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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-2

Geet uncle brij used to look after her and her wealth

When she was 10 years, her uncle got paralytic stroke, he was bed ridden for 8 years,, at that time of her uncle death, her age was 18 years

At that time he called her

Suno beti , mere antim ghadi arahi hai ( he is stun believer of god , his language will alo so be like that )

The wealth , mohinder has given me I am giving to you , have not kept anything for dev, that the satisfaction I am having , dev se shadi karlena ye mere akhari icha hai


Geet ki ishare se doctors, ur nukar bahar chalegye hai

Mamaji, ab kuch dere me app como me chalejage aur uske baat, you will dying

Marna se phele app muje ek sachayi batayage

Kya hai vo beta

When I was 5 years old I saw one scene , whether that scene is truth or not you have to tell me

What is that beti

In one room , one man was sleeping on the bed , another person came ,put a pillow on his face, the other person struggled a lot with suffocation, and later on died------------

At the age of 5 I have seen this scene , is it true

Her uncle was silent

Before dying please tell the truth, do not make me believe by telling the lies

He looked at her ------- he slowly told her that

Ha beti , meni tumhare papa...mohinder ...i killed him

She put her hands on the chest, controlling her anger...

He continued...please pardon me , I came with family as refugee, but what I did , I killed your papa , I want to take your wealth, but god has given the punishment , he is taken my wife, I am bedridden for almost 8 years,

Gagadhara swami muje kaha ye sab mere pap ga nateja hai ,, that why , I have rewritten the whole wealth under your name , even I have not kept anything under the name of dev , I am felling light hear ted now .

Telling half truth and half lies, geet was observing him, how he is telling the things with the mask of goodness , repentance, religion she asked him...

When you have rewritten the wealth in my name mamaji, she asked cooly

Last year only geet

But you told you are repenting from the last 8 years , then why you waited still last year

He became silent ...

She continued ----you are paralytic because of your sins, if you do homa, you will get back legs and hand, 2 years back this was told by gangadhara swami to you , that is why you performed puja, homa, everything, is it mamaji

His face became life less...how you know all this, it is truth , aim repenting a lot now, with the repentance I have given everything to you , now I feeling very happy , heaven is calling me

Death is approaching in 10 min then , at least be truth full to you mamaji... even after swami told to you have not changed the will , you do not want leave that much wealth , another 1 year , you went to hospitals , when the doctors told that it is of no use ... meanwhile gagadhara swami daily started telling your sins, you have committed, and started pressurizing you, you started feeling guilty

Ye ...sab...sab...tumko...kaise pata hai

She just bend down with low voice she told...i told gagandhara swami that to put god fear in you , and tell you to rewrite wealth in my name , then I will give him1 core to swami, even though he is a swami, he is not above money just like you .

He was just staring at her...

He died... Either it is because of the paralytic or in a shock because of her niece, who at age 18 years showed the extraordinary intelligence , don not which reason... but he died

When she became M.D , lot of people tries to manipulate her , from labor strike to general manager corruption she could all thing under control in one year , she could do all this because of her nature that do not believe any one

Every year from her company she pays about I core fees to sri detective agency ( I do not know any thing how much they charge- but it is only express that she pays very huge amount towards the detective agency )

She keeps an ye on the top officers in her firms, their bank accounts, their personal life, their secret life, she tap their phone lines

At the age 24 she became the character like ,"I AM OK., YOU ARE O.K. according to psychology , she takes correct decisions in correct time , that why last 5 year their company stood first in the India

After her mamji death of 6 month , once she asked dev to come for a dinner

Dev was surprised any thing important

She laughed told , you think it is like that only

There were sitting in one of the costliest hotel , manager gave salute to he and left from there , after ten min the dinner had arrived her favorites Chinese pasta eating h this she directly she came into the topic

6 years back you are owner of the wealth, but uncle before dying gave the wealth to me, did you feel bad for this

Why I feel bad geet, before also this wealth was your father no...

