MG FF: Journey of hate to love pt 19 pg 139 02/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Awesum start..
Thanx Jo for the link..
So geet was like ds even b4 she married maan..
That means there s some terrible past..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

hey dear dis story is amazing...

geet is so mysterious here...

i cant believe dat she left her own daughter is her past is dat much sorrowful dat she doesnt have any motherly feelings in her

waiting to know more abt her

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
geet's ch is strange here

how can a mother leave her own small child ???

oh maan wanna take revenge ... 😲

nice part

will be waiting for next aprt

thnx chinni dearie for the pm

cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

nice update akku...
enaite geet ge, yaka heega agela..
paapa muskaan, beega geet, maan kaliyoga maadu..
next update yavaga kodtiddiya, adre evottu update maadu,
hmm nanige doubte evottu aunu manega irtaana ninna assalu en kelsa madugudsalla,
oyy akka evening phone maade, aun sari matadubeku..
naanu bike kondukolikke hogtiddini tata..


ammi, thanku..
enone nanige gotilla evottu update madtino ello.. aunu evage lunch maadi malukundana..
sari sayankala phone madtini...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Amazing updates👏
Interesting concept⭐️
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
maneet married n have a baby
interesting
how can a mother live without her baby
maan is in some plan 2 play with geet
curious 2 know why they are living parted..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Love the concept
superb start
continue soon
pm me


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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
there mst a strong reason for geets behavior. its mst b geets dairy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Part 3:


Maan took muskaan in his arns and they both headed to dining hall where no one is waiting for them. He knows his sister is more interested in parting and hanging out with friends rather than family. But he never complained, he gives what ever he wants. He even failed as a brother, he couldn't take care of his own sister. But he don't want his daughter to be like that, he wants her to know the value of a family.

Nakul prepared dinner for them and maan made muskaan eat her dinner. But the little doll is giving tough time to her papa as she is not ready to eat and making faces while eating.

"Beta why you are not eating?" Asked maan.

"Pa.. mujle nai khana.." (papa mujhe nahi khana) told muskaan making yucky face. Maan smiled at her and asked "why my princess don't want to eat?"

"Pa.. yorl plinchess want to play" (papa.. your princess want to play) told muskaan smiling widely. Maan acted like he is thinking and told "hmm.. papa will play with you when you eat." Muskaan made a sad face and told ok. Because after that she can play with her papa.

They both ate their food and he took her to play room where all the toys are placed, muskaan jumped in joy and she is playing with the toys and maan is just admiring his princess. Then maan remembered some thing and left from there. Muskaan is busy in playing. Maan returned with a icecream in his hand as he promised her he will get a ice cream in the evening.

"Doll.. this is for you" told maan and gave her ice cream. her face lit up seeing that and she ate happily messing her drees and face with the cream. maan saw that and smiled. He took her to washroom and washed her face and hands, changed her dress and made her sleep. Muskaan slept on his chest holding his collar tight.

Seeing his doll sleeping peacefully, he slowly made her sleep on the bed and loosened the grip of her hand from his collar. He kissed her forehead and left the room. He went to his study and was checking the mails and replying to them. It took almost 3 hours for him to complete his work and it is ast 1am. He looked tired but not feeling sleepy. He once again checked muskaan and she is sleeping soundly.

Maan came out of doll's room and was going to kitchen to have some water but his eyes fell on a roon which he didn't open from past 2 years. He hated that room now, but today something pulled him like a magnet and want to go to that room. He took the keys and unlocked it. he opened the door and found it all muddy and dirty. Things are scattered here and there and there are some books and few articles. He entered into the room and it is so dark. He switched on the lights and saw that the room is filled with family pics, which maan himself decorated when he decided to express his feelings to geet. This was once geet's study room. She completed her medicine in India. She use to spend most of her time here.

Maan looked around, this room has so many memories with him. His mind is thinking about geet but his heart don't want to feel her, his heart is filled with only hatred for her.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ln-cDL4MvWs

(if u want u can listen to the song and read... dont know it suited well or not)


Such Keh Raha Hain Deewana
Dil Dil Na Kisi Se Lagana
Such Keh Raha Hain Deewana
Dil Dil Na Kisi Se Lagana
Jhoothe Hain Yaar Ke Vaade Saare
Jhoothi Hain Pyaar Ki Kasme
Maine Har Lamha Jise Chaaha
Jise Pooja Usi Ne Yaaron Mera Dil Toda
Toda Tanha Tanha Chhoda
Such Keh Raha Hain Deewana
Dil Dil Na Kisi Se Lagana
Jhoothe Hain Yaar Ke Vaade Saare
Jhoothi Hain Pyaar Ki Kasme
Maine Har Lamha Jise Chaaha
Jise Pooja Usi Ne Yaaron Mera Dil Toda
Toda Tanha Tanha Chhoda


Maan removed all the photos of geet and tore them into pieces like his heart broke into pieces when she left him.

