New MaanEet OS~ A Night under the Moon~pt3pg27-N31

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Hi guys, I know i should be concentrating on my other FF but I wrote this OS during my School days, as always I didn't felt like it even make sense but at last I have decided to post this OS as a little make up for my other work as i am not able to post it regularly. Anyway enough of My bak bak will post the OS.



"A Night in the Rain"

It was raining heavily the night she met him. She was walking alone on the street in her bridal wear lost in her thoughts when she bumped into his hard toned chest. She fumbled back with her heavy clothes and was about to fall back when she felt two strong arm wrapping around her waist. The rain drops fell on her face hiding her tears from him as she closed her eyes waiting for to hit the ground. but when she didn't felt the ground underneath her she slowly opened her eyes only to meet his and he made her stand on her feet. as she balanced herself on her feet she stared at him looking right into his, which held nothing but pain. The pain I could clearly see in his dark eyes, the pain I just went through, the pain of being betraying by the person whom you loved more than yourself but in his case it was him who betrayed the girl who loved him more than her own life, the pain of betraying your love. she stood their looking into his dark eyes reading his heart like an open book, "well why wouldn't I , I went through the same pain didn't I" she mentally said to herself. then she just walked pass him but only to be stopped by him as he held her wrist and in a jerk he pulled her toward himself. He held her by her shoulder digging his nails on her bare skin, she winced in pain not being able to bare the pain he was giving her. She closed her eyes letting the tears run down her cheek with the rain drop falling on her face, but then she felt his fingers on her cheeks, her eyes snapped open as he wiped her tears, while she placed her hand on his cheek. He kissed her palm and said "why do you have the same pain as me Geet" she heard him asking. Geet smiled at him and said "because i love you" but they both knew their heart was in pain crying to be in each other arm.

Maan- why do you love me this much, when in return I only gave you pain"

"dil hamare bas main tu nahi hota, aur phir pyar main koi suad tu nahi hota, ye zarori tu nahi ke hum jis se pyar kare wo badle main hamein sirf khushi aur pyar de, wo dard bhi tu de sakta hai" Geet said looking into his dark guilty eyes. "When you knew I am only capable of giving you pain, then why did you agree for this marriage" Maan asked her as he cupped her face in his palm

Geet- Hum aap se sachi mohabbat karte hai, aur aap ke saath zindagi betana chate the aap ki humsafar ban kar, aab chahe wo dard ka ho ya khushi ki

Maan- Itni mohabbat

"koi humse ye na poche hamein mohabbat hai kitni aap se

Na kar payge beyan inhe hum lafzon main ke kitni mohabbat hai aap se"

She said as he touched her head with his, she stared at his lips as his breath fell on her lips "I Love you" Geet said as she clutched on his shervani in her fist. "Don't" soon those word escaped from Maan lips she looked up angrily only to meet his eyes, which showed nothing but guilt and pain. she melted the moments she looked in his eyes, painful eyes, but then as she remember what he just said she pushed him back saying "aap hote kaun hai mujh se ye kah ne wale ke mujhe aap se pyar karna chiye ya nahi, Mana ke main aap se be inteha mohabbat karti hoon par is ka ye matlab tu nahi ke aap meri zindagi ke faisle kare, ek baat aap meri achi se jaan lijye, main ne kal bhi aap se hi pyar kiya hai, aaj bhi kaurnig aur marte dam tak karungi, samjhe..." before she could say further she felt being pulled and the next moments she felt his fingers on his lips, while the other one was holding her by her waist "Shhh...kitna gussa karti ho" Maan said as he creased her lips with his thumb roughly making her close her eyes in pleasure that he was creating in her.

