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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Awesom. Bt so painful yaar. Maaneet seperated. Oh no.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Omg yeh kya maan married now and geet come waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely very interesting story...i loved it...waiting...by te way im nalinsavitha in fb...i read in ur notes, te first part lovely dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



lovely very interesting story...i loved it...waiting...by te way im nalinsavitha in fb...i read in ur notes, te first part lovely dear...


thnxx a lot dearo ...me really happy with positive comments as i was'nt expecting people 2 like it .😆...but all thnxx to varsha di ..she made me post this ...i love her 4 this coz i am loving the response ...😳
i read ur comment thr ...thnxx for appreciating it ...
hopefully next part will be tonight after 12 ...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

Omg yeh kya maan married now and geet come waiting for more


yup ...maan married ..😲
w8t 4 more earo as its a really shocking story ..😉
according to the prologue ...
thnxxx for liking my work ..it really make me feel good 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Awesom. Bt so painful yaar. Maaneet seperated. Oh no.
Pm me jb bi tum update karo


thnxx aton for liking my work...😃
indeed it is a painful story ...😭
n i hv send u buddy request ...accept it 4 pm ..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolly10

wow mindblowing SS.its really good

loved it.eagerly waiting for the next part


thnxxx alot dolly ...relly nyc to knw that u liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashishangel

Heartful congrats for ur first ss.. Its realy nyc.. Wil wait 4 d next update..
LOVE
Kashish


thnxxx a lot kashish ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ..
.. an un-conditional bond of pain ..😭





PART 2

...maan was blank not knowing what to say at this moment ...how will he explain this to her ...will she even believe her ... but he stood rooted at his place in the corner ...😭... while she just kept stairing at him trying to find the unsaid words and her answer.. in his deep eyes... the only thing she saw was ...guilt and a question where were u ?? but she did'nt had his answer .,...not this time ..

and everyone started to came near them seeing so geet moved from there and was now hiding behind a pillar ... everyone said to move 2wards hospital and to tell dadi about this good news ...

...meera had wittnesed all this and she knew it was her childhood love as told by geet ...and she dragged geet with her to follow them to the hospital to get to knw what happen but geet was now a lifeless body...😭

.. reaching there they saw maan sitting beside dadi and she was un-consious ...doctors saying that she is still in danger and is nt responding to the treatment ...tears skipped from geet's eyes ... seeing him in such a broken condition .,...never in her wildest dream she thought of seeing him like this...it was hurting her alot she moved to a distance from all of his family member ...and reached a mandir and stand there to pray for dadi ...after almost 4 to 6 hour ..( poor geet standing there 4 soo many hours ...😭 )

...they got the news that ... dadi has started responding and is now progressing ... and with that geet left the hospital and meera was adamant to talk with maan ... but geet stops her and said nt to do so for the sake of ur friend ...

here after coming out of the ward maan met adi...and adi got the news that maan has married Sameera ..😲. that gave him a shock as he is the only person who knws about geet in his life ...

and adi gave him the address which geet left for him and said that the girl whom u met in dehradun is in delhi and here is the address she left for in the hand of our employee to inform u where she is in delhi ... but this put maan into more guilt and remorse ... he was stairing at the addresss blankly ...a tear skipped from his eyes .. tear of remorse ...the flashes of geet's face in the mandir was followinng him all the while ...and his face was depicting the turmoil he is going through ...

after putting alot of efforts adi said in a low voice to maan : u should meet her once and clarrify ur position so that atleast she don't think of u as a cheater ...😲

hearing this maan walked out only to bump into meera who was passing disgust looks to him ... and burst out ...

