FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART:5

Maan went to sri detective agency for interview, to day morning he has seen the aide in the news paper for receptionists posts

There are already lot of people there, there were talking , after some time maan told

See I have read some where

They will call people for interview , management people will observe them, one guy sees that paper have scattered all over the center table, he immediately, keeps them in order, the management people gives him the job

Why they will give the job

Management will test the character of that guy, how he takes responsibility,

Listening their talks , immediately the thirds, guy saw some siper webs, immediately they cleaned them

Now that place became like a marathon, like everyone is cleaning, and trying to clean that place, one is cleaning the spider webs,they are were thinking may be this is a detective agency, so they may be some one who is observing them in disguise

Seeing this maan went out, he was thinking this will atleast take one hour, at least he can go out and drink tea

When he came after half hour , he has seen that all the candidate have left

He do not what to do

After 5 minutes he entered inside the cabin , he has the seen chopra, the head of detective agency , pacing in the room,

Who are you

Sir iam the candidate for the interview

But why you came , so much late

Sir I have seen lot of candidates, so, I thought it may take time

At the same time he got the call

Tell me geet ,(this is all going in one side conversation, you will know what chopra was talking to her )

Ha, geet, after with your discussion, we were on that work only, ya,,, my boys were on that work only, that report is on my table only, that agarwal ………….

No one is there with agarwal, only one receptionist, , but that person also left the job yesterday, …. If you want tell me, I know that area inspector ……. If you want I will put the doctor in the jail………….you do not want him……… only his assistant ……. Okay I will tell my guys to investigate about him

It is okay, for this small thing there is no need for fees………. Ok I will send the cover ..the details ( the invesestigation report)

He has seen maan standing there

What

My interview

Why you did not wait ,and went outside

I did not want to spoil the hall , already there were lot of people there, so I thought why should also spoil and, there are lot candidates, my turn will turn will take a lot of time so I went outside

Chopra felt very happy , listening to n his words, he told to join immediately

Now maan was shocked

You know why I have sent them all within 5 minutes

They are cleaning this place, some one are cleaning the spider webs, and some are arranging the newspapers,

When I asked them ,who did all these

They were are taking the responsibility

That they were all cleaning all this

Immediately I shouted at them to get out from my office

See this a detective office, here the atmosphere should also be different, I want my office in Hollywood type style, in one corner spider webs , all new paper scattering here and there , but all of them messed it, they were cleaning all this premises

Is he mentally stable, why I am getting past 3 days like these cases 😕

Chopra was telling him see why I have given you this job because, you were are not interfering in others works, I liked it so I am giving you the job

Hearing these words , maan was shocked

Thanks for the job offer sir ………………but other behaved like this because of me

He narrated how he has told them that management people will be observing and how some one got the job for doing like these things

What …………..

Yes sir I donot know you like your office like a horror film set……… sorry sir 🤔

My job……….

If you have not told me this , I would have given the job

But I will not give now, for messing with me I did not gave the job to them

And you have given the idea how I will give the job to you

Okay sir as per your wish

Telling that maan immediately left the office


It is almost ten in the night , geet was calling chopra

I came to know about the assistance who has work for that psychiatrist doctor

He is maan singh khurana

He woked as receptionist ,he left the job 2 days before,

Is he now free

Ya, he is free, searching for the jobs, I will send you the address

I do not need that , but I want a help from you, you have lot of investigators under you, I want some one we can act carefully

All can act very nicely

Okay , let me tell you the plan………. She started to tell the plan ……… you have to leave him there alone……….

Chopra was shocked listening to this plan ………… I do not know who is this but for his small mistake he getting a big punishment

You do like this-------- he will never do any practical joke on any one

Chopra wanted to ask that what he had done------- but he controlled himself knowing the geet nature

What maan , I hear the news is that true,

What is that new yash

I heard that you are working as sales man in xyz shop located in forum mall

Ya I am doing , I did not got any job any where so I joined there

But atleast you would have taken tuitions know

Ya that is right , but I could not get any where

But how can you do that job

What to do to live we need money ,leave it off

Come we will go the hotel and eat some thing

Iam very hungry

They went to the road side hotel

But I did not like this maan, you workin as sales boy that too in ladies section

See yash I have small dream , while I am working may be some big shot may come there for purchasing, and seeing me there ….. the great maan singh khurana working here iwill give you the job come with me……😍 iam just thinking like that

