New MaanEet OS~ A Night under the Moon~pt3pg27-N31 - Page 15

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Originally posted by: Mariam94

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A night under the MOON


Warning 18+

"Maan I am telling ur for the last time plz chodye na mujeh" Geet said as she felt tickle in her tummy as Maan nuzzled his face on it. "Maan plz" Geet said pleading
"No" Maan replied
"Maan plz hato na mujhe sone hai" Geet said making a baby face showing how tired she is
"Kaha na nahi" Maan said and continued with his torture, Geet ran her finger in his hair and said "Kya baat Mr. Khurana aaj itna pyar kyun a raha hai hum pe" Maan moved up and their eyes met and then he hid his face in her nape and said "Matlab"
Geet- aaj se pahel tu ek bar bhi I love u nahi bola aur abhi_______
Maan smiled at her unfinished sentence and says "Mrs. Geet Khurana wo kya hai na aaj se pahle mujhe licenses nahi mili thi na tu isi liye is dil ko kabo main rakhna pada, nahi tu kab kis ke kaid main grift ho jata tu phir mera kya hota"
"licenses, kaun si licenses" Geet asked confused
Maan- ummm meri budhu Mrs. Khurana Marriage licenses tu aaj hi mila hai na" Geet blushed hearing that but then gives him a glare and said "aap ne mujhe budhu kaha, main kaha se aap ko budhu lagti hoon"
Maan- Puri" Geet lips turn into a big O and says " jao main aap ne nahi bolti, kati, aur aap mere pass bhi nahi a sakte" with that saying she pushed him off of the little bed and he falls on the floor with a thud "Geet" Maan sternly says just then their was a knock on the door, Maan went to open the door while he rubbed his back "Sir we will be landing shortly" the air hostess said
Maan- hmm thanks "with that he closes the door and as he turned he saw Geet standing their fixing her dress, Geet blushed seeing him looking at her like this then she walked to him and waved her hand in front on him and said "aise kya deakh rahe ho" without saying anything Maan just pulls her toward him and took her lips in his and started Kissing her, Geet went along with him coz bynow she knew protesting with him means asking for more so she just kissed him back with equal passion. After a while they broke off of their never ending kiss, as Maan continue to stare at her Geet wiped his lips and said "bataiye na hum kaha ja rahe hai, main kab se poch rahi hoon par aap hoke surprise bol kar chup ho gaye ho
Maan- Geet I had told u earlier agar surprise bata diya tu phir surprise kya rahe ga" and he kissed her forehead and said "acha tum ja kar freshen up ho jao we will be landing shortly" Geet nods in yes and leave for Washroom while Maan made few calls_______

"Maan ye Island Kitna pyara hai, hain na, hum yeha kitne din rahenge" Geet asked as she come out on the porch getting the tour of the whole house, where the whole island was visible and under the blue moon the ocean was twinkling like a star "jab tak tum chaho" Maan said as he hugged her from back resting his chin on her shoulder "Sachi"
Maan- Muchi
Geet- Maan yeha koi aur nahi ata kya
Maan- nahi, ye sirf aur sirf Hamara hai
Geet turned and hugged him and said "I love u Maan"
Maan- I love u too jan, acha aab chalo change kar lo, u must be tired" Geet nods and they both walks in.

"Maaan" Geet screamed as she stared at the night dresses that hang in front of her. She closed her eyes and then shuts the door with bang and walks out of the washroom and stared at Maan angrily who just stepped in the room hearing her screaming
Maan- Jaan what happened
Geet- ye kya hai" and shows him a nighty
Maan smirks seeing the nighty in her hand and starts walking toward her saying "Geet night dress hai aur kya hai"
Geet- wo tu mujhe bhi pata hai but you know na I don't ware these kind of dress
Maan- good you don't wear such a dress
"Tu phir ye sab kyun" Geet asked making a baby face, Maan pulls her toward himself and says "ye sab mere liye hai"
Geet- tu kya ye sab aap wear karo ge, ladki ki nighty
Maan- NO, you will be wearing it for me
"Never" Geet says and comes out of is embrace, Maan pulls her back and says "Yes" Geet stood their shaking her head in no and says "Maan no na plz deakhiye na ye nighty kitne chote aur"
"Geer yeha pe sirf main aur tum ho plz wear it for me na"
Geet- par Maan
"Jaan plz" Maan said as he creased her neck, Geet was left with no other option other than to wear it, she goes back and picks out a decent and less reveling nighty and comes out wearing it, but Maan was nowhere to be seen in the room, "ye Maan kaha chale gaye" Geet said as she came out of the room looking for him and just then her cell beeped and when she looked at her cell there was a message from maan saying He is waiting for her at the beach, "ye is waqt beach pe kya kar rahe hai" Geet said as she walked to outside toward the beach but then she was left shocked seeing the Bed there with rose petals on it and Maan standing their spreading the rose petals on the bed, "Maan" Geet said and Maan turned to see his beautiful wife standing their under the moon looking just like a pari, He walked to her, "You look beautiful" Maan said burring his face in her hair, "Maan ye bed...yehan kyun" Geet asked breathing heavily.

