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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
maan taking step towards geet...
waiting fr peeloo bt i hope maan wont be getting any shock like in the show...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow such a lovely update. maan teasing geet like hell oh i just adored it. waiting to know maans surprise for geet. will maan confess his feelings to geet waiting eagerly continue soon. precap is teasing
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H2 - 21





They reached te party


As te BGS open te car, Dadi got down first , the Anni and Geet and last Maan got down, everyone was shock to see two girls with MSK, they all know who Savetri khurana is, then who is tat two girls, all medias surrounded them, Anni and Geet was shocked to see te medias, Geet got feared and hold Maan ki arms, Maan saw her fear and hold her in his embrace tightly




Rep 1: hello Mr.Khurana , surprise to se two girls with u

Rep 2 : wat relation they have


Maan holds Geet and Anni with other arm and took them inside, BGs make a circle around them, Maan went inside, Tandon welcomes them. Everyone gaze went on MSK, and was shock to see two girls In his arms


Maan signaled his BGS to let te reporters, at once reporters surrounds him


Maan : hello everyone, before ur questions I have to introduce three beautiful ladies in my life, first Savetri devi singh khurana , u ALL KNOW , MY Dadi,

Rep 1: yaa but, stop seeing Maan ki glare

Maan : she is Anwesha singh khurana my younger sister

Rep 2: wat u having sister , it is surprise for us, and she

Maan : she is my wife MRS.GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA





Everyone was shocked to hear tis, mainly girls, , they heart broken hearing TE GREAT MSK GOT married

Rep 3: wat ur wife, wen u got married

Rep 4: why so suddenly

Maan : excuse us he eye Adi to handle them and moved , adi too nodes his head


Tondon : Savetri I didt expert tis from u, u got grandson married but u didt invite us, once again u broke my heart




Geet and Anni giggled hearing him

Tandon : atlast u two beautiful girls smiled

Dadi : no tendon, it happen suddenly, so I cant invite anyone, but I planning for a big reception

Tandon : then ok


Geet was shocked to hear tis, here she is planning to go away from Maan , but Dadi planning for reception nd more over Maan introducing her as his wife to everyone, wat will happen after I moved on , everyone will question him, and Dadi , they have to answer them, and Anni coz of me they have to suffer. babaji now wat I will do, but Maanji should get a better life, he deserves some one, yes Geet u should not back out from ur decision


Now it will hurt every one, but wen Maanji get some one in his life, they will forget me, I should not think any thing else now, rather than going away from they life, wat ever happens


Dadi was talking with her friends, Geet and Anni was standing alone as they don't know any one there

Dadi : Geet , Anni cum here

They came to her, dadi intro them to everyone


Dadi ki one of te friend: Savetri ur bahu is looking so beautiful , tas why he delayed his marriage to get a angel like girl hmm

All giggled, Geet was feeling so nervous to stand with them


Even though Maan was talking to his client , but is gaze was on Geet, Geet can sense it, te way he looking at her, burning her skin,



Geet saw him and he wink at her, Geet at once tilt her head down, wen ever MAAN came near her she will be moving to Anni or Dadi pretending like talking to them. Then they had they dinner


Maan signaled her to cum, but she avoid his look , Maan glared at her, but she didt look at him



Geet : dadi I want to go to washroom

Dadi : yes beta , see they left

Geet : ok Dadi

Without seeing Maan she went to wash room

Maan got irritated (st) : here I craving to talk to her, but madam avoiding me, ok we will see how long she will avoid me


Maan went to Dadi And Anni

Maan : Dadi u and Anni leave it is late, I will bring Geet

Anni : why bhai u having date with ur wife hmm

Maan smiled at her

Anni : hmm enjoy bhai

Dadi : khush ragho beta

They both went leaving Geet and Maan alone

Geet came out and saw Dadi and Anni missing, and most of them left te party, and her eyes went to search Maan


Geet (st) : oh god were everyone went elaving me alone, were I will search them, Maanji he too left me, how cum he left me, always cuming behind me, wen I need him he wont show his face , DUSTDHANAV


