FF: M&G - Protect The Boss 1 - Page 56

lvd how maan gave a perfect ppt...

Caught ya! :D

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I am full of glee right now. Obviously, now that I have stalked your blog and caught up with the updates, all of them!🤣
By the way now that I've mentioned the blog thingy, why am I not receiving update notifications through email?😔
Okay moving on, so we are here in seventeenth chapter ehm? Oh, yeah I am a smug. I must say I might have died of a heart attack if you'd have stopped at chapter sixteen and had let me wait! LMAO.
You know what I can never comment properly. I blabber random things, and I always forget to say million things I wanted to. So before I forget lemme tell you this line cracked me up.🤣
"I have stomach pains of you know what because of you know why so leave me alone."
You know whys, you know whats remind me of you know who.🤣
HP days! Sigh! Update super soon (In your blog)🤣
The real task for you is go back and count the number of ROFL emos I used in the comment.😆

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

You updated :) R

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Ah! the kiss...the only poultice that she could have offered to that sucker punch she delivered to him at the start of the day.

Something that had bothered me in the earlier updates were why Pinky was also trying to hide the bloom of her relationship with Yash from Geet; given that it only made sense to me that Geet try and keep it under covers from Maan to exclude themselves from the impending complications, if there were to be. But that has been sorted out in this update. Good!

The kind of things men do over their love for a woman. It will be interesting to see what ever happens of his drive to excel if Geet were to leave KC. (I'm just a sucker for drama, so ignore that bit).

Maan went back home? But, why do I have a feeling he is going to be feasting on Lasagna that night?

Well, Dev is awaiting another disaster at the bar? Or is that the beginning of one for the others?

In general, your way of writing all POVs in one update reminds of an editor (being you) holding up the reels of PTB against a light source and artfully snipping away the scenes, only to disperse them as well thought out placements in each update.

I'm yet to gauge the underpinning genre to which the story belongs to. Will wait until more updates unfurl.

Great updates, Fozia!

Originally posted by: d_sonia

Awesome update... Haye Maaneet kissedcute
Wah wah successful presentation by maan so happy...
Grr pammi n Dev kuch karo inka
Eagarly waiting next now
Contionue soon

Originally posted by: flowers4u

Intresting twists ...dev actually stood up to his mother ...wow...fantastic update ...keep it up

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update loved it a little crack in the mother and son duo poor maan dev words struck home loved the update geet hiding yash and pinky relationship and hiding from maan and he did the presentation on what she taught him the they loved it thanks for the pm loved the update

Originally posted by: shalini_s

i thot it wuld be Maan on the door... waiting for him to join too...

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii Barfi
Awesome update
Loved it
Yash n pinky Sooo sweet
Maan kinda realised his feeling
Cute
I loved Dhinka chinka song
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

great dear