FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10 - Page 7

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Maan saved her. Life n geet knws that
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part 8
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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anyone waiting
i am writing the story will try to update by evening

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PART:9

MONSOON has started

Nele aksah par kale badal aise lag rahe ki '''..koi tufhan aa rahi

It started drizzling ,with the sound of window pan geet woke , she went into the balcony

The fresh air was coming ,

She was feeling relaxed , the atmosphere was very good, if any one in her would have enjoyed the scenic beauty but she is geet handa,she was thinking about the business deal which has to be signed

At the same she heard some slight humming sound of a song

Bade ache lagte hai ye dharrti,

Ye nadiya''.

Bade ache lagte hai ye dharti'.ye nadiya'..

Aur

Geet was searching ,who is singing this song

She went down

From the store room maan was humming the song and was painting something , he is not singer, but has a good voice

But he is a good painter

We can tell by seeing that painting

To appko ye bhi ata hai

Maan suddenly was shocked hearing her voice

Iam sorry madam I do not know that you have woken I will give your coffee, leaving his paint brush

Iam sorry madam,, muje pata nahi tha ki app intne subha utjate hi

It alright, geet was taking the coffee cup from his hand

Maan maine bahut sochliya hai

I do not want to keep you as a cook

Kya app '''.you want to remove me

No''''you have saved my lifeYou complete your medicineI will bear all the expenses

No'.no'

You have saved my lifeI want to give you something in return

He did no replied

You are thinking ,iam so materialitistic

I will think about each penny'''ok at least take like a loan , after finishing your studies you can return back

No I do not want to read or complete my studies .. if possible I want to earn something and go to shantiniketan in kolkatta

She was surprised

Shantiniketan''''why'.

Painting is my hobby''.. I want to develop it

Developing'''.

Kuch bhi nahi , I do now want any thing.. just to develop my art''.. he was in trance '' in his own dream land

So you want make painting as professional''. You will sell it

No'. I was just making it for my satisfaction'''. If I get my canvass and brush I do not need anything.

You see these painting. this is about lovers'their first kiss''' see there are in their own world'''..the lover eyes closed and she is enjoying the moment there is some glow in her face..even though there is silence he eyes are speaking a lot ''..

See madam did I brought the correct expression in her face '.. could I was succeeded In bringing the correct expression

She came to know the weakens of his .. every time he used be in his own world'today he is looking different

Geet was feeling very happy now'''..knowing opposite one weakness

Since how many days you were painting this one

It is almost 1 month. everyday I woke up in the morning. Try to concentrate at least for 2-3 hours but iam not getting

My god 'this much time'. If you would have spend on business you have earned profits

He is smiling 'listing to her words see'.how to face today problems thinking about this a business man wakes up in the morning''how give your thoughts in to canvass thinking about this painter will wakes in morning happily

Geet was shocked listing to his words

It is true but you know '.the tensons you face''' but there is a satisfaction'.. that you are giving life to some so many people .. who are working under you

I told just like that only' may you are correct '.if you do face problems in the business may you do not get sleep''.

But for me it is satisfaction'.. '. If I get my canvass and brush I do not need anything. You know sometimes I will cry also

Crying'''it means if is not coming you will cry also

Aisa nahi hai'..if we paint very nicely you will cry '..last time I painted one painting,it came very nicely. seeing that I started crying

You will show me your other painting

Why not ' I will show 'you

Like a small kid who is very happy to show his achievements '..he is behaving same like that

He brought a old big trunk box'.may be 'mughal jamana ka time hoga

He is taking one bundle of calendar papers '.

Oh my god'ki app ne ye sab kuch apne hi paint ki ya hai

Ya almost from 16th year I have started doing the painting

Geet watch dekhrahi thi'abhi to 7 hai'abhi me use ched ske ti ho ' bahut time office jane me

You were telling you have cried after completing the paintingWill you show me that

He is taken that and showed her

Really that was nice painting

That was wonderful painting

Ek ladiki ki painting hai

She is sitting under the tree in beach and watching the sunset

Paiting ka heading lika hai tannnahi

Itna acha painting hai lekin apne uska heading tannahi kyu likha hai

Ye to premika hai ' wo apne pyar keliye intazar karrahi hai

Wo kise intezar karrahi hai'

tammanna se nahi tanhai se darte hain
pyaar se nahi ruswayi se darte hain
milne ki to bahut chahat hai magar
milne ke baad judai se darte hain

App kisi se pyar karte hai kya

Nahi to''''.