At tat time a waiter came and gave a note to her

Geet open te letter


Geet cum to next hall

Maan

Geet thought who it will be, why they playing, but it written Maan

She ask te waiter te way to next hall and went to tat hall. It was so dark, she got scared , she turn to leave , but suddenly hlods her hand , she started to scream

Geet : ah ah ah aha h

Maan close her mouth : CHUP BIKUL CHUP





Geet open her one eyes and saw Maan, suddenly lights came , she pulled herself way from him, and saw te place . it was decorated with flowers and candles, and table placed with two chairs,


Geet : Maanji were IS Dadi and Anni

Maan : they left

Geet : wat they left but without me

Maan : im there for u

Geet stared at him, but then she turn her gaze

Maan : are u scared to be alone with me

Geet : no mei, who, she tur to leave , but Maan holds , placed his hand on her bare stomach and bring her close to him, now Geet back touching his chest




Music stars , PEELOON



Geet moved from him , Maan followed her and placed a flower on her back, and his lips on te flower and he started to caress it from her back to her neck, then her shoulder , he turn her to face him and kissed her cheeks, Geet was staring at him and drowning in him, she didt react anything she didt know wat to do , to push him or feel him, so she stood numb, her heart was pacing so fast,



Geet was shocked , her heart beat started to raise ,she holds Maan hand , try to pull it, but his hold was so strong, then he came near her ears and nuzzle it with his nose, kissed her hairs , then her ears, Geet close her eyes and hold her pallu In her fist





Maan was burning her with his look and touch, both looking at each other like locking them inside them. Then Maan slowly placed his lips on her forehead , Geet closed her eyes, He kept his lips there for some time, wen she didt react , he slowly came down, kissing her one eye, and then te other , then he stop staring at her








Geet open her eyes to see him, He saw her lips , he came close to her lips, his breath was fanning her lips and burning it, he holds her hands with his hands and he placed his lips on her lips, wen he didt get any reaction he took his lips away from her and stares at her


Maan : Geet open ur eyes Geet , I want to see u wen I say my heart


At tat time she cant feel anything as, but she know wat Maan trying to say , he is filling her with his love, she too losing herself in his passion. but wen he touch her lips with his , she back to sense , and saw him, he pushed him with all her strength, Maan was shocked, Maan first struggle but then hold te balance and look at her




Geet started to cry holding her mouth: pls Maanji pls leave me , I cant bear it

Maan was shocked : Geet in low voice

Geet : don't touch me, pls stay away from me

Maan got angry : why Geet im ur husband , I cant touch, he holds her shoulder and started to shake




Geet was crying : pls Maanji , pls she is trying to take his hand from him

Maan : I cant touch u say Geet, u wont became ashes if I touch say me, he was fuming seeing her deny


Geet pushed : yes I feel disgust wen u touch do u hear, I feel like leech is sulking me ,



Maan was shocked and felt hurt hearing her words , he stood rooted at tat place staring at her


Geet can se te pain in his eyes, but she she have to do tat for him


Geet : u have no right to touch me Maanji pls stay away from me, I cant take it any more pls


Maan holds her chain, : im ur husband Geet, though we didt have any proper wedding, but we did all rituals together



Geet : marriage rituals cant make two person together , for tat we need our heart

Maan : then im agreeing I want u to be in my life, I want to move on with u,

Geet : no it cant happen

Maan : why Geet

Geet : yes Maanji I don't want to give any fake reason, but u should move o in ur life, u will get a better person than me, who fulfill all ur needs, and who fit in ur life


Maan was getting angry hearing her words


Geet : yes Maanji a better person who only give happiness to u, now like me who only have pain , nothing else

Maan : dammit stop it Geet, stop ur non sense , why cant u understand, I want in my life , I want to move o with u, I want ur heart

Geet : no I cant

Maan : why

Geet : coz my heart is not with me, my heart is not with me, im a lifeless soul who can give nothing to u


she sat on te floor crying, Maan was heart was crying to see His Geet like tis




Geet wipes her tears : pls Maanji u move on

Maan closed his eyes and open it : now I didt ask wat is better for me, u say wat is ur answer for me

