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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hats off to you yaar... perfect portray of emotions and i have to say this u r a queen⭐️ in this!!!! u portray emotions of not only maneet in their story but also include each and every other important persons of their life and that too so heart touching! may be thats y we r able to identify each character of urs... it seems to be one among us not from any fairy tale...

whether it is mohinder, rahul or dadima, dev , meera... everyones outburst was just commendable! even rahul saying that u dont have a sis so u wont understand what am feeling now... we hear this a lot in our daily life too!

though till now in this story i was more into geet feeling sorry for her, admiring her in each role, loving her in her masti but now i think am shifting a lil bit to maan! becoz of the big question arises in my mind "what he will do now"? he came back fom london knowing his feeling toward her and he may had thought it to be too easy just go to her confess and sab ek dam teek... and now see...geet is in her home not only her family but also his knows every thing and is bombarding with their quesions... i cant even imagine what options he have now to set up all back in the right path

am now feeling so senti yaar... i cant wait for the next part... i know i tell this after ur each part but the blame is entirely yours so plzzz update soon

Thanks dear...your words are very encouraging...next update coming up soon where Maan will start taking charge of this relationship now
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Posted: 13 years ago
yar really awesume FF...love the update feel sorry for maan and geet and...early waiting for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

This was everything a father's and brother's reaction should be...I thank you with all my heart that you have portrayed Mohinder this way.


I feel sad at the shock that Maan's family has received. Specially Dadima's hopelessness makes me heartbroken. She expected so much from Maan and thought all was well from Geet's nature and behavior. Alas, all is not what it seems at the surface.

Its surprising that a mature adult like Maan didnt realise what he was doing. I guess people dont realise when they become selfish. But this will not do. Even if Maan goes to Geet after this, I would not take this as a reflection of his love. Nor would I think that her parents would be convinced. Maan deserves more punishment.

Lovely update, I cant express how lovely 😃👏

Thanks dear...you have always steered me in right direction since my last FF and I am glad u liked the update
Not sure if it will be punishment or not but Maan will have to prove his worth...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoso

Awesome going and much natural reaction from Mohinder . Ek baap ke liye ,very painful to see his daughter undergoing so much of pain . And very much anticipated reaction from dadi and dev . Geet had never let them know the inner turmoil or status of der relation .

It is not so easy road ahead to maan As not only has to win the trust of family members but also should show his immense love for Geet . Spell bound update ritzy . 👏
Precap sounds so interesting 😍

Thanks Anu...Yes Geet tried her best but things eventually always come out...
let's see how Maan gets his life back now...if nothing else Geet has forced him to fight for it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Ohhh wow what an update...


Complete dhamakedar.. And my guess was correct...

No father can take this and Mohinder's and Rahul's outburst was so so natural...

Maan did wrong... He was so wrong you made us realize with this update

Again I find no more words for this superb dhamakedar update...

Now the precap... Is he thinking or is it real... Now it will be great to see our Maan Maan singh khurana struggling to get his wife back...

What a twist... Loved

Thanks Anu...off course you know me...i love Geet's POV always
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweety bar bar lagta hai u r giving us update .. so mee checking this thread every minute. kuch karo na ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CiaMaaneet

Dhamaakedar updt tha...

Mr.Handa is right at his plc no doubts I mean koi b izzatdar, carng baap apni beti ki lyf aise tabaah hote nahi dekhta n yes i lvd d way he and Rahul reactd...
Oh Lord!! Mujhe toh laga Maan toh gaya but baat 'DIVORCE' tak aa gayi...
Lvd d way Maan k kaan khade ho gayye aftr he heard abt 'DIVORCE'
And Precap- padkar mera dil garden garden ho gaya... Updt soon...

Thanks honey...btw i love your emoticons...pls do tell me fromw here you get them
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drashtirocks1


very very very beautiful and emotional update ...👏
geet's family is with her...am very glad about that.
mohinder's act is justified...ne father will be angry to see his daughter in pain..
me actually chocked with emotions now!!!!!!😭
very beautifully written...
and sumwhr am glad tht everyone came to know the truth...
geet couldn't have hidden it for long...🥺 she has endured a lottt
and i had also mentioned sumwhr in my earlier comments too..kisi bhi insaan ki sehne ki shakti ki ek limit hoti hain..after that he/she breaks!!!

and am wondering about geet's reaction after hearing about the divorce!!!
dadima ka gussa bhi jayaz tha...
reactions of all the characters was wonderfully captured..starting from mohinder to meera!!!!!
and as i had already said...it is the time that maan took to realize his love...tht time span broke geet...she lost all hopes...
really painful update...


really can't wait for the next part!!!!!!
am totally senti senti now...actually speechless...
very beautifully written!!!!! maan not only has to woo his wife n get her back but also win her family!!!!!! and i really just can't wait for the next update!!!!!!! its getting more and more interesting day by day!!!!!😳
continue super soon..the future updates are going to test their love now!!!!😊

Girl did you copy Ash's comment...it is very similar...wow that is first...recycling of comments too...😆
well I guess it just means u wanted to say the same and loved her comment...
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

Ritzy I understand that maan was wrong, but in this case I know geet was sharing it with her mother and Mohinder heard it and jumped into the conclusion, but after that why did geet not run behind mohinder and stop the drama, I know that what maan did was wrong, but divorce 😭😭

I am not sure how this is planned but divorce this was sad 😭😭😭

not sure what to think, precap is interesting, even though probably i feel that this maan would probably mumble alone

Dear, Geet is too heartbroken and also she did not know that Mohinder will talk about divorce and all...you will get to know her POV in the next update
As for feeling bad for Maan...hmmm he did give lot of pain to Geet but don't worry he can not let go off Geet that easily...can he?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

OMG... that was really awesome and emotional part di...
loved both the parts... and yes thanku for the previous part link, i mostly read when pm comes..
both maan and geet are in pain, understand both of them.. but i guess what geet did is wrong and also maan shouting on her is also wrong...
he so happily came from his trip to express his feelings to her and not finding hope really depressed and angered him and after listening geet's anger he shouted and so geet went to her mom to share her pain..
and by chance mohinder listened it... but one thing i didnt understand di that geet's mom know about maan, that he dont loves geet and geet too know the fact, but they didnt talk with mohinder and he has gone to KM to talk with dadimaa and maan.
i am 100% supporting mohinder and rahul because they love geet to the core, and they want her to be happy, and when mohinder heard that he might be very sorry for her and his words when he talked with were very emotional and i had tears in his eyes how much he loves his daughter, and no matter what he is always with his daughter.
i personally think geet and mom should talk with mohinder when he comes back home and it was really shocking that dadimaa slapped maan, ofcourse what he did is wrong but now he loves geet, he realized his love for geet..
and the precap hope he really tells to geet... plz di no divorce..
i am now feeling bad for him when he is getting his happiness back and try to move on in his life all this is happening.. but mohinder and rahul are not at all wrong, hope maan and geet confront them and maan expresses his feelings for geet... 😃😃 hope next part is happy one *fingers crossed*

love u di for giving a awesome update... 🤗sss

Thanks Dear...
As to your question, Geet only told her moma nd asked her not to tell the same to Mohinder / Rahul...

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