Geet- Kyun mujhe haq nahi aap se naraz ya aap pe gussa krne ka

"ye haq sirf tumhe hi tu hai" Maan said still creasing her lips, Geet gets lost under his black magic, Maan looks at her face as the rain drops fell on her face adding to her beauty..."waise you look more beautiful when you are angry" Geet blushed but them looked at him angrily and says "Dhust Dhanav"

"Oh, i missed hearing that a lot" Maan said taking Geet into his embrace as Geet said "and I missed you Maan" they both stood in each other embrace for a while as the rain pour on them making their body glued to each other, but then Maan breaks the hug and takes few step back and sits on his knees holding his hand out in front of Geet and says "Geet I know i was stupid to walk out of Marriage like this but will you say yes to marry me again, coz in this few hrs I have realized I am nothing without u, my life is nothing my Geet, plz bolo kya tum mujh se shadi karogi" Geet eyes welled up with tears as she stared at Maan and says "Mama Papa"

Maan- you don't worry about them, just answer to my question" Geet smiles and nod in yes. as soon she nods Maan stands up and kisses her passionately, till they both were out of breath. After they broke out of their long passionate kiss Geet hid her face in his chest hugging him tight, Maan also hugs her tight as they both stood under the rain in each other embrace. "chelien" after a while Maan said, Geet looked at him "Kahan"

Maan- ek hone"

Geet- abhi

Maan- haan aab aur main tumhare bina nahi rah sakta" Geet blushed hearing him but then gives him a glare and says "aap buath bure ho, dhust dhanav bhi ho"

Maan looked at her making a baby face and says "aab main ne kya kiya"

Geet- aap sab kuch kar le tu hoon phir kah te ho, main kya kiya, aise ke jaise jante hi nahi ho" Maan cupped Geet face in his palm as tears rolled down her eyes, but were instantly wiped by him "Geet kya huwa" Geet looks at him and says "aap ko mujhe dard main tarapta deakh acha lagta hai , hain na"

Maan- aisa nahi hai

Geet- aisa hi hai, agar aisa nahi hota tu aap humse ye kabhi na kah te ke I shouldn't love you, ye kabhi na kah te ke you only give me pain...jab ke aap aur main dono hi janite hain ke if I can be happy with anyone then its only with whom I can be happy, aap hi tu meri zindagi ki khushi ho, jeene ki wajha ho, Maan ke bina geet kabhi geet nahi rahe gi, Jis din Maan geet ka nahi raha wo din Geet ke liye aakhri din hoga" Maan just stood there staring at her lost in her talk, in her love, how could someone love someone this much, well this is not just someone else, she was his Geet, Maan ki Geet...Maan comes out his thought when he heard Geet saying "agar aap ko mujhe dard main deakh khushi milti hai tu yeahi sahi, pal plz mujhe khud se kabhi juda mat karna, warna main mar jaungi main..." Before she could have said further Maan slams his lips on hers, sealing her lips and kissed her tight, at first Geet eyes widen with the sudden kiss, but slowly she closes her eyes feeling his love in the kiss and kissed him back equally. Maan bit her lips as he was struggling to get in her mouth and when she gasped his tongue went in and he started kissing playing her aggressively with her tongue sucking it and they kissed each other like there was no tomorrow. soon they breaks of their kiss which seems like a never ending one. Geet placed her hand on his cheeks and says "I love you, I really do more than myself" and as a reply Maan said "and I love my JAAN" with that saying Maan scooped her in his arm and took her to a nearby Mandir. all the while they both stared at each other. as they reached the mandir Maan slowly puts Geet down and they both takes their slipper out and makes their way in. Maan goes and lit the fire and then comes back to Geet, he fixes her dupatta on her head and walks with her near the fire. Then Maan goes and takes the mangalsutar from the thal and a pinch of sindoor in his hand, As Maan puts the sindoor on Geet she closed her eyes, then Maan puts the mangalsutar around her neck. Then Maan holds Geet hand in his and starts to walk around the fire, while geet just stared at him as he walked around the fire. It was Geet turn to walk in front on Maan, she walk ahead of him and took the last phera. Soon as the pehra ended Maan scooped her in his arm and walked out, soon they came to a stop where Maan car was parked, He puts Geet in the car and walks around the driver's seat and drove away. In the car Geet sat their lost in her newly found life, but somewhere she was also scared of her parents and Dadi reactions as Maan had denied to marry Geet on the mandap and now they married each other without their blessing, but for now Geet decided to not think about it as she didn't wanted Maan to get worry and she also knew if Maan is with her she can easily face the world. A she looked on the road she knew by now that they were not going to KM, she looks at Maan and thinks of asking where are they going, but stops knowing he won't tell her so she just sits back and relaxes and soon dose of to sleep as she was really tired. Maan looked at her sleeping peacefully, he felt bad for hurting, he knew she loved him beyond his imagination and still he always ends up hurting her and today he hurted her on their wedding day which was her dream but he ended of ruining it, but not anymore not in this life time and would do anything to keep her happy from now on. Soon they came to stop, Maan picked her in his arm Geet snuggle closed to him feeling the sudden chill "Maan" Geet said feeling cold.