"I want to spend our first night under the moon Geet, jo hamari pyar ki gawah bane gi, jo har raat apni roshni se hamare zindagi main roshni karegi, I want to make love to u under the moon" Maan said nuzzling his face in her hair, kissing her earlobe making her lost under his black magic and in a sec Geet was in his arm, Maan brought Geet to the bed and made her sat and he also sat beside her, Geet looked everywhere avoiding looking at him and she knew today there is no escaping, Today she will become his, Maan ki Geet, lost in her thought she didn't even realized when Maan made her lay on the bed and was softly running his finger on her face, then to lips, to her jaw line, to collarbone. "Maaan" Geet gasped as she felt a tug on her neck and she held his hand and nodded her head in no. Maan kissed her hand and looked at her and said "Geet aaj hamare beeck kisi ko bhi ane ki ijazat nahi hai, in he bhi nahi"
"Maan plz ise mat nikaliye, its not just a mere necklace, ye ek shugan ki pahchan hai jo use apne husband se jodeti hai aur main aab aap se kisi bhi tarha se juda nahi hona chathi hoon" Maan kissed her forehead and then kissed away here tears "why do u cry over small things, theek hai nahi nikal raha bas, yar tum ladkiyun itni senti kyun hoti ho, har choti choti baat pe ro deti ho"
Geet- aap ke liye ye choti si baad hogi par mere liye nahi
Maan- acha suno
Geet- hmm
Maan- aaj raat rone ka hi irada hai ye phir kuch aur karne ke bhi
"Maaan" Geet says and hides her face in his embrace
"so should I consider this as a yes Jaan" Maan asked as his hand traveled in the back of her, Geet just hugs him tight "Hmm so I will take this as an Yes" with that saying he pulled her out his embrace and kissed her on her lip as his hand on the back found the sting of the nighty that held it. "Maaan" Geet mooned in the kiss as she felt the night string open. Maan pulled a white silk spread over them as he fully took her nighty off of her leaving her in her inner. Maan moves from her lips to her neck planting wet kisses all over her exposed skin, biting her leaving his love mark. Geet dig her nail on his neck pressing him close to her. She took a deep breath, feeling his lips touch the nape of her neck. She arched her back, breathing faster, feeling his hands move on her body Geet held his hair tightly in a her fist as he kissed every bit inch of her white skin which glistened under the moon. Maan kissed her on her lip before his lips trailed down her neck sending shivers down her spine, then his hand touched her breast over her bra, lightly stroking the already harden nipple. she shudder and bit his earlobe with the pleasure making him groan and he pinched her nipple harder. She pressed her thigh against his sensitive hardness, leaning deeper into his arms. After a while of being sweetly tortured by Maan Geet rolled on top of him. Sitting up on him she smiles and he looks at her perfect body."You look beautiful Jaan" he says, his breath ragged and she runs a finger down his firm chest, rippling over to his stomach. Maan gets up a little on his elbow and kisses her just above her cleavage and bit her their sucking on the skin and then soothing it with a soft kiss. Geet pushed him back on the bed and kissed him passionately on the lip, her tongue explored his mouth as her hand worked in trying to open the buttons of his shervani. After a while Geet broke off of the kiss as she felt out of breath and then looked at Maan angrily "this is not fair, aap meri help nahi kar rahe ho" Maan chuckles seeing her irritated face and says "tumne bhi tu nahi ki, I had to do it all myself"

Geet- this is cheating hun, you made me wear such a short nighty and u got it off of me easily, but you're still wearing this stupid sherrr" Before she could finish she felt Maan creasing her bare waist and in a jerk Maan pulled her down toward him and huskily says "how does that matter"

Geet- it matter, that nighty had only one string and u easily pulled it out

"Hmmm" Maan said and took her complaining lips in his and once again they kissed each other and Maan helped Geet in unbuttoning the shervani. Maan sat up taking Geet on his lap while Geet both leg rested on either side busy kissing biting his bare body. "jaan ek min plz" Maan said trying to take his shervani off but couldn't as Geet kiss was making him weak "you're not helping me here" Maan said