"Why geet why you came into my life when you want to leave me in the middle. You never spoke to anyone, but your actions show it all. I thought you too loved me but I was wrong. For the first time MAAN SINGH KHURANA was wrong. You shouldn't have don't this to me geet, what our daughter did that she is craving for her mother's love. How can I live without you geet? Your presence mak me feel better, but I couldn't understand what are you? I don't know anything about you. Why you are like this geet. You didn't talk to me even once before leaving."


Mausam Mausam Tha Suhana Bada
Mausam Mausam Maine Dekha Use
Hua Main Paagal Bas Palbhar Mein
Mausam Mausam Tha Suhana Bada
Mausam Mausam Maine Dekha Use
Hua Main Paagal Bas Palbhar Mein
Aake Basi Hain Woh Mere Mann Mein
Uski Kami Hain Ab Jeevan Mein
Woh Door Hain Meri Nazron Se
Kyon Use Main Chaahon
Such Keh Raha Hain Deewana
Dil Dil Na Kisi Se Lagana
Jhoothe Hain Yaar Ke Vaade Saare
Jhoothi Hain Pyaar Ki Kasme
Maine Har Lamha Jise Chaaha
Jise Pooja Usi Ne Yaaron Mera Dil Toda
Toda Tanha Tanha Chhoda


A cool breeze touched his skin and a small smile formed on his lips. The cool breeze which reminds him of his geet.

"U know geet, every evening you use spend your time in garden and I use to admire you from my study room, which you never noticed. The way you pin your hair when they are falling on your face and disturbing you. But why I never saw a smile on your face. Some times you look pleasant and some times you will be in pain, why you never shared your pain with me geet. But now you left us and we r living in the same pain. Its true that my heart will beats for you but now its is beating to know the reason why did this. You have to answer all my questions geet, till then I wont allow you to live in peace, its my promise."


Sundar Sundar Woh Haseena Badi
Sundar Sundar Main To Khone Laga
Uske Nashe Mein Bin Piye Behka
Sundar Sundar Woh Haseena Badi
Sundar Sundar Main To Khone Laga
Uske Nashe Mein Bin Piye Behka
Ek Din Use Bhoola Doonga Main
Uske Nishaan Mita Doonga Main
Chaahonga Na Main Us Patthar Ko
Jaa Use Bata De
Maine Har Lamha Jise Chaaha
Jise Pooja Usi Ne Yaaron Mera Dil Toda
Toda Tanha Tanha Chhoda


"You are the first person in my life that I lost in you, you are really something special geet who made MSK to maan without any word. Because I never saw you speaking with anyone, you will always in your world. How much I want to forget you but its not happening. Why I will think of you always."

With all these feelings maan scanned all room once again. He went near her desk on which she use to study. The table is full of medical books, he caressed them like he is feeling her. On the other side of table there are 3-4 books which maan is noticing for the first time. He looked at them curiously and took one of the book but its not a book infact its GEET'S PERSONAL DIARY.

He opened the book and saw her beautiful handwriting. He caressed her name.

Its geet's personal diary I never thought that she has this habit. He don't want to read her personal diary and thought of placing the book back to its place but the book slipped from his hand fell down. He bent down to take the diary but he saw his face which is drawn by geet.

He curiously took the book and opened it. he saw his own picture and was shocked to see the words which are written below to his pic.


In London:


Geet who is sleeping in her room got up with a jerk and looked here and there. She touched her cheek she found something wet. She then realized that she is actually having tears. Just then the power went off and the room became pitch dark. Geet got scared and started shivering badly.

She cuddled herself, she hugged her knees tight and tears were continuously rolling down her cheeks, she closed her eyes tight.

"Plz don't beat me, plz its paining. Plz don't beat me I will do whatever you tell. Mujhe bahut dard ho raha hain" cried geet. 😭

"Mama, papa dekhiye yeh log mujhe maar raha hain.."😭 cried geet in her semi-consious state.

Geet is sobbing and begging not to beat her. After some time she fainted taking only one name from her mouch' "MAANJI'"

Precap: the night continues..

hii *waving hands*, hmm hwz the update?😕 Okay.. waiting for ur precious likes and comments..

Thanku so much for your likes and comments on previous parts.. as a newbie I cant send the link of my update with a hyperlink, sorry for that, I think these are some rules of IF..

Those who want to read my work add 'chinni10' to your buddy list.


part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60613535

Thanku

Chinni.

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
nice update , interesting story

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