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Posted: 12 years ago



Geet is saved...

Maan is so fast and with help of his security men he overpowers Raghav and his men...

this is called full value of money...if Maan ha money he took good use of it...not bothered to show herogiri alone and put his life also in danger...

I really like these thing in ur FFs that u don't keep on dragging any suspense first and there are very less loopholes...u take care of every minute detail...

some loopholes are quite natural but I don't like dragging unnecessary suspense...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey lovu sorry 4 belated reply u know why...anyway that was loevly update but I wanted thoda dhisum dhisum ...raghav ko do char punch khana chaiye tha maan ke hotho se. next tym puri kardena😉
waise kya precap di😉...oye irada kya h teri ...abhi se surrr...lovuuu ye toh unexpected hai😉...meri kya mein toh yehi chahti hu😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update...
maan thik time pe pohche geya...
thank you babaji...
waiting 4 ur nxt update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Very cute ff, read the last 12 parts in one go,,please update the next soon...
Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

geet is back in her chirping mode😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN SAVED BOTH GEET AND MOHINDER
BUT WHERE IS HE TAKING HER NOW
AND HOW MUCH BAK BAK SHE DOES
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh finally maan save geet
awesome...superb part
loved it
Intresting precap
continue soon
thankx for the pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome 😃
both part 20 & 21 was awesome loved them & thanks for the pm :))
& precap is 😲 yeh kya howa hai maan ko ????
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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 22


They drove for few hours. Geet was feeling sleepy so she slept. In her unconscious mind everything was repeating.. last day whole incident and then she remembered what dadi n maan talked. She opened eyes making faces and looked maan, twisting her lips. maan looked her .. " ab isse achanak (suddenly) kya ho gaya " he thought.



"kya hua geet ?" he asked getting worried



"aap na mujhse baat mat kariye ??



kyu ?? hua kya geet.. bolo to "



kya kaha tha aapne .. mai aapke layak nahi ' ma..mai delhi me rahne ke layak nahi ' mai kya isti buri hu maan?? " her voice choked, feeling hurt. She was serious , really hurt.her face was dull saying her inner pain '



he stopped jeep. " geet meri baat to suno " he tried to make her understand but she was not listening.. " mujhe aapki koi baat nahi sunni .. aa bahut bure ho "



geet please.. geet wo sab drama tha..i swear.. dadi was teasing me and I was to dadi .. geet I really dint want to hurt you .. please believe me " maan was very wanted to clear their misunderstanding.. as he could not see her hurt



" why dadi wanted to tease you hmm ??" she asked



"wo... wo..geet...ye mai tumhe nahi bata sakta" maan could not say her that dadi wanted him to marry her...



"dekha..dekha mujhe pata tha.. aap bahana bana rahe ho " she said and turned her face side, showing her anger



"ab mai tumhe kaise samjhaau geet ' " he thought and looked up " geet ke babaji.. please sambhal lena "... he started jeep again praying and getting nervous..





They halted at a place. Geet never seen this place before. She was feeling cold. She was going to ask him then remember she is angry .. she showed her foul face to him and went down of jeep. He also came down and went to her side.. " chale geet " he said.. she dint answer and started walking.. she was walking when she turned and shocked to see he was not there.. she was going to call him in fear when some lights went on and she looked the whole place,.. it was so beautiful..



she saw it was a house, surrounded with white snow which was looking blue in night moon... she lost in this beauty. She was shivering due to cold yet her body was lost in trance of this beautiful place... she forgot her anger..



" maan .." she called '



"maan aap kaha ho .. " she again called .. this time she saw lights went on inside house.. she stepped toward there .. looking around, quite fearing, yet she knew maan would be there .. so she went inside.. it was beautiful inside.. cozy and lavish. It was like home.. she felt warm here.. still she was calling maan name when she saw a light inside a room, went on. She went there, opened door and her eyes became widen seeing a beautiful room.. like she always wished..


and most of all she shocked to see some teddies which did her heart beats fastest... she went and took one biggest teddy ..








she smiled and hugged it.. she was twirling in happiness.. feeling like most special girl in this world. She never in her life felt like this.. she was on cloud9... she kissed every toys and every thing which was special for her.. she turned and run out of room to find maan.. she was searching and calling him again a again when she heard her name " geet.."



she looked out of house.. a place where a shadow was standing.. she dint not need to know who was he.. she knew he was maan.. she run there as fast as she could .. when she run... whole area showering in dim twinkling light...



she saw maan was standing there... holding his ears.. saying sorry .. geet smiled and run to him and hugged tight.. he hugged her back lifting in his arm.. swirling in happiness..



I Love You Geet " maan said.. please I am sorry geet .. he kept her on her feet.. she kept her hand on his lips nodding no.. " please sorry mat kahiye maan.."



achha!! to fir kya kahu hmm.. " he teased



" kuch nahi .. " she hide her face in his chest.. feeling shy ..



"geet abhi to tum mujhe hug kar rahi thi.. aur ab sharma rahi ho hmm .."



maan .. " she felt more shy.. she dint know why .. she never shied to him but now she was not able to look in his eyes..



"achha thik hai .. ab meri taraf dekho " maan knew she was shying so he made her calm



she nodded no .. " mujhe nahi dekhna.. aap fir mujhe tang karoge "



"nahi karunga.. ab idhar dekho " he made her look him, cupping her face..her face was red .. she was looking so beautiful.. " Geet .. I love you so much " .. he kissed her cheek when then his eyes caught her dress..



she was still wearing bridal dress which raghav gave.. he felt his body was on fire due to anger.. he remembered how raghav was going to spoil his geet .. he removed her duppatta in jerk, made geet shocked. He threw dupatta on floor like a dirt..



"maan aap ye kya kar rahe ho.. " she was going to ask when maan lifted her... " maan aap kaha le jaa rahe ho..mujhe dar lag raha hai " she said terrified with his sudden behavior.. maan looked her and knew what he did in his anger.. she was fearing .. he put her down softly, without scraing her more..



m sorry geet... " he cupped her face and smiled.. geet tum dress change karlo" he calmly said.



" per kyu maan.. aur wase bhi I dont have spare dress.. and mujhe nahi change karna "



maan smiled.. " kyu geet ' kyu nahi karna.. you want me to change your dress hmm.. " he looked teasing her..



her eyes widen.. she moved back, and run from there like participating in race... without looking back .. maan laughed looking her act ' when his phone rang ..



"hello.. hmm.. thik hai .. " he cut and said.. " raghav.. now I will not leave you... you will die.. I promise...


Precap : Raghav- matlab tum abhi tak nahi jaante who is Geet" said smirked ...

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