FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 29
nice part...
why did Geet do that?
poor her...
cont soon dear...
Edited by spvd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
feeling bad for geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont know what to think
what will be maans reaction
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
precap seems intresting
continue soon dear
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PART-30

Maan was in Thailand 'the land of elephants

The place was really very beautiful

of deep valleys,dense forests surrounded by hills

This farm house is situated in one of the hill top

He drifted into his thoughts

Un til now he has never cared for the money, , but he understood the importance of money with one incident

After he told to geet that he accepted the proposal the next day early morning received call from his friend yash ,

What happened yash why you you called in this early morning

Maan didi is in the hospital, again she got the stomach pain

Doctor was telling that she is having appendicites

Didi is his old house owner , she was such nice lady, she look after his needs, lot of times she helped him

He immeidtealy went into the hospital, but the doctor was refusing to do the operation stating that he has do give the money for the operation

Maan seeing the situation , at the same he received call from the geet

Maan where are you, you left the house in a hurry

Geet my didi is in the hospital

What

Ha geet she was house owner she was such nice lady but here the doctor are refusing to operation for lack of funds

Geet could sense from the tone that maan was very upset

Maan just give the phone to that doctor

What geet told to the doctor he did not understand but, until now the same doctor who refused to do the operation with out paying the fees immediately took her in the operation theater,

Maan what did bhabhi told to that doctor

I do not yash

I understood one thing that money has power and can do any thing

He then understood that even thought he never showed any interest in money , the same money and power that money has given has saved one life

He thought if with my painting , geet problems can be solved then

Then atleast for her sake I can do this

His determination for doing the painting has increased ,

Mitraji '.mitraji'

Hearing those words maan came back to his senses

He saw madhavrao and meera were coming

Hello maan singh khurnans, sorry we could not able to receive

Our flight got delayed

It okay sir there is no problem

I will leaving tomorrow, with meera

Meera you go for your fishing ,

Okay papa I know you want to talk in personal, I am leaving bye

Saying that she left that place

Maan she is having smeseters and after that she will come back the exmas will finished in 15 days

But sir how can you send here again

See I know meera want me to do a painting . actually she taken a promise from me, for that there is no need of her staying here

And other thing as a father you should know that I am married ,you should tell her that

No maan she do not know you are married

What

Ha' I teared that paper'of the book which you signed as geet maan

But why you did like this' as a father how could you do like this'.you should not keep her in dark'

She think iam loving her. But it is not like that I have commitments and more than that iam married man

How could you behave like this sir,you become soo low that you are keeping your daughter with a married man, if any one listens to this ,and you are a minister,more responsibilities will on you 'but you are behaving like this is meera is your own child '. I am getting doubt over that, because if she is your own child you will never behave like this

Hearing these'.madhavaroa strated crying

Maan was shocked seeing him

That to a elder person breaking before him

Sir what happened

Maan'meera..meera

Meera' what happened to meera

Meera is going to die in 3 months

What

Yes maan she having blood cancer that on fainal stages.

No sir it has not like that.. may be you are mistaken

No maan..

I am her father' before coming to confrmation' i my self checked .. not onece' I made her test 2-3 times'.i went to all specialists , but there is no use

Maan .. could not able hear those words..

He could not believe that meera is going to die

The way she used called me mitraji'..

Her childishness behavior'

She will make everyone happy with her antics.

No it cannot be like this'..god can so not that much cruel to take her life..

Sir ' you could have taken her states for treatment

Yes maan I have talked to doctors there, there are light chances are there.

I told her that my cousins are there , you have to attend one marriage' she agreed in coming .. but with condition that

She told that she has taken a promise from you that you will participate in international competition of arts, she will make you to do the painting'

That is why I came near to you'

Maan I know I became so low that iam leaving her' but what can I do maan I was defeated as father'

I know she loves you..

