MG:OS(LOVE LIFE ANDSACRIFICE (completed)

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HEY GUYS...
HERE IS AN OS...
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Does life is always under our control ''why these people who are only the puppets of the god take there control or wants to control others life ''.why our parents never understands us ''..why they always thought that what they are doing will be the best for us''cant be they wrong for once ''why '.she writes in her dairy it was her daily routine to write those questions in her dairy that she always wanted to ask her parents this so called society the people who had binded relations inder the name of religion'caste and creed '''

Geet had been writing in her dairy 'today is the day when she got separated from the love of her life'..although it was her wish that she got separated she left her house without informing anyone about her whereabouts not even telling her friends''if she would have stayed there it would have cost maan's life''she was highly grateful to god to let her know the intentions of her family ''..it was babaji wish that they meet'..they grew close to each other they experienced the beautiful feeling of love together and it was his decision to part them apart''

Although she is far away from maan but she is contented that he is safe and secure'.he is not harmed he has been spared from the hands of her brutal family''she pity her family for not understanding the blissful emotion that can always makes one's life like a dream '..

After writing in the dairy to her heart's content she closed her eyes and remembered that day when she decided to leave for maan's life'.if her love will cost for his life then it will be better to leave her life alone''

THREE YEARS BACK'..

Geet Sharma was a very simple girl with her soberness and innocence being her most precious assets 'a very uncomplicated girl with easy going attitude '..studying in delhi's one of the best university business management '..never had fancy things its not like she cannot afford it but she likes being down to earth life was just plain and easy going for her unless that day when she met him''MAAN''.MAAN SINGH KHURANA''.the student of same university two year senior from her it was a usual meeting which was organized by their college friends''.that was the first day when they met ''first it was the usual introduction'''but it happened that they usually encounters each other and it was then when they grew close''

Maan was the good looking and handsome guy with striking personality with easy going attitude and down to earth''hailing from the traditional Punjabi family''in short he was not from her caste ''but does your heart asks your permission before it gains attention from someone '.before it starts liking someone presence near you'..before it beats for that person''that's what happen with geet ''there acqaintances made them closer to each other 'there different caste there different culture was not able to stop them from falling in love''.

They fall deeply in love''.there love was not like which will ask for something'..rather it was like which will give up your life for the other''.

BACK TO PRESENT

A sweet smile adorned her lips when she saw his clipping of the newspaper he has grown up into the big businessman taken the reins of his grandfather'''. they never talked about each other 's family neither he told her about his being the eldest grandson of india's biggest business magnate yash raj khurana'..for her he was maan and she was his geet ''just maan ki geet the beautiful moments that they spend with each other during that one year was the god's greatest gift to her''..

She has collected infact she has updated herself about his each and every activity his news'.it felt peace in her heart that the man whom she loved so dearly is safe and is unharmed''

She was going to the public library there as she has been asked by the nun issabelah for some books for the students'.she happily nodded suppressing her pain

When her glance went to a young couple sitting with each other may be they are college students'..which reminded her of maan'.there sweet talks there time which they spent in coffee shop'by not taking coffee but chatting and laughing continuously''

haaan aa aa
tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa
dekh loon ek jhalak ho oo, dekh loon ek jhalak,
aa jaa ab aa bhee jaa
tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa

dekh loon ek jhalak ho oo, dekh loon ek jhalak,
aa jaa ab aa bhee jaa
tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa


It brought the painful memory to her of there separation'..

Only she knows how she is leading her life without him''.

sun le tuu haal-e-dil, kyaa kyaa hai meri mushkil,
jo ishq mei sab ko hotaa hai, wo sab kuch mujhko hotaa hai,
zulf bikhree hai meri ho oo, zulf bihkree hai meri,
inko suljhaa bhee jaa


tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa dil naiyo lagdaa

there love had encountered very sweet memories which she will always keeps till her death''

the sweet ache that she experience is worth if he is there in this world''.no matter if she cannot see him'.be with him''be as a sweet memory somewhere deep in his heart she will remain'..

her shattered soul will get peace in the heavens if he is fine'..

every second she is bearing the pain of separation'..the sweet pain because it is related to him and anything related to him will never cause her any harm''but sometimes this heart yearns for him'..but stops as soon as it came to face its reality that his life is more important to her'.