Geet was silent and turned her face


Maan was so angry seeing her turning her face, he holds her and made her to stand, she wriggling


Maan : don't turn ur face Geet , no one no one denied MSK, wat u think of urself, I came to u, so ur thinking im begging u ah, wat u r think of urself, I cant get any other girls in my life if u leave me





Geet stop her wriggling and stares at him,

Maan : I cant get wat I want , now u want to go away from me ah, then go , he left her and turn his back


Geet was shocked yes she want him to move on but hearing it from his mouth she was shocked


Geet : Maanji




Maan showed his finger and stop her , he left te place at once, Geet sat down and started to cry


Geet : why babaji why u doing tis to me, wat I did , u r punishing me, first my parents left me, then Guru , and now Maanji, I know I made him to go from my life, but wat I will do, I was scared , I cant see again some one leaving me alone in tis world, I cant bear any more loss babaji , u r punishing me naa, then do it, I wont break coz im already broken into pieces, nothing they to break again. Tis time u lose it babaji , u lose it I win , before u take my happiness I myself lost it, I lost it






Geet : im sorry Maanji , im sorry I have to do tis, I have to control my feelings for u, I have to go away from u were my thought also should not disturb u


Geet was crying, no one is there to wipe her eyes, she know she had , but she lost it due to her fear.

After some time, driver came to call her

Driver : madam

Geet came back to sense : ah

Driver : Maan sir said to drop u

Geet : hmm were is he

Driver : he left

Geet smile sadly (st) : I thought


Te car reached km, Geet was lost in her thought

Driver : Geet mam, we reached

Geet : ah

she got down and went inside, she saw Nakul

Geet : Nakul kaka were is dadi And Anni

Nakul : they slept beta

Geet : hmm she hesitates

Nakul know whom she is trying to ask

Nakul : he didt cum stil

Geet (st) : he didt cum, were he went, he was in gussa , were he went, babaji ,


she was so worried , she went to her room and sat on te floor waiting for Maan




she dozed off on te floor itself




Some other place in Delhi


Rahul was watching tv and seeing Maan with his family,


Rahul : oh so Maan is having sister and a beautiful wife, Maan now I know ur weakness, how long u will hide tis from me, now u cant escape from me , be ready to see ur destruction, u did a big mistake by showing ur family to te world, but for me u did a big favour



He started to laugh

PRECAP : WERE IS MAAN

Next part- 22, PG 101


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
dhinka chika me first🥳

maan introduced geet n aniee to world👏

maan told geet about hs feelings⭐️

geet hurts maan😡
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous
geet told maan to move on his life when he confessed
he was hurt by her words
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super awesome blossom
Part
MAan introduced his family to all
He is trying yo say his feelings
N geet broke him totally by denying his feelings
party was romantic n end with emotional atyachar.
Now what is rahul upto
Where did Maan the devdas went
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo ajj sare duniya ko pata chal gaya ki MSK KI FAMILY KON KON HAY😉😉
ye tandon bhi dadi ma bhi kam nahi hay😆😆
dadi going to give big party for maaneet wow😛😛but geet wanna run from all😲
maan looking at geet so loving .THE PEE LOO DANCE START😳😳
maan drowning into geet eyes nd beauty but what geet dia today😡😲 soo bad .geet ne thik nahi kia
ajj maan ki dill puri tarah se tut gaya😕😕
geet loose so many people in her life now wo kisiko koha nahi chati hay😭😭
geet jo bhi tum kar rahi ho wo karna se tum sab ko kho dogayatry to understand geet😔

maan kha chala gaya😲😲
aur ye rahul kya karne wala hay
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Posted: 12 years ago
god..geet have broken maan's heart badly.😭😭😭
the Pheeloon song was dreamy and at the end sad...rahul going to mess with msk and going to get broken bones..wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet broke maan heart maan left rahul bas...



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