Maan now a days you are dreaming a lot

At same time the waiter came kept the food before them

They were eating the food and seeing the paper

Oh she is geet handa

What maan what happened

I think so I lost the job because of this lady

what you have done maan nothing Talking to small phone call she has removed you from the job, come we will go and talk to her

No yash she has not removed me, my boss was afraid and removed me from the job

Do not leave like that maan come we will go and fight with her

Let it be yash I do not want firght with her, now I got some job , for this small issues why to make a big one

How could you be happy every time like that maan , why you are not getting angry on her

See yash I do no want waste my energy by getting angry on her, if we are angry , is their any thing we will gain, I very much satisfied with my life,

come we will go , finish your food fast

You want to live in your own style- but god decides that how you have to live

Adi told maan to sit

Adi was same age of maan… but he is having large spets ( guys think about our adi sir in the serial , his mannerism everything)

Maan received some job notification from marketing company, it came through the consultant company where he registered

The offer is good they have to travel a lot marketing their company product to different cities

The salary will be around 20 and other perks will also will be there, if you are interested you can join immediately , as our representive has to go to the jaisalmer in rajashtan immediately and contact a person there and give some cover it very confidential ( I know guys it is little bit illogical but …………… I am only confused …….. I do not know how you all take but I have write this part , )

If you want you can take appointment letter tomorrow

Thanks very much sir I will join immediately

After he went away adi immediately called chopra and told that maan had joined the office , tomorrow he will come and take the appointment

After he takes that you immediately vacate the office,if he comes and esquires and who has given the job, he should not know that

Ok sir I will do it

Chopra called geet, he want to tell her what he done

Heloo

See geet iam chopra , I done what you have told me , I gave job to maan , tomorrow he will come and join in the office

Who is this maan

Chopra was shocked

He was shuttering , you told me to give job to maan

Oh….he………I told to teach him nice lesson

Ya for that sake we have given him the job

I told you already what to do , then why you are bothering me , after finishing the entire job tell me, telling that she kept the phone

Chopra now understood how geet became a good business women …. For taking revenge on that guy she used think day and night and used to call him for every minute, and when it is process she just forgot name , she just told him to tell the final results

Chopra was just thinking what to do he is facing lot of financial problems in the house

He has 2 daughter s and one son, he has marry them and give dowry and the son wants to do medicine, it is a costly affair

For everything he needs almost 50 lakhs

He could sustain in this because of geet and like her customers 1 to 2 are there

He is thinking how to arrange that money

See this is the appointment letter today evening you have to start from Mumbai, I will also come with you till jaisalmer from there you have to other remote place chitradurga and I will go other place rajmand I have to deliver the amount there

Both have started …. Adi is good company he very nice person but he could understand why he was accompanying adi when he is going to that place from there he can go that place and deliver this letter but why he is taking him along with him….okay let it be……he thought

Both reached jaisalmer around afternoon

See maan from here I will go the rajmand it is about 20 kilometers and you have to go chitra durga it is about 7 kiolmeters

I talked one camel fellow I have given the amount to him and you return back here

At the same his bus came seeing that adi immediately told maan to care of that letter and give it to the concerned person, he immediately catches the bus and went away

Maan also took the camel ,camel rider kept his suitcases along with him,

They reached the detestation , camel rider told him that this is the place and gave his suitcases and immediately he returned back

Maan asked him to wait but he told that the person who talked to him told that to drop him and come back and not to wait for him

Maan was shocked listening to those words, the place is looking a deserted, there are only 12-15 houses, one small tea shop is there,

He has seen the address on the letter , it was written as hotel ashoka chitradurga

He asked the chai wala about that hotel

Chai wala was laughing and told him this is only hotel you have here

Maan was shocked he did not what to do he has seen that cover it was not sealed he has seen some small paper inside it

There was only one sentence I in that

When ladies talk to you , do not try to overact and misbehave with them.