I know your character also maan.. you never hurt others'.,you never cross your limits, that why i leaving my daughter with you

He just collapsed on the sofa

Maan was shocked he could not able understand what to tell

At the same time they heard meera voice

Immediately they tried to behave normal

Hello mitraji ' I am back'. See

Maan was staring at meera, slight tear escape from his eyes, he immediately turned back not to show his emotions to her,

Meera iam tired I want to sleep, immediately he went to his room

What happened to him

Nothing dear

Okay you also take we have to take the early morning flight

Next day meera and madharao are going to airport

See mitraji I am coming back, do not think iam leaving you,you have to finish your painiting before I came her

Okay

Maan slight smiled to her words

Mitraji do not smile like that

I do not what you think

Iam not going to leave okay

Maan I am leaving this is my personal number you immediately call me if any thing is needed

Maan was trying to do rough sketch, but he did not like this , he immediately tored it . for last five days , it is happening like this'he is not able to concentrate

Once madharao came to meet

He saw maan was somewhere lost.

What happened maan you did not do anything

I am just trying , iam not geeting , i do not know whether I can fulfill your expectations

How is meera,

She is okay her exmas are exteneded iam leaving for London for confrenece

I just want to meet you before going

Okay sir

Maan can please call me papa.. not sir

, if I got son like you, I always wished one, when meera was born I treated her like her son'.

I brought up like that only

Even though I pampered a lot, she never crossed her limits, she first in helping others, sometimes she used to fight with me for helping others, there was no slight ego in her, sometimes she becomes mother to me, taking care of me

I have seen so many people in the younger generation when they money and their parents are in power, how they behave' but meera she never behaved like that

I do not how can I live without her

Maan saw how helpless a father can be'

What he can do'.just consoling him

Maan

I talked to geet she is okay, all financial problems are solved

Maan you are lucky that that you got as wife'her will power, her determination

Maan it is geeting late will go, ijust want to meet you before going so I came

Saying that he left that place

It is almost ten days now maan tried to work on painting

No one disturbing him, there are 1-2 servants to take care his needs, he just going to the rivers sides and sit there,

Once in while he talked with the geet

Geet nowadays became busy with the company

Madharao told that she got big project from the govt

And she is concentrating on that work

It is almost 15 days that maan came to this city, but he could not concentrate on the work, once in while he tried to concentrate on painting by keeping all his thoughts on one side but no' what happening to me... why cannot i cannot i paint , he was cursing himself,

At that day he reached the home in the midnight

he saw meera sitting on the sofa and waiting for him

he was surprised

meera you are here

precape; maan doing the painting and meera posing as model


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Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
One question...
Maan is wife-lover. He lovs geet. Ryt?
If its so then y he is nevr inspired by geet??
Y cant he paint while thinking abt geet???

Or thr is no lov fr her???
If so then title seems to b meaningless.

An artist's inspiration is alwaz d one whom he lovs whether dat persn supports artist or nt.

Plz clarify dis.
If meera is all d tym maan's inspiration then maaneet relation is totally fake or of "majboori"

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

One question...
Maan is wife-lover. He lovs geet. Ryt?
If its so then y he is nevr inspired by geet??
Y cant he paint while thinking abt geet???

Or thr is no lov fr her???
If so then title seems to b meaningless.

An artist's inspiration is alwaz d one whom he lovs whether dat persn supports artist or nt.

Plz clarify dis.
If meera is all d tym maan's inspiration then maaneet relation is totally fake or of "majboori"


maan has married geet out of pity, he trying to loves her... he wants to maintain the relation of wife and husband...
geet is also different character, this art never inspires her...
emotions could not bonds her... but after the marriage...she trying to understand the bonds and relations
here the title wife is geet and the lover is meera
even maan does not loves meera but meera loves maan
but maan has soft corner for meera

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 30
nice part...
honestly i feel disgusted of Meera and her dad...
at least Meera could be forgiven to some extent for being an idiot to not believe Maan and his marriage but her dad really such a cheap person...
and Maan cant he tell Meera the truth?
hope this honestly doesnt hurt Geet too much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update my poor angel
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PART-31