But his memory is accompained with that incidents which is no matter try to keep far way from her but it came came to her'..

She doesnot want to remember that dreadful night where she has heard her elders along with her parents and even her brother whom she considers that he will support her in her every difficult time was also there planning to kill her love just for the sake of their fake reputation in the society''the words and the discussion she heard that day made her stone hearted she wanted to scream on her parents ''her grandparents '.her brother that how can they be so heartless ''does loving someone is a crime'..

Geet st: tears were continuously pouring down her cheeks'..she was sniffling covering her mouth''complaining in her heart to her babaji'''.kyun babaji'..why did you do this to me'..i never complained to you about anything''mene to aapse kuch bhi nahi manga phir bhi aap mere saath kyun kar rahe hai''babaji'..why did you sepated mankind in the names of religion caste culture boliye''.sab aapke hi banaye hue hai'..kya kisi se pyaar karne ki saza itni badi hai'..

While geet was complaing to her babaji''.she heard something which made her completely shocked'.

Geet's father: mene suna hai ki geet kisi ladke ke saath thi''aur kaun hai wo aur kab se geet janti hai use'..

Geet's brother: dad ye to nahi pata geet use kab se janti hai kaafi time se wo uske saath hai par wo jo koi bhi hai use geet ki zindagi se dur jaana hoga'.aur ye baat geet ko bhi samajhni hogi'..mene use uske saath raat ko phone pe baat karte hue suna hai '..aur uska number bhi dekha geet ke phone me par aisa koi number nai mila''

Geet's father: wo jo koi bhi hai pata karo kaun hai '..kis jagah ka hai'..kya wo bhi Brahmin hai''ya phir kisi aur caste ka hai''jaldi pata karwao''aaj ghar walo ko pata chala hai kal bahar wale jaanenge''..

It was actually geet's uncle and aunt who had seen her with maan twice in a coffee shop and they were the source of information to geet's family''.

Geet's father : aur agar na pata chale to geet ke college se pata karo''chahe uske liye geet ko fallow kyun na karna pade '.pata lagao wo kaun hai'..baat karo ki geet ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhool jaye''uski zindagi se dur chala jaye''.aur agar na mane to use tum dur karwa do''.marwa do''just get him killed ''me nahi chahata ki hamare kaandan aur parivaar pe koi kuch kahe'..

Geet's brother: ji dad me uska intjaam karta hun''

When geet noticed that her brother is going to come out of the room she just ran to her room and closed the door'.and cried whole night and didn't went to college for three days neither called maan and when asked by her mother she just made an excuse of monthy cramps''.finally it was third day at night geet couldn't hold herself and with the money she had she left the city without telling anyone'.and next day reached a sattal near nainital and from then she is been living in a church''teaching there and living there''.

dastee hai tanhaai, chubhtee hai parchaai,
do nain taraste rote hain, naa jugte hain naa sote hain,
kyaa karoon aise mei ho oo, kyaa karoon aise mei,
aa ke samjhaa bhee jaa

it is been two years and three days since he saw her''.he is very upset from her'.why did she left him''what mistake does he had done that she left him''

he has not sleep from that day'.countless attempts to find her'..even made attempts to contact her family'..through her friends''but nothing bear a fruit'..nothing'.

his life'..his geet left him''.when they were supposed to get marry he was going to ask her parents for her hand'..then why did she left him'..why'???????

that was the question that has made him angry and ruthless but somewhere that charming and easy going maan is still there waiting for his geet''

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa, dil naiyo lagdaa
dekh loon ek jhalak ho oo dekh loon ek jhalak,
aa jaa ab aa aa bhee jaa

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa, dil naiyo lagdaa
dekh loon ek jhalak ho oo dekh loon ek jhalak,
aa jaa ab aa aa bhee jaa

On the other hand after many unsuccessful attempts to contact her maan concluded that she had left him infact she had been missing she had left him went somewhere to a place where he is being searching her till now''.his love have not faded infact grew for her he doesnot know the reason of her sudden absence but his trust and confidence will surely take them to same path again''.

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa, dil naiya lagdaa

tere bin ik pal dil naiyo lagdaa, dil naiya lagdaa

hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm

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geet sacrificed her love in the name of the caste..
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