Thanks dear...your words are very encouraging...next update coming up soon where Maan will start taking charge of this relationship nowOriginally posted by: -lakshmi-
hats off to you yaar... perfect portray of emotions and i have to say this u r a queen⭐️ in this!!!! u portray emotions of not only maneet in their story but also include each and every other important persons of their life and that too so heart touching! may be thats y we r able to identify each character of urs... it seems to be one among us not from any fairy tale...
whether it is mohinder, rahul or dadima, dev , meera... everyones outburst was just commendable! even rahul saying that u dont have a sis so u wont understand what am feeling now... we hear this a lot in our daily life too!
though till now in this story i was more into geet feeling sorry for her, admiring her in each role, loving her in her masti but now i think am shifting a lil bit to maan! becoz of the big question arises in my mind "what he will do now"? he came back fom london knowing his feeling toward her and he may had thought it to be too easy just go to her confess and sab ek dam teek... and now see...geet is in her home not only her family but also his knows every thing and is bombarding with their quesions... i cant even imagine what options he have now to set up all back in the right path
am now feeling so senti yaar... i cant wait for the next part... i know i tell this after ur each part but the blame is entirely yours so plzzz update soon
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