dress also u didt select, now tis too, wat happen to u

Geet : nothing dadi I don't know wat to select , first time im cuming here so I don't know to select dadi

Maan felt a bang on his heart,

Dadi ask sgs to show some new collections, Gee t was standing, Maan went near her,

Dadi : Maan u came see Maan , Geet not selecting anything , u help her I will select for Anni

Maan : sure Dadi

Geet : Dadi, she look at Maan who glaring t her



Geet (st) : now wat happen to him

Maan : dare u say some thing like tat again

Geet : wat I said

Maan glared at her, Geet swallow her saliva

Maan saw te sets, he took one set and placed it on her neck, Geet was nervous first with Maan ki closeness , then te way he placing te set on her neck still caressing her neck, giving goosebumps, to her, Geet closed her eyes, and hold her duppata in her fist




Maan whispered on ear : open ur eyes Geet, see how it looks on u

Geet open her eyes and saw Maan on te mirror

Maan : no it is not nice, I will get another one

Like tat Maan went on rejecting many after placing on her neck and caressing . Geet lost herself in his touch

Dadi : wat happen Maan did u select something

Maan : ah Dadi, he showed te piece which eh selected at first and smirk at Geet

Geet (st) : dust dhanav , wat he think of himself,wait I will show whom im



Dadi : ok cum lets go


Dadi and anni moved first Geet was walking behind , suddenly some one bump on her, she loose te balance and try to fall , but Maan holds her and pull her towards him and hugs her, Maan who came behind her saw te man pushing her and at once he holds her Geet too got scared and hugs him, Maan caress her back like soothing him ,





Geet came back to sense , pull herself from Maan

Maan : r u ok

Geet : hmm

Maan was fuming and saw te person who bump on her

Man : sorry miss

Maan punch him on his face, and started to hit him

Geet was shock to see Maan hitting tat guy

Geet hold his hand : pls Maanji leave him, it was mistake

Maan glared at her , Geet was scared to see MAAN ki fuming eyes,

Geet : pls Maanji

He at once left him, but look at his bgs, who understand wat he want to do with tat guy

Dadi and anni came there

Dadi : wat happen Geet

Geet :nothing dadi I slipped Maanji hold me

Dadi : thanku god, cum we will move

They left te mall, Maan was fuming , Geet wink at Anni, Anni smiles

Anni : bhai bhai

Maan : hmm

She became silent

Maan calm himself : wat princess

Anni : im hungry

Dadi : yes Maan we will go to some restaurant

Maan : hmm

They all went to restaurant

Ani : why no one is there

Geet(st) : coz he booked te whole restaurant

Dadi : ask u brother he have booked te whole restaurant

Maan went inside

Anni and dadi sat in one side, Geet have no other option sat with Maan

They order they food, and started to eat, Maan hold her hand , tightly like assuring himself she is fine. Geet can sense his restlessness, so she didt pull her hand,



They reached km



Friday night,

Everyone getting ready for te party, Nakul came to Geet ki room

Nakul : GEET Baby

Geet : ji kaka

Nakul : Dadi ask me to give tis packet to u

Geet : ji thanku u

Geet took te packet , close te door went inside and ope it , she saw a brown sari, with sleeveless blouse

Geet : dadi give tis me, but how can I wear tis, but I cant deny her , im going to party for first time, and tat too with tis blouse, babaji nowadays u r testing me so much



She started to wear it


Maan's room

Maan is getting ready, he smirks



Maan : now how u will deny my gift for u, at once I saw te sari I brought for u, but u will deny if I give it to u, so I give through Nakul saying Dadi give it

Im waiting to see u in tat sari Geet, on tis specila day

He took Guru ki photo frame



Maan : Guru today is so special day for me, say me all te best, im going to confess my feelings to Geet, be with me Guru.

He kept te photo frame before kissing it

Maan : U know Geet, MSK first time feeling nervous , wat u have done to me Geet


In te hall, Dadi , Anni sitting waiting for te two, Maan came in black

Anni : wow bhai u r looking so handsome, hot

Maan kissed her on her forehead : u too looking like princess

Anni : thanku bhai



Dadi : were is Geet, why she is taking so much time

Maan : Dadi I see her

Maan went to Geet ki room

Dadi : Anni I think Maan is taking steps to move on with Geet

Anni : yes Dadi I too thinking tat only. I will be so happy if they both move on


Geet ki room,



Maan knock te door, he didt get any response, he saw it was open, he open te door and went inside , he at once stood numb seeing Geet I sari, he lost himself,



Geet saw Maan and tilt her head down in shyness, her cheeks colour changed into red,



Maan went near her, Geet was so nervous to face him, she is sweating , Maan went near her, but Geet took her step backward, Maan went near her and try to touch her, at tat time, Anni barged in

Anni : u both wat u doing, but stops looking at Geet

Anni : Geet u r looking so beautiful,

Geet blushed

Anni : Geet u r blushing, oh god , ok ow I will do little make up for u

Geet : no Ani it is ok

Anni : no way bhai u go out we will cum in 10 mins

Maan left te room, before cursing Anni for entering In wrong timing

Anni made Geet to sit in front of te mirror, changed her earing, did little touch up, , applied lip gloss, sindoor on her head

Anni : now u look perfect, sure Geet bhai going to be flat on u




Both descend down, Maan was mesmerized seeing her , he was looking at her from head to toe like burning her with his gaze, Geet was so nervous to see , him so she avoid to look at him




Dadi hugged her , : u r looking so beautiful beta, kiski nazar laga

Anni : bhai stop drooling on ur wife,

Maan came back to sense ,and felt embrassed, Geet too saw here and there

Anni : we are getting late

Dadi : were u got tis sari Geet it was so lovely

Geet was shocked to hear tis from Dadi, she try to ask her, but Maan cuts her

Maan : we have to go, and smirks at Geet



Geet at once gussed it was all Maan ki plan

All went out side, Geet try to go , Maan holds her hand

Maan : u r looking so beautiful Geet, I think u love my gift, he left her and went outside

Geet was shocked thinking wat had happen just now, and she open her mouth hearing MAAN KI plan: dust dhanav


Te whole drive, Maan was looking at Geet who was sitting at back with dadi, she turns her gaze to avoid Maan


They reached te party venue






















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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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