Now he could understand what all happening

It is almost evening , every there is sea of sand , there is not money with him

He settled near by bench

He was just thinking about that women who spend so much of time in taking revenge with him

He felt pity on her






ok guys i know it is illogical 😕 , iam only confused , but it is needed here, geet has taken the revenge from him by leaving him alone in a desert place

now you have wait and see how maan will come from that place...what happens

and please give your comments and like

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
loved it
ek revenge ke lie geet ne itna dimag lagya...
waiting for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...
Lol maan is so funny...
Geet ka plan maan se revenge lene ka ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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how can Geet be a big business woman...a big businessmen never waste his time on petty issues like this...if she is so big and busy then she must not have time for this stupid revenge thing...

waiting for how Maan will reach back to his home...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



how can Geet be a big business woman...a big businessmen never waste his time on petty issues like this...if she is so big and busy then she must not have time for this stupid revenge thing...

waiting for how Maan will reach back to his home...

thanx for pm...



geet is indeed business- women but her ego was hurt ed here , guys believe even though mistakes lies with them when ego is e hurt ed they can go to any extent (personal experience even though mistakes lies with them they fell very hurted ) the same way for geet also , she thought only f or one night how to take revenge after she executed the plan she did not think after wards , she only told them to tell the final results of the plans
geet character of stubborn character , in future you will know more about her
i am not telling geet is bad but her experience makes her like that

Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ufff geet bhi na revenge ke liye itna sab kuch...
awesome update dear
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
quite a different concept...
lvd the update...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 5
OMG just for revenge she did this to him...
unbelievable...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK YOU GUYS FRO YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS AND LIKES



PART :6

Maan was thinking what to do now, this is desert so the night climate will be very cold, he can ask for a lift ,

He saw some money in his pocket

at the same time he saw the suitace

but the other one, which is same as his,

then he rembered that is adi,

adi told that he has to give the money to the customer in rajmand, if he has not delivered ,it , what will happen to him do know

he knows that he was deceived , but in this process he do not want adi to suffer,

he knows what geet can do for simple phone call she has tranfered to a desert, now what happens to the adi

immediately he started his journey

In her geet has never got that much angry

Chopra was sitting there quietly

Adi was stading there with head down

Actually what happened is that

She has get some machinery from jodhpur, that money has to be sent in black

So she requested chopra to sent any man to give money,

Adi was accompanying maan so chopra gave the responsibility to adi to deliver the cash

But adi in his hurry forgot the suitcases with the maan

Geet was pacing in the room angrily

Every time you tell about your detective agency , that no 1 in india ,

Is this is way to work, if it had happened in my company I would dismissed that man

I am not worry about the money but what maan will be thinking about me,

I even kept a note also

For god sake will he be knowing who we are ( she thinks that maan does not know her- in the note also she did not mention the name )

I thought I will teach him lesson which he remembers throughout his life time, but you made it like a joke of the year

I have sent him to the desert along with the cash

Will give compliant against him that he has stolen the moneyCHOPRA WAS GIVING THE ADVICE

Will just shut your mouth she shouted AT them

She immediately called the delhi branch office and told them to go the jodhapur and give the cash

They were discussing for next plan of action

Chopra was discussing some thing at the same time they heard a knock at the door

He was stading there, he was looking as if he has travelled a lot , his dress was full of dust seeing him adi was shOcked,

But geet do not who is he

Who are you, how you came inside security ..security ... She is shouting at him

Slowly adi came near her and told that he is maan

There was a pin drop silence

Geet first thought seeing him is that

Is he the same man , with whom she talked about sex

The second is that is same person who she told to drop in the desert

And the third is how to handle this situation

You should not

show others that you are defeated and if others know that you have done the mistake they will try to dominate you

she has face the situation

she asked him

who are you

maan showed adi and told that he working under him

and why you came here , you should go and meet in his office

maan simply came forward and gave the suitcase and told that he has forgotten the money

geet was shocked

you are lucky we are thinking to give police report against you

but he was not listening to that he told adi to check the amount, and he has take 2000 rs for journey

how come you know that there cash in the suitaces, you tried to break that

no adi told that he has to give the amount in customers places, so I thought may be there is any address

so you are telling that you have opened the suitaces for searching the address chopra asked

I did not opened the suitcase for money

From the note I know that geet handa has done for taking revenge so she has sent me to the desert, but it is between us, for this I do not want to involve adi in this, when I did not get any address I got the doubt that may be he is also your man , that is why I have taken money to come here

Geet could not talk any more, SHE SAT QUITELY not knowing what to do

In this whole situation only adi was very happy

The cash he has lost has been safely reached

He asked maan how come you know this address

Once I went to this chopra office for interview

Before me he was taking on the phone regarding agarwal psychiatrist , he mentioned The name geet , when geet was telling to investigate ABOUT ME I was there only

Chopra was shocked he used to tell everyone that his detective agency was best in india , any secrets will not go outside but here ,...

