Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet
Hai valli i am a hardcore fan of maaneet.but i didn't get time to read ff's when ghsp is in air.now i got the time and my sister told me abou ur ff's.i started to read ur ff's
i like geetanjali,U ME AUR?.now i am reading insance lover.
my foot i was really fustrated and got anger and feeling disgusted for this ff.
u wont write those thyes of disgusted stories as i know from geetanjali and u,me, aur? but what the hell ur diong in INSANCE LOVER.
MAAN charterization was not less than cunning fellow,i can compare him with dev also how cheap he is using geet.for godsake she is 15yrs only then what the hell you are writing yar.
i used to read ff's like "depth to plaesure" and "devils darkest posession" etc .as of 19-21yrs for geet she know what is meant by phycical relationship in those ff's.and i didn't felt this much hurt and disgusted by reading those.
but when it comes to u and ur ff's i really like it,plz dont spoil it.
when rano comes to know abot,what maan dion with geet will she able to digest the fact.nooo.in ur ff's i really like one thing,u show values of charters but what abot"INSANCE LOVER".
of course as name itself indicating this is different but plz stop it yar plz...
being 25yrs maan is craving for physical relation,but covering him under friendship mask he is diong all those(i dont want to mention again and again) with geet.
if u call it as love but i call it as lust,physco type.
plz plz plz
if u can write take a turn of 3yrs do what ever.i felt really disgusted plz change that plz.
we are in corporative world so think in that way.
and finally a big sorry,if u got hurt or felt angry for this post.
but as a fan and reader of ur ff's i am requesting u plz stop all these nonsence.
as u posted on thread im also answering here
if u hv pmed i would have answered u personally..
dont take it so seriously yaar..
its an imaginary story..
if u go long back
our grand parents got married even before their maturity
n became parents at age of 13 14
i already told
maan is insane
he is madly in love with geet
n he is insecured what if rano keeps geet away
so he is trying to be cunning
i also said
he cares for geet
he will wait for her 4 few more years
till she grows up..
this n sil is different from all my ffs
its readers req ..they need a grey shaded like maan
n i tried different
thanks for ur criticism
im not hurt..but upset..u r making me think again..if we must proceed or not
everyones view is different
its ur view...i think i failed doing different from mine...
if u can see
im not here for 15days
n i got pms n comments eagerly waiting for this ff n other ffs too..
what will u say
the others like my different knot..
i dont know how to judge myself..
i came to know 1 disguisting incident 4m my friend
when she is in 9th std..obviously 14yrs old..innocent...younger to geet mentioned in this ff..
n the man was a proff..n father of 2 ..1 child is even elder to her..
i dont want to share that in open..
for all readers
i have one question
do u all feel same..disguisting reading this ff...say it openly..
so i may change the story line or stop this ff...
if u want to know the bitter experience of my friend too i'll say
so that u may know some true colours of men...
i took that men character..changed a little..
but in a positive way to geet by maan..who wont cheat her..
Edited by vallitanupm - 12 years ago
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