But it not any rule that , your father should give the wealth to me back , so tell me whether you are feeling bad or not

No geet... I am not feeling like that, if I want like that, means I would have misbehaved with you , I never proposed you , I never took the advantage with you

It is not dev, you did not proposed me because you are already in love with some one

Dev was shocked, geet you know each and every thing no

Leave it of dev, coming to this, tum mere ek hi rishtadhar ho ,I want agency to write on your name, it will costing some I crore

I did law geet, I cannot take all theses headaches

then what you want ?

I will look after your legal matters, I think so I have that capacity

Ok, then

Next day...

An appointment in the name dev as legal advisor was issue to dev, for the salary of l lakh per month not only this she has transferred the shopping complex worth I crore

Why you did like this geet

No dev it is ok, since uncle has taken care of me since childhood , I want to do something for you

Everyone thinks you are materialistic, but you are very kind, good human being

Dev my only policy is that , no one should harm me , In future if I got married, if my husband did not like you , or I would remove you from the job, now itself I would like to give some amount

Dev nodded his head and said thanks, geet could see his eyes were filled with gratitude

Kabhi, kabhi apne ankhe dokhe dete hai

After two days , she got a letter from sri detective agency that , whether they should give secret report of dev as he is legal advisor

Geet told it is not needed

... sometimes for the small mistakes , we have to repay in big amount





THIS LONG UPDATE DATE I HAVE GIVEN PLEASEEE 😭 GIVE YOUR LIKES AND

HA FROM THE NEXT PART THERE WILL GEET MAAN TAKKAR SO GUYS PLEASE GIVE YOUR LIKE TO MOTIVATE TO WRITE

Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
awsome concept
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just loved it

😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear..👏👏
just loved the way geet dealt with her so called uncle...
geet in indeed an intelligent girl...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
very nice...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am typing ,anyone interested
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART :3

GEET is very beautifull, she has a perfect figure, slim waist, long hair, nice shaped br... every thing

Not only beautiful but also , a little bit arrogance touch make her more beautiful

She is seeing the watch, , exactly at 9 clock she has to do a call n to physcratist

In the afternoon she called him

How much is your consultation charges, she asked in the phone

Who are you? The other person asked her

Doctor is not there

I want to talk to him for an hour, you tell me his fees

He told the fees, immediately she has the draft for the amount and also sent small note that

" to day will talk to you at around 9 clock , please accept your fees"

But she did not mentioned her name in the note

It is exactly 9 clock , she called the number

Good evening , today I called you, I have sent fees, cn I talk to you?

Today doctor-------, the other person was telling her something

But he was cut in the middle

See I do not that much work with you, but listen to me what I told

I thought , in the afternoon you called for taking the appointment , without telling about , I never thought you will talk

I think it is not needed in this issue

I am sorry, you take back your fees, without knowing, you , we cannot treat you

I am not calling form treatment , just listen to my words, then give me your advice

But---------

If you do ot want to listen , there is no need to rerun the amount just send to some charity institution

Who is this devil?

You are thinking what type of patient , iam

No it is not like that, , for treatment different characters of people will come no problem

Geet started telling

Some days back when I was roaming in garden , I saw one incident

Her house is almost I acre, at one side of her house there servants waters, in that quarters there ar servants, my personal manager , drivers, everyone

That day I was roaming in my garden, almost at the time of midnight

Suddenly I heard some noises , I went that side there are some big tress , there was no light , only the light of moon back side of trees on the bench I saw , my personal manager wife and driver

Pm Wife is almost is the age of 26 years, she is good looking and has a good physique , there are almost naked, , she put his leg on him, he is trying to hug her very tightly , they are kissing , I could hear their moans

Geet was staring at the incident , she do not know what to do

There are kissing and hugging there are in their own world , almost forgetting their surroundings, they are almost doing ...

