EK DUJE KE VAASTE..
..an un-conditional bond of pain ...😭
Its a story of two souls bond in the relation of pain ...
..yes they share a bond of pain ...dard ka rishta tha unka... Dunya mien aane ke baad hum kaayii rishte nibhate hain ...kuch rishte jo upar wala banata hai...KHOON KE RISHTEY..... kuch rishte jo hum banate hain...DOSTI KE RISHTEY... kuch rishtey jo dil banata hai...DIL KE RISHTEY.... par kuch rishtey aese hote hain jo kab bane aur kyun kisi ko nahi pata hota ... Aisa hi rishtay tha unka ...jo kab bana aur kaise na unko yaad hai na kisi ko khabar thi ...bas ek ajeeb si door se bandh gaye hain dono ...aisi door jo unhoon ne nahi bandhi aur jese toor paa na unke bas mien nahi hai ... ajeeb rishta hai unka ...miloon door reh kar bhi ek doosre ke dard ko jaan lete hain ...ek aisa rishta jo na koi samaj paya na woh samjha paye ...ek ajeeb door thi jo un dono ko jorti thi ...ke choot ek ko lage ..to dard doosre ko mehsoos hota tha ...ek ki ahh par dosre ki aankh (eye ) se aansoo nikalte thay ...kisi lafz ki zarorat na thi unke bech ...hiraan thi kudrat bhi ye dekh kar ...ke kaise bina bole ek dosre ke dil ki har baat jaan leya karte hain ...waqt ne unhe milaya ...kismat ne door kiya ...magar kiya kheli gi kismat phir koi kheel jo mela de in do dil-lo ko bas EK DUJE KE LIYE DHARAKTE HAIN ...❤️
Maan was made to go to Dehrahdun to complete his his studied from 6th stnd after his parent's death but he started blaming his dadi for keeping him away from her n his home although he loved her the most in the whole world but after being away from his home and the fact that he has lost his parents he always kept himself in a shell ... he was the topper of class but still no friend except ONE ...his MISHTY....thats what he called her always since his 8th standard when he met her first ...coz of her sweet , innocent nature ...😉
Geet was a full of life ...she was really friendly and naive yet a bit naughty😉...she was in her 6th standard when she met him...it was in her nature that when she love someone she can go to any extent to make them happy ...and was too innocent to know about any feelings like hatred ...she was always guided by his friend cum brother Armaan after loosing her parents at the age of 5 but got emmense affection n love from Armaan n his AUNT ( his father's sister ) who is also geet's gurdian ...but she had a special place for his bestest friend...Maan they were the BESTEST FRIEND for 7 long year ...of schooling
but after maan's 12th year they parted but before that had long conversation remembering the last 7 years of their friendship but before parting ...
he said...promise me
❤️ u will fullfill ur dream of becoming an ARCHITECT DESIGNER
❤️ u will never give my 1st rank to any one else ..and will study hard..
❤️ u will always remain like this ...like my best friend ...MY MISHTY
❤️ will always keep smiling and will take care of ur self ...
she said...promise me
❤️ u will take good care of Dadi and everyother person in ur family...
❤️ u will nt harm ur self ever in frustration and will see to this pic and say whatever u want to ...
❤️ u will fulfill ur dream of doing MBA from howard and that too with good grades as always
❤️ u will take care of ur fathers company and will make it no.1 ...just as he dreamed and u wanted ...
they promised..
to meet at the re-union party of geet's batch which was to be held for every batch after 8 yrs of paasing out
... with that they parted to live their life for eachother and fulfill their promises ... w8ting for the time when they will meet again... at that moment both was'nt aware of y they felt like something is breaking inside them seeing the other one far away ...
love may touch u just 1 time ...
but it will last for a life time ...
and now ...