MAAN WAS SHOCKED SEEING MEERA

Meera you are here , you will be coming after 10 days, after exams, but you came so suddenly

Ha vo kya haina, papa tour pe chalegayithe , I was feeling bore so I came

And what you are doing

Did you see yourself In the mirror, you are looking

Shakal to devadas jaise bandiya,

And painting, servants told that you have not yet started

Vo meera ' I could not able to do that

I know , the reason why you could not do that, I have changed the room , previous was so dark, there was no light see, I changed your room upstairs, see dragged him to the upstairs

He saw the room ,really it was so nice, the French door opened to the balcony , it was full moon day, the moon rays was filling the whole room, she immediately dragged maan in to the balcony

See maan i arranged everything, your canvas, you paints, , now you are not going move from this room until you finish it

, now I will fresh up and come okay saying that she left the room

Maan was dilemma he did not understand what to paint, what concept, his mind was in confusion state, at the same time he heard payal sound , he started at the door

She was standing at the door, the saree which is white colour ,isn mixing with the moon light

Maan slightly put the brush on the canvas, she was seeing him

He understood what he has to do

He saw in her eyes, they were so deep, full of emotions, there was no make up on her body, but a natural glow, was there on her face, he started to do painting with concentration, she was seeing him , he was staring at her, as if capturing her image in his eyes

She understood what he want, she quietly stood there , maan was doing his work, so do not know how many hours passed, the morning sun rays came into the room , but it did not effect them, maan was still doing his work, at last he finished

When he saw that , the painting it came so beautifully he could not able to control;, he stelled on his kness and started crying

She came towards him, she could understrand his feelings, she put his hands on his shoulders, as if she was trying to console him, he immediately Hughes her , and started crying ,

She could not able control her self she

She thigh ed her arms around him, he slowly opened his eyes, suddenly he eyes felt on her , he immediately left meera, iam sorry , iam married

I know that maan

What

Ha maan I came to know that recently , when papa was talking to you , I heard everything

Every thing, that , iam going to die soon

Meera...she hugged him and started to cry

Meera '

Maan I love you '

I do not know when I fallen in love , but I started to love, when i started to love you I do not know that you are married, when I came to know that it out of my hands,

Meera'..it is'.

I know maan I cannot love you , there is no right for me to love you'

Next week I am going to London for future treatment , before that I just want to come and meet and want you to finish this painting , I do not know that I will become model for your painting, even when I die'..

Meera'

Maan it is truth we should accept it

Before going I just want to request you, please never forget me

Tomorrow I am leaving, the work for which I came was finished'saying that she quietly went away from the room

When the next day , when maan woke meera had already left, his painting was missing from the stand

There was small note

Mitraji iam leaving iam taking the painitng also with me

'''''''''''''..

Maan reached his house , geet felt very happy seeing him,

Ha geet I finished the painting..

Geet could understand that maan was disturbed

The next day maan received a courier, there was beautiful tajmahal inside pack and one small note'.

Maan I will be wating in the xxx hotel , will be wating for your call' if you will not call in halfhour I am going to die

Seeing the note maan was shocked .. he did not understand why meera will be sending like this letter

Geet was seariously reading one business magazine

Meera was wating for the maan, in the airport, just now the flight has arrived

..her eyes were searching for maan, ..at the same time

Agarwal came near to her

Are you meera

Ha

Maan has send me hr

Ha , he is busy with the work so he told me to pick up you'

App

My name is yash'we were friends

She was staring at him as if not beliving him..

You are having a doubt because of age difference, iam looking old.. he is young'how can thre be a friend ship

She he used stay with me before, marriage'. Age never came before our friend ship. He used share everything 'that is why iam here to pick up here'

Meera could feel his intense gaze on hr body,

When he stressed the words everything,'there was unknown fear in her mind

She quietly followed him to the car , he immediately took her to hotel

Please you take rest , maan will be coming to meet you

Saying that agarwal immediately left that place

Meera was feeling sacred'. May be something bad may going to happen sometimes our sixth sense will be telling us more

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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