Tishnagi-tsala-MG OS DISCONTINUED, NOTE/PG20

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Such a beautiful and cute relationship between the two of them

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

part 3
so touching and emo...
cont soon...

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

awesome update..

geet is so innocent...

wanted to know what happened...what maan did...

update soon...

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

NOTE:-

DISCONTINUED...

i am discontinuing this os, because of such a bad response
but before discontinuing, i wanted to disclose the past here...

geet who was married to maan in such a early age though maan was also younger that time but he was little mature than her... both are happy with each other... later both starts feeling something-2 for each other and that turns in attraction and they starts dinging a way to touching each other or kissing to each other... well both sometimes kissed to each other on cheeks and hugged to each other but one day when geet came out after having a shower wrapped in towel just then unknowingly maan came in her room for asking about her exam datesheet but froze at the time seeing her wrapped only in towel... he felt a sudden attraction or lust you can say it also... and the lip lock happened between them... both starts feeling to each other in sensuol way but one day dadi caught them in a compromising position, both were lying on the bed and maan was kissing her... dadi scolded them and took a decision... ddai separated them and se sent maan to london for further studies and geet sent to udaipur back for some years... though maan and geet cried a lot but dadi didn't listen ther... maan starts blaming to geet that she doesn't to be with him, sihe told dadi about their secret... sometimes before ddai warned them but never caught them in vulnerable condition... nahar sent geet to mumbai for her studies and maan was in london... years passed and maan turned in casanova,,,, he starts hating women... he thought women are only for sex... just use them and then throw... he hated geet, actually he fogot that he has a girl in his named geet...
maan returned back and then dadi get them married again... geet loved him but maan hates her... maan doesn't want to get marry with her but doesn't have any other option... at their wedding nights, maan abused her with his words and then told her to fulfill wife duties and fulfilled husband needs... she thought if he wants this from her then it's okay for her... she willingly gave up but it became routine for him... he has so many girlfriends... he had sex with them sometimes he kissed his girlfriends in front of geet... she felt bad, maan told her to keep appointments of his girlfreinds, she did but it never effects maan... he met with his girl freinds and came home late night after mid night and then had sex with her without using precautions almost every night,2-3 times in a night or sometimes in days too... he felt completed after having sex with her...
months passed and then geet realized that she is 2 pregnant... she thought maan will change but his behavior never changed with her... one day she made up her mind and left the house and went to bangalore where she met with meera & dev... she found a job there with thier help and starts sharing her compartment... later maan realized that he loved her so much when he read her letter and after 6 months when she felt pain in her stomach, geet admitted in hospital, they found that geet has uterus cancer& HIV AIDS... she always have severe pain in her stomach but get a pil... they operated her otherwise it will be too late...they told them after the operation she will be barely 2-3 hours alive... geet told to meera that she wants to take her last breath in maan's arms, so meera called maan ad told him everything... he was shattered and at once left to banagalore... baby was pre-term and then maan reached there... maan cried a lot, he cursed himself, blamed himself for her condition , geet handed her diary to maan and told him to read it after her death... maan shook his head on the topic of her death but after few minutes, she barely breath, she took her last breath in maan's arms... maan cried a lot holding her fragile body and then maan moved to delhi along with baby yash, meera & dev... meera used to take care of yash... years passed and yash turned into 18 when he was searching something in study he found geet's diary and he came to know everything... yash accused maan badly but maan didn't took a word from his mouth... yash starts hating maan, later he met madhu in college and both fell in love each other... yash loved maan but hates him also... after 1 years, when maan was not able to carry this guilt, he also went near his geet and that day yash felt he did very wrong to his dad but he still hates him... later after some years, madhu n yash get married...

it was the story... i told you in short but it have every phase of my story... if anyone wants to continue this one then you can... portray the story in deep,,,, don't be angry on me, i just felt not to continue this one but i don't want to left you all in mid so i told whole story in short...

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Well m sad ki u discontinued it... But happy ki u told the whole story... Or else i would b feeling bad n keep thinking ki kya hua tha???
Now even i want to hate maan... How could he do this...grrr

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

omg it was an awesome story yaar
bt feeling good 2 c ki tumne iase nhi choda
i hate wen people leave their work mid way..
thx
bt fir b
try 2 cont it na
plzzz
i lv it yaar..😭

Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago

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maanugeetu

@maanugeetu

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

the story was really good.

i am very sad that u are discontinuing.

plz continue.

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

story was good

it was just because of his family he became like this

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

why neha such a lovely story, why u discontinued...i love tis...maan and geet story and my geet's pain...thats why yash hated him...but yash cant hate my maan fully, coz watever my maan does geet wont hate him, like yash is symbol of geet's love...i love it...