Lekin app itna acha tannahi ke bare batarahe hai

Aise nahi hai

He is lost in his world

Kitne mehnet se e paiting banaytha usne ,it took him almost 2-3 months for this painting

Kya soch rahe hai'

Nahi aise kuch nahi hai

Itna acha painting hai'.apne ne frame kyo nahi bana ya ' aise is suitcase rakhdiya

Kaha rakhoo'me to ek place me nahi thartoa'e sab laganekeliya to ek bada ghar chahiye

Dekhilijiya'.kya pata'.koyi mahal ka rani 'miljagi

He was silent

Ap soch rahe hai na ki muje koun milega'''koye to miljage

According to her human are 2 types'.one whi spends their type in their fantasy land, who spends their time to listening songs, spends their time in art.the other who spends their time in productivity it is her 8ht wonder that maan has spends so many hours in just one painting

See iam telling no money is more important than art, see this painting is telling that one only, you have frame this one other wise it will tear

Saying that she took the painting and

Hawa me idhar udhar karrahe thi

Suddenly the painting tore

Iam sorry I never thought it will happen

He was not talking'' sailently he took the painting from her and kept in the suitcase

Iam sorry 'please forgive me ..i never thought it will happen like this.. I will give the amount you have spend on that'

This is only paper and color only 'leave it off

Muje galiti hogayi hai please ..i want rectify it

I will not tell that iam happy'what can anyone do for this

Okay I will do this' you told me know it had taken you 2-3 months , I will give the salary for you in free'. Other things also I will provide' the colors ,papers, canvass..

Can again I can make this painting so leave it of

Okay at least tell the price for this painting I will give the amount

He was trying to smile'okay think that I have given you as a gift'

Her ego was hurt ed now' I will never take gifts from others

I cannot make a price tag for my paintings

Now she is geeting angry

She I would not tore this'this would have been spoiled see,,it is already in last stages..if you sell the painting ,at least you can save your other painting ,why cannot think this logic

Feelings do not have logic

Okay iwill 50 thousand give me your painting

Iam sorry these painting have done for my satisfaction I cannot give them

Give me all your painting I will give you 10lakhs'talking stuborly

He was shocked

She was felling as if she has won over him..

Do not see like that'

Do not be surprised'..you can join in shantiniketan'.and can develop your art.. I will frame all your painting and hang them here '..it will look so nicely' are you surprised' that you are getting so much amount for painting

Yes iam surprised, if iam not selling for 50thousand , how can you think that I will sell for 10 lakhs, I do not know how you are doing the business

Okay tell me how to do business with you she told very coldly

Okay I told you that I will give as a gift

No' I will convince you'. I will give you 1core

Then also I will not give you

He was staring at her ..and moving towards her'..she moving backwards looking at him

She was blocked by the wall

For scribbling something on the paper with the brush and color , I am giving you 1crore' you are telling you will not give you

He was almost touching her ,he came close to her ''she was standing between him and the wall'.. she was standing so close that she could hear his heart beat'.. there was slight shiver in her spine with his closeness, though he is touching her ,he was almost on her

Now she wants to win at any cost ,

Okay I will give you all my wealth then you will give the painting

If you give all your wealth what you will do..

I will beg or iwill do anything it is not your problem , tell me whether you will give me or not

He leaned on her ''his mouth was touching to her ears'. Giving gosembumbs to her in stomach

Okay I will give you

She was shocked

See I used pity on you , being a women , you have seen lot of difficulties in your child hood , you have been cheated by your relative, friends

One night you called be and asked whether you are having any mental problem ''.yes you have get treatment'you have to understand other person feelings'.you have over confidence on your intelligence '. This is very danger in future'. You have get treatment for this ' you have beg or to do something

He is telling very seriously

My painting are more valuable than your wealth'. But I have give treatment for a ziddi ladki ' so I will give defiantly sell you

Geet was shocked

How could she talk like this' how he agreed to this point ,in business deals she used take each every step very carefully , how could she talk like this carelessly , she could not believe herself

I know your character geet ' I will give the example

You know that I did the treatment for you ' not your family doctor'.. if you would asked this question straightly .. we would have told you,'. But you have put situation like that he was feeling very humiliated ' you have very less belief on others '' human policies will change when they are in troubles'you have to face troubles'. Take this paintings' rewrite your wealth in my name

Saying that '. He kept his painting in her hand' if you want you can take back your words , you can cancel the deal

She was directly staring into his eyes

No need tomorrow there will be registration ' she took the papers from him'' how you will not tell lies in your life .. in same way will not take back my words' mainly in the business



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Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks you friends for your supports for your likes and comments

okay guys i have given you a big update ...

so give me a lot of like and comets and likes
and another big twist is coming

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 9
OMG shes really something...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update
just loved it
geet is too much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
She gave her all property for that painting...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ANYONE WAITING FOR THE TWIST
WRITING THE STORY
WILL BE UPDATING SHORTLY
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PART:10

IT is almost 10 in the night , psychiatrist agarwal was in his house and drinking , he is already in his 3rd peg

Dev came there suddenly ,his eyes are red in color

What happened dev, why you are in such a bad mood

You know agarwal geet has sold her whole wealth

What''how''why

What she converted all her wealth in dollars and going to settle in America ,then your work will be easy,tell me what rate she has sold

For 10 old painting

What

'''.