Now he was feeling how he behaved , he just WANT TO run from this place

Geet situation is also like that

Before knowing him , he knows her

With this truth she could not handle and sat quietly on the sofa

Seeing this maan immediately was going out

When he was near the gate , adi came running near to him

Thanks maan

I do not know anything about this, they told to do this job, I just done my job, iam sorry for that

I know this

I want to ask one question will you tell me

For searching you she kept detectives , for the small mistake she has ruthlessly send to a desert , you have lost job because of her , you did not fell to get angry on her, you did not feel to shout at her

No not at all may be she has faced lot of problems in her child hood, I just pity her

Telling this he immediately left that place

Geet has listened to all these conversation

Chopra was sitting in the geet cabin

Geet was in the meeting since 2 hours, he was patiently waiting for her, it is his work he has to wait

Geet came and sat

Tell me chopra why you are waiting for me

Geet...actually I want some money

About 20 laks

So you want money for son foreign education and daughter medical education

Yes geet

How do you want the money?

Either as a loan or salary advance

What is the difference

Interest

He was shocked,

The lady who used to deal with corers, is asking about the interest,

He thought she would give the amount like that only , but he never thought she would ask for the interest

As your wish what you think it is better you give like that , but I want money in 1 week , telling that he went away

After that she didi not feel like working there was party tonight

She normally, does not go to any shopping,

But today she has to go the party organized by the business associates, and she has to attend that that is a theme party black and white and she do have any dress

She thought for a change she will go for shopping

She entered the forum mall which is

quite famous

she was searching the shops do not know what to buy

she entered silk shop, they were all kinds of dress and sarees , but she was abEL to understand what to buy

at the same maan saw her came there

devil ... CHUDEL what she is doing here

madam can I help you

geet was shocked seeing him there

i... you... here..

ya I could not get any where job so I joined here

there is a party today , I want to buy some thing

seems you do not do shopping frequently

ya how do you know

that is simple

if anyone is in your place they started taking this one dress and other like and they would kept heap of dress on one side

she slightly smiling listing to theses words

maan was seeing her , when smiles she looks very beautiful , small dimple will be forming


THIS DEVIL ALSO KNOWS HOW TO SMILE

did you selected anything

no actually I am not abel to do

I have to buy some white color clothes

Then he went to other side , geet was searching here and there for some thing

He showed one white color saree it was very nice elegant


Saree no I cannot I never did wear a saree, I will not look nice in this

It is not like that madam see you look very nice and elegant in this saree, saying he immediately draped pallu on her shoulder

Geet was shocked with his behavior

This first time some one has came near to her there as slight ticklish on her stomach, she could not understand

She was staring at him at his well toned body, his abs may be he will do some exercises,

Madam...madam he was calling

Come out from your dream land what you are thinking

What

See look at your self in this mirror you are looking nice

Shy, what she is she is thinking..

Immediately she came from her thoughts and saw the saree

Ya it is good pack it,

See madam what about the accessories you were telling that you have to go the party

Ya I forgotten about that

Immediately he STARTED SELECTING some pearl sets which were are looking nice

She took that and immediately left from there

She told chopra to send adi to her office

See adi maan has woked with you some days , what is your opnion about him

He is very good madam if not why he will bring back money which I forgotten

I am not asking that I am just asking his qualification

Ido not know that madam

Ok

You know his address

Yes

Then tell him to come to my house

I called for that purpose you can go now



PRECAPE: MAAN IN GEET HOUSE WORKING AS...


GUYS CAN YOU GUESS THAT

THINK DIFFERENTLY AND TELLME... MY STORY IS IS DIFFERENT SO THINK DIFFERENTLY


THANKS YOU GUYS FOR LIKING THE STORY AND ENCOURAGING ME

ACTUALLY I WANT TO POST THE IMAGE OF PEARL SET AND SAREES AND PEARL SET BUT IT IS GETTING DELETED NEXT I WILL TRY


OKAY... BYE

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Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...
Maan is so good at heart...
Geet feeling ticklish...
continue soon

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