FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10

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Hai guys thanks for you support and likes you given for my ongoing story
FORCED MARRIAGE
I came back with other story, a different concept if you like the prologue i will continue the story

before the prologue this small introduction to the story

In the Brahma loka, brahma was busy with his creation, at same time sarwati devi was as usual busy with her veena , at that time she got an idea, she wants to implement immediately, pati devi please i have wish please fulfill it please -Brahma wish was shocked- even tough he is a god he is a husband , what to do , ok devi , i will fulfill your wish tell me

you have to create a a man , he should be so good that, no one is compared with him in this whole world

ok i have created , then what

then you create a women , she should be beautiful, highly intelligent , stubborn, and everything that a women needs

ok i have created

Then you make their fate of marriage on their forehead ( it is told that Brahma writes our fates of marriage on our forehead )
ok i have written
then you make that women not useful for sex
Brahma was shocked, no sarsawati you should not do like that please--

Why? i want see , whether husband and wife can love each other with out lust and sex




CHARACTERS :-

love means , if you are not there ,with other person , it is trust that other person just thinks about you----- Meera

"How dare he does a practice joke on me , i want to punish him
leave him in a desert" ---------Geet

"if you feel happy by hurting me , i will bear the pain happily " ---
Maan singh Khurana


PROLOGUE
Letter should be like a sweet memory to other one, when they read , they should know our feelings, thinking of this i am starting writing a letter to you
i am thinking about the evening i have spent with you , it is like a bliss for me, when you are in love even the small small things make us happy, the rainbow, the fog, the early morning dew on flowers, the rain,- love is contradiction, is it not !
every story has turning point the story will start from there , but i do not know when i started to love you , i have to search for that , what made me to love you ,the time i have spent with you i want to meet
i am coming in afternoon flight , room is booked in my name
i will call you after coming there, within half hour you should be here after calling you other wise i will suicide
Yours -me







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Posted: 13 years ago
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prologue
nice...
cont soon...
pm me...

PS - which thread u gonna continue the story this one or this one
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3079578?
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INDEX
PART -1 =https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
CHARACTERS-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=2

PART-2=https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=3

PART-3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=4

PART-4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=5
PART-5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=7
PART-6-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=8
PART-7-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=10
PART-8-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=12
PART-9-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=14
PART-10-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=16
PART-11-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=18
PART-12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=20
PART13-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=22
PART-14-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=24
PART-15-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=26
PART-16-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=28
PART-17-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=31
PART-18-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10?pn=32
PART-19-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-20-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-21-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-22-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-23 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-24-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-25-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-26-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-27-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-28-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10
PART-29-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66421414
PART-30-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3079575/ff-maan-and-geet-wife-loverupdated-epilogue-12-10

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

prologue
nice...
cont soon...
pm me...

PS - which thread u gonna continue the story this one or this one
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3079578?




I will continue both the stories,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART :1





Just now the rain has stopped , today is full moon day , the light is coming into the bedroom , the scene is very beautiful
without seeing any nature beauty , geet is busy in the file, managements accounts are more interested to her than the scenic beauty , she believes that the relation ship between each person is just logical
and she never believes any person
she is the head of the handa group of industries there are lot of industries under her, construction, textiles, , advertising , , getting a job in her industries is prestige issue
geet father monhinder handa died at her young age , when she is just 5 years
her whole empires and money industries were under the care of her uncle brij handa un till her 18 years of age, after that she took care of that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for ur new ff
seems interesting






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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo on new ff
awesme start
cnt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Main Characters that come across this story :

Geet - Geet handa/geet maan singh khurana
M.D of handa group of industries

Maan - Maan singh khurana /husband of geet

Brij- Uncle of geet who had looked and
brought geet from childhood
Dev- Son of Brij

Ganagadhar swamji- A swami

Agarwal- A psychiatrist

Yash - Maan freind

Chopra- Director of sri detective agency

Aditya - -Adi - assistant of chopra



Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
nice...
cont soon...

PS - can u add this in the title part 1@ page 1?
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hi dear
lovly update👍🏼

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