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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

absolutely wonderful...i hope Maan reaches on time and saves the day..my hero...😳



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Oh!! Precap.. I love U... Who will say it first..?? It should be Maan..
Nice update..




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_ya1408

i msure maan will save his geet from all this ...!!waiting for next



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

lovely update dear :)👏
m still reading it frm d start but really good 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




Meera is very smart...she made Maan understand that Geet is in danger...

but Raghav and his men took Geet and Mohinder away so how will he reach them...

very interesting update...

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Updating DHARKAN ZARA RUK GAYI HAI ... within a hour


PART 21


Maan reached there running and when was going to knock , heard a scream.. " geettt" he panicked and started to break door..in few stroke door was laying on floor .. maan run inside to find direction of scream... in no time his securities too reached there and helped him .. maan found sound was coming from a closed door . someone was hitting it loudly. He run and opened door when meera came out crying.. maan shocked to see meera in this state... he panicked for geet.. " meera geet kaha hai "..meera was breathing hard and pointing toward road..



"meera please bolo geet kaha hai " maan was going insane as he understood there was no one in home... he was shaking meera to ask.. he gave meera water to calm down and then calmly asked .. meera told him everything. Maan called his security to find out two jeep , as meera explained. He gave meera in safe hand of security head and run to jeep, sat and drove toward direction , meera told.



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Maan was driving fast as his guard had told , jeep had been seen in a forest area.. he was driving as fast he could when he saw a jeep. It was second jeep in which mohindar was. Maan did fast and in no time he overtook .. all goon shocked with sudden brake. Maan saw mohindar was sitting in middle all tied. His blood boiled and he attacked alone as guard were yet to reach. He pulled driver out clutching his collar when some goons attacked him with sticks and other weapons. But maan was fast to tackle them, when mohindar shouted " maan geet ko bachaao " then maan came back to think geet was not there with mohindar.. she was with raghav but where... " he asked a goon where is raghav.. till then guard also reached .. man told him raghav whereabouts.. maan started his jeep to raghav location, which was to told , in middle of a deserted area..



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Raghav stopped jeep front of a old house , which was existed middle of forest.. geet saw some familiar faces.. she shocked to see, they were raghav parents.. she was looking them confused as she remembered how they helped her and mohindar, years back. She still dint know raghav was their son and both wanted to marry geet to him, as mohindar dint tell her.



(when mohindar run from their house , he told geet some random reason as geet condition was no less then a innocent child. He dint want to scare her with all reality.. so still she doesn't know they are bad)



She run to raghav mother as thought she will help her. She cried saying how much she used to love her.. but she dint know mother was more evil then son... she said if she doesnt agree to marriage , she will kill mohindar. Geet frightened more. They locked her in a room where raghav went to be ready.



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Geet was in room . Sitting on a narrow bed.. it was dark room as all windows were shut.. she heard some men voice outside.. in fear she started shivering more.. she was alone,, her papaji was in goons.. no one there to help her, to save her was making her more than death.. she Closed her eyes and prayed babaji



" please babaji.. mujhe rasta dikhaiye.. mujhe usse shadi nahi karni... please babaji.. I dont want to marry him... please kuch karo na babaji.. mai mar jaaungi.. mujhe papaji ke pass jana hai.. babaji please maan ko bhej do na.. please"



she was praying, crying ..when she heard knock on door.. he frightened. She clutched her dress in anticipation, in tension when knock became louder. Her eyes were blurring with tears, her mind was getting numb, her whole body was going lifeless when she saw , door broke and a man appeared...



"maan..." a whisper came from her mouth and she fell, fainted.. before she could touch ground maan hold her .." geett... " he panicked.. he was patting her cheek calling again n again but she was drained. After so much effort she gained conscious. She opened her eyes slowly and hugged him tight.. She was crying loud..



Maan could not see her like this as he always seen her laughing and blabbering.. he cupped her face and kissed all over , making her believe he was there ,, for her.. he would not let her cry again, ever. Geet forgot breathing as she felt his lip on her face.. it was heavenly.. this new touch was making her travel in magic world... she closed her eyes feeling serene..



maan stopped kissing and looked her face.. she was blushing .. he smiled seeing his effect on her..he knew she was fine.. he hugged her tight again, feeling her in his arm



Few moments passed when they came back in reality. " maan papaji..." she was going to ask when he said

"
geet papaji bilkul thik hai.. aur wo ghar pe hai ..."



she relieved then she looked around and found she was still there.. at same place.. it remembered her raghav.. she looked him with fared eyes '



" geet tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai .. yaha koi nahi hai "maan said



Matlb ?



Matlab ye.. ki raghav aur uske saare men arrest ho chuke hai ..



Sachhii ??



tumhe mujhpe yakin nahi geet ..hmm" he removed her curl from forehead , teased with eyes



she nodded.. smiled..



chale ..." he made her stood and both left to jeep.. it was dark night. After going some far geet noticed they were not going her home.. " maan hum kaha jaa rahe hai ??



" geet.. raat kafi ho chuki hai toh hum ghar kal jaayenge"



"toh fir aaj kaha jaayenge ?? " she asked confused



"hmm.. aaj raat tum meri guset ho " he said and smiled..



"matlb ??



"geet.. tum bina sawal puche koi kaam kar sakti ho "



geet nodded no ' wo mujhe na... sawal puchna achha lagta hai .. wo kya hai na maan..mujhe sochna pasand nahi.. aur jab tak aap mujhe bataoge nahi ki mujhe kya nahi sochna tab tak mujhe kaise pata chalega ki mujhe kya sochna hai ..hai na ..."



"kya???



"ohho maan.. aap bhi na.. kuch nahi samjhte.. dekhiye..wo kya hai... " and she started her endless talk which made maan feel like he won over the whole world...


Precap : I Love You ... Maan removed her dupatta & threw ,, " maan ..aap ye kya kar rahe ho " geet shocked


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Loved it
urghh raghav..hate him
poor Geet...
hope Maan ll save her
aww superb precap
waiting for next
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely update..my maan saved his geet.maan why u didt kill ragav?.geet u and ur questions,but me too same,i wont use my brain more instead use my mouth..bechare my maan..i love te update so much dear..lovely precap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb update...👏👏

yea kya hai lovu...tune raghav ho do char nehi lagaya😡😡...aur thori action hona chaiye tha...😡😡...mein ragnav ho maan k haato pit te hue dakhna chate thi...

hayeee babaji...yea kya precap hai...😉😉...umm hmm kya honewala hai lovu😉☺️...bata bata...mein to bohot kuch soch rehi hu...😉😛...lakin sehi soch rehi hu yea galat yea to tu bata sakti hai...😉😃...

ab jab tak lovu tu mujhe bataegi nahi ki mujhe kya nahi sochna tab tak mujhe kaise pata chalega ki mujhe kya sochna hai ..hai na ..."😉😉😛...hahahaha😆

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