I'll live my life, only for u ...
but today after 8 long years they both knw that at that time the care she had for him was her love for him ...the possesiveness he had for her was not fear of loosing but his love for her ...the un-breakable bound they share is of love...
it was an ordinary day at maan's office engrosed in a fuzz created by his rivals maan was continously staring on the pic. frame and then came up with a solution ...and said lifting the frame ... u were right MISHTY although u will nt be by my side to stare deep in my eyes n vanish every worry but still u will be always there to solve my problems ....U ARE ALWAYS WITH ME MISHTY...always..
maan was in Delhi and geet was in somewhere in Spain when they both got to knw about the RE-UNION party going to be held in their school just after 3 days means only 72 hr.s ...both were on cloud nine ...excited to meet each other after 8 years ...only they knew how they got to pass these 3 days ...god passing 8 years seems to be easy as compared to these 3 days ...oppsss 72 hr.s to be said as they felt ...
both reached Dehradun on the same day ... determined to meet each other...
numerious emotions were playing in their mind... what to tell ...how to start ... he was thinking ...god she will never stop talking as always ...
she was hell nervous to meet him ...as according to her childhood friend MEERA he will not come but she was confident at every second in these 8 years that her bestest friend can never forget her ...numerious thoughts were playing in there mind ...thinking all the even n odds ...
then fiinally decided to tell every thing to each other happened with them every achievement and how every sec they missed each other ...
but as they came in front of each other ...every thought was lost ...
it was the same place where they use to meet every day at the backside of hostel garden beneath a huge cherry tree ...away from the party and all the other world ...😳
just the 2 souls stairing at each other endlessly under the moon light ...even god n nature were at mercy for them as it was a full moon night and her angelic face was clearly reflecting the most serene sight he ever saw his angel under the moonlight her glowing skin seems to give competition even to the moonlight and the perfect white churidaar ... she looked like a divine beauty from heaven ... just for him ... they stared each other endlessly but nothing came to their mouth...what to say ...😲
...the moment for which they waited since 8 yrs is now here and they have nothing to say accept seeing each other ... but their eyes ...depth of their eyes which was reflecting every emotion of their heart n soul... ...saying thousands of words yet did'nt said anything ...silent understanding was the beauty of their relation ...they never needed any words to know wht other feels ...😳
...after a long time they finally said something ...but the only word came from each other at the same time was nothing but ...
MAAN : MISTY ... GEET :MAAN ...
the moment felt soo divine ...the words were soo soothing hearing eachother after such a long time ... a tear skip from her eye and he felt like someone stabbed his heart ...she saw his face and remembers the time how he scolds her whenever she got herself hurt by any mean or specially when she cries ...how everyone in the school never ever tried to come near her as all knew what will be the aftermath ...facing maan was nt a good option even at that time and now ...he looks even more fit and manly ...she looked at him tip to toe for a moment every curve of his andinstantly lowered her eye lashes a small smile creeped on her face while she felt a bit embaressed n a slight blush appeared on her face with the thought ... she was actually drooling over him ...😳
...her thoughts broke apart when she felt his cold hands on her cheaks and his thumb carsing the tear away ...it felt soo blissful nothing was soo soothing than his touch ...their eyes met again n the longingness of 8 yrs came to an end ...
...they hugged each other like never before ...never to part away ...it felt sooo perfect staying in each others embrace ...all worries ...all feelings of sorrow and missing each other was now vanishing in each others embrace ...it was a magical sight ... a magical couple hugging each other tight under the moon light ...even the stars and moon were wittnessing the pure ,, divine .. self-less love of maaneet...😳
(...😳..so friends imagine this tree in moon light n maaneet sitting beneath ..😳)
they spend the most beautiful night of their life talking with each other like they did 8 yrs back laying flat under the cherry tree ..stairing the sky full of shimmering stars ...sharing every emotion with each other they experienced in these years ...they poured out there heart how much they missed each other at every important event ...how they use to see each others pic.s whenever in any problem and got the solution ...
Meeting u was my fate...
choosing u as a friend was my choise...
BUT
falling in LOVE wid u was out of my
control...
then with night at its end he confessed his love...in the moon light ...in front of nature ...which was witnessing the divine moment of their life ... he marked her his till eternity by slipping his KHANDANI ring in her ring finger..😍❤️☺️
... she did'nt said anything ...just kept stairing at him ..with tears in her eyes which were depicting the love she has for him since they met and the most beautiful smile on her lips ...
he did'nt needed word he knws his answer seeing her excepting the ring in her hand ... her hazel eyes are enough to tell him whts going onn in her heart n mind ... he kissed her hand and then both eyes one after the other sucking the tear pearl n looked deep in her eyes seeking her permission ...he took her in a kiss marking her as his forever ...it was not just a kiss ...indead it was a promise ...promise of loving eachother till the last breath ...promise to be with eachother as their strength...promise to share every emotion and walk by eachother's side in every walk of life ...promise to share eachothers sorrow and happiness...it felt that they were longing for this moment only ...as if living for this on the earth ...now they belong to each other and nobody can erase the love they have for each other...they parted for air and geet was blushing like anything ...
