MG FF: Journey of hate to love pt 19 pg 139 02/11 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats dear , nice start
so she is suffering from some thing, that is why she is hiding from maan
comtinue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update dear...
love Muskaan caring nature for her dad...
sweet father daughter moments...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME PART. LOVED IT & EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx for pm
the update is realy nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Congratz on new ff di
wow great cncept just lovd it..
So maaneet have daughter n they r seperatd it's clear that smethng hapnd in past
omg my maan is plang smethng for geet kya karega wo..and interestng to c geet is doctor also lovd muskan..
Cnt soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
so Maan and Geet have a daughter Muskaan and shes with Maan...
but why did Geet leave them?
and why Maan wants revenge?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting waiting for more do add me in u r pm list dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: uteem

waiting for n update


😊 i will update tomorrow morning, as of now i am waiting for jyothi's mail to update DBUC.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2:


In the evening geet is back to her flat, she stays in 2 BHK flat all alone. When she was small she had a family and her life is filled with happiness but due to some reasons she preferred to be alone and she don't want any relationships, she want her life to be free and she like to do what ever she wants. She is happy in her life but not fully too there is always some sort of pain in her eyes which no one notices, she covers it with her smile always. For all she is GEET HANDA, but for herself she is GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA, even though she hates relationships and family she felt a warmth when maan is near her. But it doesn't mean that she loves maan, she never ever loved any one in her life except her parents. Her parents left her forever when she was very small. And her life changed after that incident, the bubbly geet changed into emotionless geet who hates the whole world even herself. But as a doctor she knows the value of life and she likes this profession.

When some patients come to her sometimes she sees the love between them and some patients will come to abort their child for several reasons, that time she thinks about her own life. Because thosewho come to abort their child many reasons and geet too faced the same, when she came to know that she was pregnant with maan's child she didn't feel anything, she too want to abort that child but seeing the happiness in maan's face she couldn't do that. After giving birth to baby she left him forever. And now she is happy with her life again all alone.

She don't know why she became a stone, without any feelings for anyone and only hatred on god for giving her this life. She is eagerly waiting for her death to come but she is very far from that. She don't know the name of her daughter. She left everyone after giving birth to the child. She never expresses her feelings to anyone except one HER DIARY. If anyone reads her diary then they will come to know about her in and out. She is always a closed book. Till today no one was able to understand her not even maan. She accepted her fate, but not actually when destiny sent a person to her but due to her past she is not able to live in her present and she is not able to think about her future. She is in love with her LONELINESS. If anyone comes close to her she will be a mystery. She don't have any friends only colleagues.

She went to her room which is colorless, everywhere only white, white curtains, while walls. She went to her wardrobe and took out a pair of jeans and t-shirt, took shower and came out all ready. She went to kitchen and prepared herself a black coffee and some toast.

She then went to her room and switched on the TV. She watched TV for some time and prepared her dinner and slept. This is her daily routine hospital and home nothing more than that. She is the only person who don't enjoy her life.


IN INDIA:


Maan and muskaan came to KM. muskaan is all day with maan, 24*7 she wants to be with her papa. Maan will be at peace if muskaan is near him. After all he is living for his princess. He is hell angry on geet for leaving them like this, when he came to know geet left the house without informing anyone then his life almost stopped. He was not in a state to understand what is happening in his life, why he is losing all his loved ones. Yes he loved geet , but he never expressed his feelings because he don't know how to. When he made up his mind to express his feelings she left him. *sigh*

Maan with muskaan in his arms went t washroom to take the shower. First he made muskaan ready and he took shower and got ready. When he came out from washroom he saw muskaan is playing with her dolls when she herself is looking like a doll. He smiled a little and a tear touched his cheeks. What a tragedy he have lot a money to buy anything for his princess except mother's love.

Maan (st): "is my geet is so cruel that she didn't care for her daughter. Why she left us. His eyes became red due to anger, what you did is wrong geet, you shouldn't have left us like this. But you have to pay for this, yes you will pay for all your deeds. And I will make sure that our daughter will be near you but you never meet her or take her in your arms. you messed with MAAN SINGH KHURANA and you have to face the consequences."

But is that possible will maan be able to hate geet or get revenge from her? Will he some to know about geet's past and about her behavior? Will maan be able to make geet to get rid of her loneliness? Will be the hatred of geet towards world and maan change into love?

Precap: maan in geet's room in KM..

He finds most priced possession of geet, what is that?

Whoa' part 2, hmm hwz the update?😕 Understood anything?😕 Okay.. waiting for ur precious likes and comments..😊

Thanku so much for your likes and comments on previous parts.. as a newbie I cant send the link of my update with a hyperlink, sorry for that, I think these are some rules of IF..😳

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Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60500008

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Chinni.

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awesme update di
ohoo itna kuch hogaya..geet left maan n muskan after gvng birth to her..she loves loneliness as she got habituatd with that actualy she is scared to mingle any1 in her life as she hav fear that they may leave her alone again..she dnt want to create anyhopes again in her..she is rite at her place bt she lovd maan yet nt realizd..she gave birth to muskaan only for maan..i thnk ths is one of the proof..if she dnt lov maan she never would hav becme a mother to hs child..
And here maan is angry becoz geet left them..and he is rite in hs place..let's c how msk get back geet also hw geet realise her feelings
i thnk maan gets geet's dairy in her room..hmm let's c..
Haila mein ne toh bashan de di
chorry di muje pata hi nahi chala..
N cnt soon

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