Here geet was trying to sleep on the bed, but she could sleep properly,she never thought that one day she will be going to sell like and end up up like this, but this is not problem, she can manages from this situation, there are so many companies who are willing to give her offers in her company to join as director or she can take loan from the bank and can start a business ,she is no thinking that

Maan

Thinking about him only, making her blood boil, at the last the way he laughed

She was thinking what to do, her only aim is how make maan prove her point, the way he talks about honesty, principles ,she want s to prove that her theory is correct and he is wrong

For this she can do anything,she was thinking deeply ,

At the same time maan was sleeping in his room

Every where there was snow ,sky was touching the land, in that he was painting , there was beautiful lady , he was trying to see her face'.. but

Geet was there'.he saw her standing near her cot, immediately he woke up,

You'.. you are here, he saw the time it is 1clcok in midnight

At this hour

Maan will you marry me

Maan was shoked

You know what you are talking

What happened maan , I will not take any decision in fast, appko kya hai

App to itna acha insane hai, handsome bhi hai, you are not selfish , you can become doctor , you are a good painter, you have a all the qualities for a good husband, do not think that , I want you to marry because for the wealth , i will not look after the business affairs , you take care all that

Still maan was in trance

You are not believing me, you still think that I came with this proposal only to enjoy this wealth

No'no' it is not like that

He do not know what to talk he knows geet attitude, she can bear any thing but not her self respect

He don't what to reply'.

Muje'..muje'. kuch waqt dejeye sochanekeliye'

Apne app se ayihoo isleiye aise baat karrehe haina

Nahi' isa nahi hai

Ye waqt nahi yai insab baat karenekeliye , ab 2 baj rah hai' app please jaye ye, hum kal baat karege

Teekh hai appki marji'.

She went away leaving maan in deep thoughts

Suddenly geet woke up with a phone call

She was shocked listing to the news

She immediately called dev

At this time

Ya come Immediately, it is very important news

Now she behaving true business women trying to control the situation

At the same time she a saw a small packet with that a letter

She started to read the letter

Geet

App bahut ache insan hai, muje nahi pata ki kyon mere pass kyo aya hai , I do not why we ended in arguing, pyar to asie nahi hai, ki subhe payar hojaga, aur sham ko shadi karlo, aisa nahi geet

Everyone only talk but you are different you can put the words into action , you run business in crores , iam painter my world is full of fantasy and live in dreams , sahid app ko hasii ati hai mere is duniye se

I do not know why I behaved with you like that. I do not know why you have taken this decision, you forgot it, I am going to kolkotta tomorrow, I want to join shatinniketan

I have signed your wealth agreement papers, please take it , I am leaving the painting also , you told you will hang in your drawing room , so please take it, iam giving you as a friend

She read letter, sat quietly , there with shock

She is not thinking about maan

At the same dev came

My god what you told is true

Dev was seeing geet'.. you will not do anything

What should I do now,, the building which I constructed has been collapsed, which was constructed by us for government , 2-3 people died under the demise , which may effect on our business, and there may be chance of losing governments tenders , should I should I give paper advertisements stating this, I should shout in my balcony stating that there was loss, tell me what should I should do now

And it is chance that I may go to jail also . tell me what should I do now

You have sold your wealth to the maan

Yes' but he has rejected , he has given back everything,

It is not possible, it should be legal, agreement was not done , not cancellation , as your legal advisor, I am giving advice, now maan is the owner of your companies, so he has to bear everything, either profits or losses

So'' so'. What you are telling

Id anything happens he has face the consequences, that is going to jail

No' I do not agree to your point, it is not good ,

Immediately he called detective agarwal and asked him to trace maan and bring him in geet mansion

No dev''. I will not agree to your point it is not correct

Yes but I am doing as legal advisor

After half hour agarwal came bringing maan along with him

You came very fast with him

He was going out of station we saw in correct time, we brought him

Dev told everything to maan

Did you buy her company from her

Yes I brought , but I thought it was silly, so I returned back to her

I am not asking you what you are thinking, iam just asking whether you have purchased or not

Yes I have purchased

Since yesterday morning you are md of this company

Yes, why you are asking all these

Then dev narrated all the incidents

Maan was shocked'' he slowly came near geet and asked'. If your wealth goes away'. How you will live

Geet was surprised'..he was thinking about her'' she was thinking to tell him everything'''..

She was about tell him

At the same time dev came

And told'. Why you are thinking about her'. We are all here for her''

But tell me if you are m.d of this company, then you have bear all the losses and if you go to the court also you will not win

For this small thing why to go to the court'. Any why how can I send her to jail'. I will take the responsibility , will agree to this even tough only there was only agreement , but not registration , I will take the responsibility

'''''''''''''''

Maan was unpacking his things in his house at the same time geet came to his house

Are you busy

No iam not

If then we will go out and have dinner come

Maan was shocked '.

Dinner with you

Come any way there are losses before that at least we will enjoy our self

telling that she dragged him into the car and are going to the hotel

No I am shocked , you are coming to my house and asking for diner

Why you are surprised

No iam not surprised , but every time when we meet there is some thing twists happening '.

they reaching the hotel

This is the last turn of events in your life I promise you ,

But she did wrong''.. a big twists was going happen which will change her life in an half hour




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Edited by rsusmita - 13 years ago

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