OS: The one that got away: Part 4 Pg 30 (4/9)

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anupamachem

@anupamachem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Beautifully written "no two hearts so open, no tastes so similar, no feelings so in unison, no countenances so beloved." . Although they didn't meet still it was an happy ending.

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

what was fault of geet?maan has his happy life why cant geet have one?

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Krupa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

very very touchy and diefrant story a drop of tear came on eye and frozen there and there by feeling the separation of 2 souls very much in love with each other.

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

nice story still it pricked that maaneet remain separated😭

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sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

sad end for the story dear..

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Sanjana 🤗...thank u for this beautiful OS...left me all chocked up 😭...have no words to express how i feel...totally mixed feelings...sad Maaneet never had a happy ending...happy i got to read such a wonderfully written story 👏...simply awesome work my dear...one of your best 👍🏼...plz never stop writing...love u ...TC 😊

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Dolly

@kptl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

that was really an emotional prt
made smile while at da same time made me cry...
it was heartwreanchingly beautiful...
nd mindblowingly worded...

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

That was really really beautiful 😭

their love story remained incomplete 🥺

so now compensate with a happy os 😈 😆

Lovely work ⭐️

Thanks for pms

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

wether stort doesnt hve happy endng but i still loved dis os.
brilliant dear

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

really heart touching

though it is very simple story . but it brought tears in my eye .esp when geet handa met geet khurana..and maan's words about how he created a geet for himself

now how i am suppose to work in office with such gloomy mood??????

write something nice to uplift me...