FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago



precap is very confusing...

whose future lover...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one..
maan is indeed a man of his words!!
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is really sweet...
nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the precap
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wats dis precap?????vrrry dangerous.
Future lover????
Of whom????
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice but what's up with precap...that is scary
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Loved the precap
waiting





thanks dear for your roses,, thanks a lot for loving my story
i am writing another story will try to update tomorrow

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update bt scary precap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
writing the story will try to update today
guys i want your suggestion, if you want to continue the story or not, or i will try to end this story fast ,
please tell me

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART:19

THE NEXT DAY , THE STUDENT GROUP WERE ENJOYING IN THE RESTATRENT

They were lost in their world

Meera , so you won the bet tell us what to do

Yes vivek see meera will always wins her bet, telling with an attitude

At the same time server (balu came ) and serving their orders, he did not liked the way they talking about maan,

See he tried to take our room with influence and I have showed him that we cannot sit like that, see as

But balu came between her talks

See he is very nice person, he is painter, even being such a influential person he talked with me very nicely, I was only a server, boy here , but he showed his painting, he is a great painter, yesterday even thought there was no mistake of his he silently went away from here, if he had taken police or used his influence , he would have stayed here, but you know yesterday he was held up in the snow fall luckily I saw him and admitted in the hospital , but he did not tell about you anything, he is very nice person, please do not talk against him,

There was silence in the room ,

Guys we did the mistake, we thought of getting our room and did not see where he will go,

So guys we have to see him,

Saying that meera stoppd balu from going

Can you tell us please in which hospital he is

Taking the address all went to see him

At the same when they are about to enter they saw police commissioner in maan room

Maan singh khurana do you want lodge compliant against them ,

No sir , I do not think so it is their fault,

The fault is mine, I have taken their room by influence

Seeing like this police office went away calmly

Maan was surprised seeing all the students there, he saw the gang leader , the same girl who yesterday was shouting at the manager

Sorry ''

Actually I am not sorry for removing you from the hotel, it was your mistake but iam sorry for that because ,because of us you are in this position , in hospital we thought you will get some room in another hotel, at least we should have talked to you

She was talking without any break

Maan was staring at her,

She extended her hand friends

See sir are you sacred of us ,

No it is not like that

Why are you not extending your hands

See any person In your place would extend his hand , when cute, sexygirl coming herself and extending friend ship,

Okay baba'.

At the same time doctor and came he saw the student group

See this is not fish market see all guys go from here, do not disturb the patient

Nahi dadaji , we are not disturbing him see, we just came to see him , we will leave

Maan laughed at her talks

All of them went away them leaving maan with doctor

Crazy people, , do not know how to talk with elders

Maan I can discharge you, but you have take rest , see being in snow , you hands and fingers will be little bit paining I will give medicines , it will take time to heal and one more thing so not stress yourself , your pain may increase

I will the get the papers ready for your discharging

Seeing the doctor going away, maan lost in thoughts

At the same meera entered

Okay mitraji' conme we will go to hotel

Maan was surprised with her , who is taking decisions, but not at all asking his opinions

I know mitra ji what you are thinking, ki what is this girl, who removed you from the hotel, and the same girl now extending the hand of friend ship and taking to the hotel which she had vacated before

See mitra ji we have 3 rooms , in one girls are there and in another rooms boys are adjusting you can share with them, see now you will not get any room in hotel so come with us

No iam not staying here, iwill go to Mumbai ,

But why you came here to participate in the competition no , see mitraji you have to come

Saying that she packed the luggage and dragged him to hotel room

All of them settled in one room and started to talking

Mitraji what is your age,

Maan suddenly surprised with her question

Why you are asking such question

See you having such handsome hot figure, six packs body ,even our vivek, gopal try to to go gym and get these six packs and try impress their girl friends, but all this you are hiding

See you are dressing typically like art movie hero, with jeans and long kurta

See change your dress code, I will bet you every girl will come after you

Maan was laughing at her antics

Okay now show me the painting which you are going to put in the gallery

It is in another room , you come I will show you , both of them left leaving others

When he opened the painting , he became very blank,

Meera was shocked seeing the painting,

The painting was damaged a lot

Seeing this meera started to cry

, he could understand meera was feeling very bad, but he never expected that she will cry like this

I am sorry, this is all happened because of me

It is okay do not worry, if not this year I will participate in next year

No, I know how much you would have taken time to paint this

Please scold me, , I know you are feeling bad about this ,

Do not worry meera, see I will do another painting , better than this okay do not worry

Really you will do this,

Yes , promise

Pakka promise

Yes meera

Okay then you can start painting

Now'.

Now'.. how can this be possible

See you do not anything about painting see it will take a lot of time , sometimes for drawing single line it will take 10 days

See mitraji, in another hour exhibition starts, at present will keep this painting , judges will see tomorrow evening we have more than 36 hours for painting

See meera do not talk like child, ,it takes for me to paint atleast 3-4 months, now you are telling to do in 34 which is impossible

Why cannot you do daily

This is creativity, meera, there should be some mood, without this I cannot do

I bring mood to you see

It is impossible

See mitraji, for every succeful man , a women is behind him

Now wait and see, your cell is ringing




precape: maan painting...meera helping maan

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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