... and he hugged her like its his life in his embrace cocooning her in his arm from the whole world just for him ...with him ...
...and she felt the ever longing peace in her heart after 8 loong yrs of longing...with rays of sunshine they left from there hopping for a new begninning of there lifes ...but
the new day had stored something else for them ...
they went to there respective hotels and promised to met at lunch while maan was to sent her a car to come at the venue... but instead of driver there came a message for geet when she was desperately w8ting for his call in lobby ...that
he had to go to delhi at the earliest coz of some emergency and dont worry he will be back ...
but she need to go to delhi also coz her best friend MEERA was in delhi in she had a flight at nite to catch with that she gave her delhi address to the person who told geet about maan's message and ask him to give this to maan and meet her there...with dat she left for delhi ..
here maan got a news of his dadi's heart attack and was in serious condition in hospital ...seeing her in that state he was fearing to loss the only person in his family ...but he put up a strong face praying for her life ...and walked in the ICU ...
( here is panchi bora as SAMEERA ...)
then came the most shocking moment of his life when his dadi asked him to marry her late childhood friend's grand-daughter SAMEERA ...as she has promised her that she will make sameera her daughter-in-law ...doctors had given up all hopes the only way to give her peace was to fulfill her wish ...
...but how can he ...he loves his MISHTY only ...
...then he thought dadi wants me to get married i will marry geet ...YES i will call her here and tell dadi everything ... BUT...how i dont even have her no. ... and then called the hotel where she stayed but they told him that she checked out...
Maan : now what should i do ... god y r u doing this to me ...
...mishty help me ... mumbling this continously... he closed his eyes and leaned on the wall ... only to get flash back of the promise he gave to her ...
u will take good care of Dadi and everyother person in ur family...
he snapped open his eyes ...mishty u want me to do this ...
with this doc came ... " Mr. Khurana ur dadi is in really critical situation ...if u want to give her a little bit of peace just do what she wants ...other wise she wont even survive this is the only way u can save her coz she has lost her will to live ...she is not responding to the treatment ...😭
plzzz saying so doc. left and maan punched his hand hard on the wall making it bleed ... closing his eyes in sheer anger on his helplessness ... he got the flashback remembering his promise ...
u will nt harm ur self ever in frustration...
.. remembering every moment when he got himself hurt ...how she use to take care of him ...scold him ..hit him with her tiny fist ...and finally end up crying like a baby ... mishty ...a tear escape from his eyes and he sat down hoping some magic to happen and he cld escape this moment but nothing came ...
and finally after a long struggle he entered in the room where every1 was present and said he is ready to marry sameera and they left for the mandir as dadi wanted maan to marry in a traditional way in a mandir... but
maan felt 2 end his life at the very moment when he was slipping mangalsutra in sameera' s neck and saw geet standing in front of him ...with a blank face ...no expression ..n then...pandit announced them to be married and every1 embraced sameera ...
on the other side maan was blank not knowing what to say at this moment ...how will he explain this to her ...will she even believe her ... but he stood rooted at his place in the corner ... while she just kept stairing at him trying to find the unsaid words and her answer.. in his deep eyes...
PRECAP : MAAN GEET AT THE AIRPORT ...GEET LEANING ON HIM LIKE IF THEY PARTED NOW ...THEY WILL BE SEPERATED FOR EVER ...HOW CAN THAT BE ..
PART 2 is on page 7 n prologue on page 1 ..
so here goes part one of my first story EVER ...😃
hope u all like it ...n enjoyed ...😊
plzz do give me ur responSe as it will help me do better ...
w8ting to know ur responSe ...😳😊
PART 2 :-
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago
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