Geet immediately turned back quietly and came from that place

But I am not feeling any thing , when I was 16 years, with my friends I have seen 1 -2 blue films, but after wards I did not feel that much nice so I left it , I know this is the part of marriage life ,

Now... what is your problem

I am coming to that point

Ya tell me

My personal manager has lot of work, he goes out of station a lot

Then

My driver wife has arthritis, she has knee pines, she cannot house work properly , and always taunts him

Doctor! I am coming to the main point , seeing this incident I should get angry on both of them, being mother of 2 kids, she is having affair with another man , and the driver leaving his wife how could he do this , but iam not feeling like that , my personal manager he mainly happy in earning of money , so his wife is happy with this relation , so all 3 of them are happy in their own life--------- that is what I am feeling , it is good mentality , or it is leads to some physiological disorder

There was some silence that side-- Afterwards

I know what is your problem

Thanks

For your problem there is no need of psychiatrist , one who is true person is required for you

She is not talking, she is thinking herself---------

You do not want to tell about yourself why he asked

I think so it is not needed doctor- it is only my thinking , my thinking is correct or not ,that is why this phone, this fees

If I am correct , you do not have parents, love , affection , is not there for you

She did not answered

In your child hood you have been deceived some one , I think so you have lot of wealth , you think everyone will deceive you , take advantage of you , talking about sex relation topic you think I will also take advantage of you , that why you have not given your phone number and address , even you did not believe your psychiatrist

She was not talking at all , but she was surprised by his intelligence , she was thinking the same way

He was telling , you are having carlo sqrkoma ofmendula cindrome ---------- you believe that all these human relations are for selfish needs,--------- for this you have only one medicine

What is that

Self love--- you should love yourself---------

Her face became very red, is he is telling the truth or not

His age will be around above 50 years she know that

Again he started... se your personal manager is going outside to work and earn for the family... He is not having any selfish. But her wife is enjoying herself with your driver ...she is staying with her husband only for security , money

Geet is carefully listening what he is telling

If some one in your company sells your company secrets, you will angry, the same thing you should get angry on them also , if you are not getting angry that means you are so much interested in sex , I think so you have not married even you got the age of 25 years , according to your concept , if tomorrow your driver comes and offers that we will enjoy , you accept that , because there is no problem in that , this is what you are telling

Shut up, she shouted on top of her voice, she just throw ed the phone on the floor, , no one has insulted like this before, at least tried to behave like this before

That night she could not sleep''''.

In the early morning she immediately called the doctor

See yesterday you have insulted me , being a patient I told every thing but what you have done...she started telling

Suniye app kya bolrahe, muje kuch samaj nahi arha hai , just now I have came from delhi

She was shocked

I am talking to physcritist agarwal

Yes Iam

Yesterday I have sent one draft

It is on my table, I was just thinking who has sent me

There is difference between the voice , this voice is different from yesterday

She ws shivering, who ever he ws, but he made fool of me

See yesterday some one has insulted me, jus tell me who is I want to give him a lesson , he will never do such thing in his life

See madam ... Who are you ? what all these ...

But she put the phone

She is feeling this is more insulting than yesterday,

Think he is professional doctor , she told everything to him, when he is giving advices , she was listening to him just making herself a fool

He was giving advices to her , he was laughing at her

Me geet handa ho, itne sare companies mere under hai, mere ek ishare per sab log darte hai ,

He has a done practical joke on her

She took phone and started dialing the number





I DO NOT WHETHER ANY ONE INTERESTED IN THIS STORY OR NOT, OR I WILL DISCONTINUE THIS ONE

PLEASE TELL ME

Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey do do continue
interesting concept
n amazing updt
so sm1 (i am assuming it 2 b maan) spoke 2 her n even diagnosed her problem rightly
n den disappeared!!

superb
do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOL
ROLF
awesome update...
geet ko ullu banaya ...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
geet ko budhhu banaya😆
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG that was Maan I think...

now Geet will hire detectives to know about the person who talked with her...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

actually Sushmita what I feel is that in the beginning u cleared in ur prologue that Geet is not emotional person and there is no sexual attraction between Maan and her although they are husband-wife...so for ur readers Maan-Geet is the meaning of attraction...we remember original Maan-Geet from GHSP...and if even being husband-wife they are not attracted then hopes shatter...that is why so less readers...

but it is ur story and u started to write it for ur satisfaction first...as u r also Maan-Geet fan so u won't write anything without planning so I think the story will eventually turn interesting...

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