Maan- hmm

Geet- why are we here (they are in jungle where they first met)

Maan- I thought you were sleeping

Geet- I was, but not anymore

Maan- why not now

Geet- aap ki bahon main akar neend kise aati hai

Maan- acha Ji" Geet blushes and holds him tight, "Not fair" Geet looks at him confused and says "kyun kya huwa" Maan makes a baby face and says "tum jag gai and now there won't be any surprise"

"SURPRISE" Geet excitedly says, then cutely says "Maan tell me na what is the surprise"

Maan- agar bata diya tu phir surprise kya rahe ga, Geet why don't u do one thing"

Geet- kya

Maan- just go back to sleep

Geet- WHATTT

Maan- Geet I told you to go back to sleep not to shout like this" Geet makes an O face and says "Shout na karu tu kya karu, Shadi ke pahli raat ko hi agar mea pati ye bole ki Geet just go to sleep without doing anything tu main kya karu" Just as those word escaped her mouth, Maan stops walking and looks at Geet with lustful eyes, as they both stared at each other Geet saw the sudden change in his eyes filled with desire, lust and love, that when she realized what she just spoke, as the realization hit her she couldn't look in to his eyes anymore and bend her head down as Maan continues to stare at her. Geet felt her cheeks burn with his gaze. "Maan" Geet finally spoke trying breaking Maan gaze "Hmm" Maan replied as he still stared at her, "aise mat deakhiye na" Geet said as she tighten her hand around his neck. "tu phir kaise deakho, tumhi bata do na" Maan said, Geet knew he won't stop now but she had to stop him and says "Maan hum chalein"

Maan- kahan

Geet- surprise hamara wait kar raha hai

Maan- hmm karne do

Geet- Maan plz chalein na

Maan- ok but before that you have to give me something

Geet- kya chiye aap ko" Maan looked at her lips then back at her and says "You have to kiss me" Geet shook her head in denial and said "No way Maan, main aap ko kiss nahi kar ne wali" Maan makes a baby face and says "Kyun"

"Kyun, Kyun ka kya matlab, bas nahi karni tu nahi karni" Geet says turning her face sideways.

Maan- Geet think twice and if I do something then don't blame, phir mat kahna ke main ne tumhe warn nahi kiya" Geet first looks at him angrily and them makes a baby face and ask "Maan aap kya karoge" without replying he slides her down and makes her stand on her Feet and says "kuch nahi bas..." he leaves his sentence unfinished and slams his lips on hers and backs her up against the tree and starts kissing her, Geet stood their shocked with her eyes wide open. Geet started hitting on his chest with her small fist, Maan gets hold of her hands and pins them above her head and gives her a look of "I warned you" after giving the look he goes back and trail hot kisses on her neck then collarbone, he kisses her above her cleavage . Geet closes her eyes and slowly entangle her finger in his hair with the pleasure he was evoking in her. "Maan" Geet moaned as he bit her on her collarbone leaving his love mark. "Hmm" Maan said as he continues to trail kisses on her "Chaliye na yeha se plz" Geet said which came out more like a moan. Maan stops kissing her and looks at her face, he wished the time could stop here and he could just stand here and stare at her, "Maan pl..." before she could say further Maan kissed her on her forehead and said "hmm chalo" as they starts to walk Maan stops and says "Geet ek min" Geet looks at him and sees him taking a blink fold out of his pocket then he walks to her and puts the blindfold around her eyes "Maan ye kya kar rahe hai aap"
"Shhh" maan places his finger on her lip and says "surprise thodi na ruin karna hai mujhe, aab ache bache ki trha chup chap meri bahon main raho, no whining" with that saying he scooped her in his arm and starts walking toward a little cottage that he had gotten built in this jungle with all the comforts. Soon they reached their little cottage, Maan puts Geet down and takes the blindfold off of her eyes and tells her to open her slowly not wanting the light to hurt her eyes. as she looked around the she stood their mesmerized by the decoration everything was their of her likes, red roses with white orchids, decorating every little corner of this little cottage and in the middle there was a bed where "Maaneet" was written with rose petals and a heart around it, electric candles were lit all around adding to the beauty. Maan came from behind and slides his hand on her waist and hugs her from back resting his chin on her shoulder and says "how did u like my surprise" and nibbles her earlobe. Geet lets out a slight moans, she turns and hugs him saying "bauth pyara"

