MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 5 - Page 63

Originally posted by: ruchs

yay!! me FIRST accidentally!!😆

thank you di for updating before me slept!!😳

Such an emotional update di!!!

Iss update ne toh me ki neend hi uda di!!!😲

DIVORCE???😲

Though me had predicted that something of this sort will happen when me read the last update and Geet's father part but still it shook me a little!!!

Geet's father's and brother's anger and pain is totally justified!!😳

Dadima slapped Maan!!!😲

Oh My God!! This one me didn't expect!!

The pre cap is awesome'. Hoping Maan says it to Geet though me knows he must be saying it to himself while letting out his pain in a n isolated place'.

Awesome update as usual Di!!!👏

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

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ohh me 2nd...but koi na super happy tht am going to sleep after reading this!!!!!😃

very very very beautiful and emotional update dii...👏
geet's family is with her...am very glad about that.
mohinder's act is justified...n e father will be angry to see his daughter in pain..
me actually chocked with emotions now!!!!!!😭
very beautifully written...
and sumwhr am glad tht everyone came to know the truth...
geet couldn't have hidden it for long...🥺 she has endured a lottt
and i had also mentioned sumwhr in my earlier comments too..kisi bhi insaan ki sehne ki shakti ki ek limit hoti hain..after that he/she breaks!!!

and am wondering about geet's reaction after hearing about the divorce!!!
dadima ka gussa bhi jayaz tha...
reactions of all the characters was wonderfully captured..starting from mohinder to meera!!!!!
and as i had already said...it is the time that maan took to realize his love...tht time span broke geet...she lost all hopes...
really painful update...

Ye rat itni tanha kyu hoti hain
Apne kismat se sabko shikayat ktu hoti hain ?
Ye kismat bhi ajib khel khelti hain..
Jise hum pa nahi sakte,
Usise hi bepanah mohabbat kyu hoti hain?

this is wht geet is feeling right now...
diii really can't wait for the next part!!!!!!
am totally senti senti now...actually speechless...
very beautifully written!!!!! maan not only has to woo his wife n get her back but also win her family!!!!!! and i really just can't wait for the next update!!!!!!! its getting more and more interesting day by day!!!!!😳
continue super soon..the future updates are going to test their love now!!!!

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

Can I just say how much I loved Mohinder Handa in this update. Yes, his and Rahul's reaction was volatile, however a father who stands up for his daughter is truely a delight to read about.

I'm so amazed that Mohinder didn't tell Geet to just suck it up and for family pride go along with marriage, so for me he is the hero of the story.

Every single person had emotional reaction and that's what I love about this story b/c it makes them so human. A great update.

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

aahh Ritzy di...
Okay.. I wud say i liked your writing...
D emotions dat u brought out perfectly...
But..
Well.. U knw me..
No comments, m cryin for Maan lyk mad...
I jz feel bad for him..
For me, he wasnt so much at fault to deserve such harshness...
So yea.. M sry if u feel bad , i rlly dnt mean to hurt u..but i feel ntg fo Geet ryt nw and my heart is broken for Maan..!!

Originally posted by: crazydevil87

m really really sry di for not commenting since long but anyways m bck n u just blown me away wid d heartbreaking update...:'(:'(:'( m littery crying for maan right now...
his whole being is shattered again...hes all alone isolated again...
d pain of loneliness he just came out of again crashed upon him in harder n sharper way leavin him all alone no one to hold him...
n d words in precap made me cry all d more for him...hes in limitless pain...
hats off to u for capturing d reactions of every character sooo beautifully...i really can understand her insecurities but d way geet took maan's words of concern as words of responsibility n reputation broke my heart...she always understood maan n wen he needed her understanding n support d most she just left him blasting...n den dis hell broke on him...
how come a broken man who just managed to collect broken pieces of his life n decided to overcome his sorrows but again thrown in a deeper pit of sorrow going to fight over all dis??
m really eager to c it di...already eagerly awaiting d nxt one...
each update is beautiful di...amazingly penned...
luvya di...

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

Awesome di...

i have no words to explain...

really the pain of father and brother was explained beautifully...

awesome awesome awesome...

divorce papers... every dad will do the same but he doesn't know that maan loves her now right... nobody knows...

poor maan he couldn't explain his love to everyone in this situation... even if he says no one will believe...

precap sounds interesting...

hope maan says those words to geet in real...

waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was an absolutely awesome update...

i loved the reactions of all the people... everyone's reactions was completely justified in their prospective!!

Liked the way Geet's father and brother feel bad and want to to take her out of the pain... they are right in their own way... glad to see the supportive family of geet... nothing matters to them than her happiness...

On the other hand not only geet family but also his own family has lost the trust in maan when it comes to Geet... so even when they try to work out their relation, maan has to gain the trust of both the families along with Geet...

Eagerly waiting for the next part... as am sure Geet would be shell shocked on hearing the divorce thing... and i hope the precap is not a monologue of maan and hope its a real conversation of maan and geet...

Thanks for the update... and me waiting for the next one!!! eagerly!!!

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Fabulous update..
Mohinder s deeply hurt to hear his princess s deeply hurt..
But his love for geet has blinded him..
He not for once asked geet what she wants...but its justified b/c he dint thot that geet and rano will hide such a big truth..
but when geet will cum to noe abt ds decision she may react in a violent way..
Lovely and emotional one di..
i hope ur kid s well..