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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

so nice finally maan and geet met😊😊

pls give us an epilogue pls😊

thanx:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

wow.. this was amazing update

Maan Geet both met ..now no one can separate them not themselves..update soon

thanx will update asap:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

<font size="4" color="#0099FF">what an ending 👏</font>


<font size="4" color="#0099FF">superb</font>

<font size="4" color="#0099FF">epi kahan hai ???</font>

<font size="4" color="#0099FF">epi tou banta hai😉</font>

thanx:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago




HI GUYS HERE IS THE EPILOGUE...

hope you all like it is



EPILOGUE
PART 1


Life cannot be so cruel for them. There separation for almost three years has finally came to an end…….now both of them cannot bear the longing….. the distance from each other….only they knew that how they spent each and every day without each other ….each and every feeling…each and every emotion that they possessed for each other is free now to show….their longing…their unwanted suffering that was forcefully imposed on them by this cruel society….by her own parents has finally came to its end . that blissful life that they always wanted to live and cherish with each other ,s love is now possible…..

No caste no creed religion society can part the two souls which are destined for each other …..destiny and fate always plays there roles in testing and purifying their spirits…

They are each other's hearts desire and are only needed to be in each other's arms….

They didn't knew that for how long they remain in each other 's pure embrace ..,,,,,,,hugging each other lisening to other's heartbeat which only beats for its true companion…..it only weeps for its discomfort it only feels pain when its soulmate is suffering …this feeling of love…emotion of pure desire cannot be categorized or felt by some caste …it is divine relation which is made up by god …he only connected their lives by an invisible thread of love that cannot be separated even if they want …….

Geet was continuously sobbing telling him her state at that time …. Her endless cries her pain that was also somewhere felt by him all these years was now in their words there actions…..

Maan was cupping her face telling her to stop her tears …….

Maan: geet….geet…on getting no response from her….her lifted her chin and said…geet love look at me…..tell me why do you love so much that you faced this ordeal alone….. you didn't even told me …..bolo….you left me alone to save me from deing….bolo ….geet slightly nodded….



Maan: but you are killing me every second with your tears……please stop crying…..it hurts jaan…it hurts…..

Geet understanding his state…his inner turmoil….wiped her tears and she just covered herself in his embrace…..

Geet: I am sorry maan…..

Maan gently lifted her and placed her on the bed…. Both slept in the sitting position…with a warm blanket covering them….

It was maan who had woken up first and saw geet snuggling to his warm embrace …he gently pulled her towards him ….unfortunately causing her beautiful sleep to break…. She caressed his face and smiled a little and closed her eyes again hoping that its not a dream……


After good fifteen minutes geet wake up and saw maan staring at her…..

Maan: geet …wake up….its not a dream baby….. I am here…..

Geet nodded with a pure genuine smile….. both of them were exhausted both physically and mentally so it was just the beginning of their own beautiful dream that they saw together…….

Maan: umm…geet lets go somewhere ….i am hungry…..

Geet coming out of trance…..

Geet: maan…I am so sorry …. I didn't even asked you if you had anything since morning….. wait let me cook something….

With that she hurriedly gathered herself and run towards kitchen….when maan stopped her by holding her wrist….and jerked her towards himself…..

Maan: geet you must be tired lets go somewhere……


Geet was first starled by their close proximity….it was all new for her…..but when anything is concerned with maan ……then nothing matters to her….

Geet: NO!!!!!!!! we are not going anywhere …… its raining heavily ….and moreover its not safe here on slopy roads….. let me cook…..

Maan was adorning his sweet love while she was cooking an evening meal for them…..maan offered for help but she refused……

Geet prepared simple meal with dal…roti….a vegetable curry and rice…..it will be the first time he will eat something cooked by her…..

She served him and asked him eat when he asked for hers…….. she knew that he will not eat before her so she served for herself……

It was the most peaceful meal they ever had in these years…….

Although they didn't want to part but maan has to go so that both of them cannot be separated after……

Maan cupping her face….

Maan: geet abhi mujhe jaana hoga….. its not right for me to stay here with you…..but you better be ready tomorrow sharp at six….. I'll be there to take you…..

Both of them knew that what they wanted and now there life and soul is at peace…..

Maan bid her goodbye….and went to his cottage…..

He without any waste of time…called his daadima….

Maan: hello daadi ma ….. there was an unknown happiness in his words ……

Daadima: maan….. kahan hai aap….aap toh aaj aane wale the na…. jaante hai hum sab yahan kitna pareshaan hai….. aapki bua bhi aai hai…..

Maan: just listening to daadi and cannot control his immense pleasure to share with his daadi….

Maan: daadi aap aur daadaji baaki sab ke saath yahan aajaiye….mene aapki flights ka arrangement karwa diya hai….please jaldi aana….

A sudden eagerness to meet his grandparents…could be read through his voice…..

Daadima: maan are you alright…..sab theek hai na beta….bataiye hame …kuch mat chupana….

Maan: daadi I found her….meri geet mil gayi mujhe…aap jaldi se yahan aajaiye….

Savitri devi was delighted with the news….finally all will be in peace…..

Daadima: maan aap sach keh rahe hai…. Hum abhi sabko batate hai…..

Maan finally told daadi all the events of the day excluding the reason for her disapperarance……… and informed his daadaji about the flight details…..

Next day as planned by maan …. His family arrived to sattal….. since the flight was of night so all reached in the wee hours of morning…..and were resting due to journey….

Maan exactly reached to his geet at six in the morning and was mesmerized by her simple blue colour suit and a warm sweater …… geet called him inside but he took her with him …. And when they reached the place geet was in a spell seeing the beauty infront of her a large fountain with …..small baby plants all around…. And it was just two of them there ….the place was vacant…..

Geet: ( very innocently ) maan why is this place vacant …..

Maan: ( hugging her from back ) jaan because I wanted to cherish and make our sweet memories just two of us…..do you like the arrangement…..

They were lost in that lovely moment that's when the first ray of sun hit the fountain and it sparkled with beautiful colours and the lights that were decorated lit by themselves….making the atmosphere romantic…

Geet was in fascinated with that beauty and turned towards maan that's when he bent down on his knees….and said those heavenly words that she was longing to hear….

Maan: geet I know you since we were in college….. we shared the most beautiful

emotions…the most peaceful time…created a serene memory of our relationship…..

Maybe I didn't knew you completely but I promise to never let you alone again…I will never repeat my mistake of understanding you…..

We will make a perfect pair….coz you are the only one who can tolerate this angry stubborn man by your pious love….

Will you marry me geet…..

Geet was just listening to him…trying to absorb his each and every word in her heart…….

When she finally understood his words ….she saw him in same position….and bent down and nodded her head without saying a word….. not knowing whether her emotions betray her this time……



She didn't cry knowing it will only hurt him…..

He gently slipped the ring in her finger and she holded him in a bear hug ….and then maan took her to his grandparents who were much awaited to see their grandson's choice…..

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GUYS I KNOW IT DOESN"T INCLUDE THE TEASER I AM DOWN WITH FEVER AND THE SERIES OF EVENTS ARE SO VAST THAT IT WILL TAKE ONE MORE UPDATE TO COMPLETE ...
SORRY FOR THAT...





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Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update.
love it.
take care dear.
will be waiting for the rest
Edited by J.Rahman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely one...
loved the way maaneet took care of each other...
Superb one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmm updt yaar
lvd it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
woww awesome concept. i have not read all parts yet but still it touched my heart.
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Posted: 13 years ago

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