Maan scooped her in his arm and took her to the bed and made her sit in the mid, then he sat next to her and helped her take out the jewelry and opens her pleat all the while Geet kept looking everywhere else but not meeting his gaze "Kya irada hai tumhara Geet, hmm" Maan said as he nuzzled in her hair. "Maan main wo...hum..." before she could word it what she wanted to say, Maan made her lay and came on top of her and starts kissing. Geet closed her eyes as she felt helpless not being able to word out her thought and stop him coz she didn't wanted to hurt him, but still she didn't want to start their new life without elders blessings. Maan felt the stiffness in her body, he looked at her face and saw her eyes closed, when Maan moved away from her, Geet quickly shut her eyes tightly which were already closed and tears rolled down her eyes, Maan kissed it away, and made her look at him, as they both stared at each other, Maan understood her unsaid word and touched her head with his and said "tum kuch bolti kyun nahi"
Geet- kaise bolde ti, aap ko bura lagta tu
Maan- aur abhi kya lag raha hai, jab tum mujhe se apni dil ki batein nahi bolti tab mujhe aur bhi zidya dard hota hai, tab mujhe dukh hota hai, Geet mere liye tumhari khushi se bharkar kuch bhi nahi hai aab
Geet- sachi, mujhe tu nahi lagta
Maan pins her hand on either side and said "kyun tumhe kyun nahi lagta"
Geet- maan haat chodiye na dard ho raha hai,
Maan- nahi pahle bato tumhe kyun nahi lagta"
Geet- aap tu wo hi karte ho jo aap ko acha lagta hai
Maan- aisa nahi hai
Geet- really tu phir mere kahne ke baad bhi aapne mera haat kyun nahi choda
Maan makes a baby face and kisses her hand and says "inhe main chodne ke liye thodi na pakda hai" saying that he slides next to her holding by waist
Geet rest her head on his chest and kisses him just above his heart and said "Thank u"
Maan- hmm sirf aaj ki raat, kal ke bad I won't listen to u,
"kal ke bad I won't stop u either" saying that she hides her face in his chest...
Maan- you know what Geet
"hmm" lost in his embrace
Maan- in one way its gud we are not doing anything,
Geet looked up at him confused
Maan- that way I will get more time to make our first night memorable
Geet just hugs him tight silently praying to her Baba ji for the next day coming and hoping everything will be good and soon they both dose of to sleep lost in their dream world of theirs.

To Be Continued...

Author Note:

I know some of u will be confused as to why Maan broke the marriage, but don't worry u will get to know in the next part, do comment and tell me how is it, you can throw chapal or tamater at me but do comment and let me know how u all like it and pleasss press the like button. Will post the next part of this OS once i get good response from u all

Thank U To ALL,

Mariam

Shub Vivah Part 2 MaanEet OS

A Night Under the Moon Part 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum dear

if maan luv's her so much den why he had tken such decision
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: freya123

beautiful conti soon



thanks for liking it dear
will try to finish writing the little bit thats left and post it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smallville

Awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!



thanks for liking the update dear
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thanks for liking the update dear
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Originally posted by: khushi1022

awesum dear

if maan luv's her so much den why he had tken such decision




thanks for liking it dear
u will know why he took the decision in the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mariam 🤗...thank u for this lovely OS and PM...it was painful and beautiful...wondering why Maan first stopped the marriage...what happened to make him marry her again...glad they are together now...plz continue...TC 😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting
y did dey break up
nd den getting married in the absence of elders
nd waiiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful start..
As u said i m little confused...
Loved geet's love for maan..
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beautiful os...
but definitely left me lil bit confused...
so am waiting for the next part to clear out that...
continue soon... will u pm me pls

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