"you didn't help me either did you" Geet said looking into his eyes and then her lips trailed down his neck biting and sucking his skin then soothing the pain, she went down his chest and bit on the nipple "ouch Geet" she heard Maan say and she instantly looks at him smirking and then once again puts his nipple in her mouth soothing the pain. He discarded his own clothing and he violently rolled over Geet bringing her under him and said "you had ur little fun time jaan, and now its my turn" saying that he at once removed her bra and his mouth closed around her breast, sucking, biting teasing her with his tongue, while his hand pinched on the other nipple. Geet dig her nail on his back. He kissed and licked his way to her nipples. He swirled his tongue around each one as it hardened with arousal. She was getting wet. After giving his full attention to both of the breast Maan looked at Geet who had her eyes closed and breathing unevenly, he ran his hand through her hair and softly kisses her lip making her open her eyes instantly "Oh Maan" Geet said hugging him burring her face in his nape and said "Maan make love to me"

"Not so soon Jaan" Maan said as he leans up on his elbow and covers her with hungry kisses stroking his way down from her neck, stopping at her breasts then dancing his fingers lightly on her stomach. She came alive with the wanting of him. He slide his arms down her sides and up the back of her slender figure. His hands roamed freely over her body while she clung to him in desire. His hand stroked her flat stomach and then moved lower. Caressing her hip and upper thigh, goose bumps formed on her skin as the tingling sensation raced over her body. He pinched her nipple between his thumb and fore finger, slightly pulling it out, keeping just enough pressure to make it hard and hurt and she gasped in pleasure feeling the pain with pleasure. He gently bit her nipple and suckled on it enjoying the taste of her supple skin. As he continued to pleasure her, making her moan his name in the open sky, her sweet moan mixing with the wave of ocean water playing like a music in the back. She moaned as he roughly kneaded her breasts hard. He thrust his pelvis against hers and she gasped as she felt his hard c*** pressing into her p****"

"Maaan" Geet moaned as Maan thrust into her and she closed her eyes tightly feeling the pain and pleasure well up inside her, his length enveloped in her slickness, his movements were making her shudder and tighten around him. Harder and deeper he thrust in her feeling himself swelling inside her, and then taking her into a pleasurable yet passionate world many times before he spilled himself in her with a harsh moan. He kissed her lost in the passionate tempest of his climax as he had never been before. Her beautiful brown eyes rolled to the back of her head in pleasure. He slowed down his thrusts as she arched her back into him. Maan slowly slide out of her and lays down beside her. he took her face between both hands and kissed her reverently and softly whisper "I love u Geet"

"I love u too Maan" Geet says moving closer to Maan in his embrace as the sleep took over them after a blissful yet passionate lovemaking under the full bright Moon, in A night under the Moon.

TheEND

Credits To all the WRITERS FOR HELPING ME: I Have read lots of FF's on IF and whatever I know and Read it from India-Forums, I tried to write it in my way and with the knowledge i had, so if some words or phases are matching then plz forgive me and I AM SORRY, KINDLY MSG ME I WILL REMOVE IT, I KNOW WRITERS SPENT THERE PRECIOUS TIME WRITING FAN-FICTION AND PEOPLE COPYING THEIR WORKS, IT REALLY HURT, AND I AM TRULY SORRY FROM BOTTOM OF MY HURT IF I ACCIDENTALLY HURT THE WRITER. SO i AM GIVING ALL THE CREDIT TO ALL THE WRITER WHO WROTE THESE KIND OF SCENE COZ IT WAS ALL THEM WHO HELPED IN THINKING TO WRITE SUCH A SCENE LIKE THIS, SO THANK U SO VERY MUCH ALL THE WRITERS.

First of all I would like say Thank u so much to all of u for liking the other two part of this OS, I was really happy to see the likes and comment u guys made. I hope u all will also like this update, plz ignore all the mistakes and anything u didn't like in this part coz this is the first time i wrote something like this and took me more than just few days to write. I hope its worth reading for u guys. Plz press the like button and plzzz do comment and let me know how is it.

Once again Thank U To ALL,

Sorry Guys for removing this part from the post but I had few things to edit in last part which I forgot to do and had to add few more things, but I think I am done editing now, hope u all enjoy it.

Love Mariam

Edited by Mariam94 - 12 years ago
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WIll PM the update tomorrow😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb one...
Loved the naughty maan...
indeed it was a nite under the moon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update.
beautiful ending.
love it so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simply Awesome
loved it...
hyeee love dis notty maan
Thankx for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow this was such a hottt and passionate update...

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