Meera : r u now happy mr .MSK bretaying my innocent friend geet ...😡...just coz she loved u the most in her life ...god iss se acha tou yeh hota ke aap uss se kal milte hi nahi ...kyun kiye aap ne woh wade jab nibha nahi sakte thay ...

maan was feeling all the more guilty remembering last night and his promise to make her meet his dadi ...

as meera was about to go he said... "plzzz tell me where is she ...i want to meet her once ... plzz tell where is she ???"
😭

Meera : its of no use meeting her now ...aap jaante bhi hain woh wahan mandir mien kyun aayi thi ...aapke liye ...uss insaan ke liye jis ki woh iss dunya mien sabse ziada parwah karti hai ...
Meera : jab se mujh se mili uss waqt se aapke liye pareshaan thi ... usko laga ke aap kisi mushkil mien hain ... aapko dhund rahi thi ..pagloon jaise aapke office gae par aapka staff ...nahi mil payi aur yahan krishn mandir aayi ...
par uss bechari ko kiya pata tha ...jis ke liye woh itni pareshaan hai ...jis ke takleef ke bare mien soch rahi hai .woh tou khud ussko usski zindagi ka sab se bara dukh dene ki tyarii kar raha hai ...
Maan : meera plzz ek baar ...ek baar mujhe uss se mil lene do ...batao mujhe kahan hai woh ...
Meera : koi faida nahi hai ...kya kar loo ge aap ussko mil ke ..kya woh dard kam kar painge jo aapne ussko dia ..
Maan : plzzz bas ek baar mjhe uss se mill lene do ... mjhe ek baar uss se baat karni hai ...for god sake batao mjhe mishty kahan hain ...

Meera : she is going ...she is going far away from u ...forever... she is at the airport... she is going away but u can't undo the damage Mr.MSK u just cant... u can't bring my old geet back at any cost now ...

At the airport

maan entered with running like a maniac looking for geet ...and the sight just froze his feet on the way ...

his geet who had every colour in her was sitting in a corner ...pale ...and with white face holding no emotions on it ... his heart broke into numerious peaces seeing her like that ... he felt he could just undo past 8 hr.s and get her into his life forever...but alas it was too late and he can't do any thing ...😭

... he walked towards her with shaking legs like ground will just slip beneath his feet if she looked into his eyes ... he standed there rooted not able to comprehend what to say ...how to plead forgiveness for the pain he caused to her ...how to tell her that y did he do so ...words were not coming from his mouth ...he was just stairing at her blank motionless face ...which depected no emotion at the moment ...seeing the dreadfull sight infront of him ...her angelic face full of pain ...the only word came from him was ...MISHTY




...her name from his mouth was enough to bring her back to reality from the painful sight she saw in the mandir ... but it was worse when she looked up ...only to find him stairing at her with teary eyes and a trail of tear fall from her eyes too ...last night's event flash in her mind every word every gesture of him ...his eyes that were showing emmense love ...and was now depecting only pain...remorse ...guilt ...not able to bear her gaze he lowered his eyes in shame ...guilt n remorse ...blaming himself for each n every tear pearls of her ...

she stood wipping her tears infront of him and made him sit on the shair...and wipped his tears ... he had no strength to confront her or to give any explanation ...he was blamming himself every second for what he has done ...he broke his promise ...not only that he also broke apart her heart ...he promised her to give all the happiness of the world but he is the soul reason of her pain n tears ...the only word came from his mouth were...

Maan : MISHTY I AM SOR...

( cutting him in between she placed her palm on her mouth...and then cupped his face in her both hands)

Geet (trying hard to stop her tears ) said : Maan ...hum bhale hi ek dosre ke paas na hoon par sath tou humesha rahenge ...( looking straight into his eyes )

hum best friends thay aur humesha rahenge ...aur jab bhi aap ko lage ke ab saree raaste band hugaye hain ...tou bas apni aankhen band kar ke ek baar mjhe yaad kar lena ...aapki best friend ...aapki mishty apki problem solve karne zaror aaigi ...PROMISE ...

(tears of pain and guilt was continously running out of maan's eyes and she was wipping it with her thumb ) ... not able to bear anymore ...she broke the eye contact ... and said

( bring one hand forwrd ) vaada karo ...aapna aur apni Wi...(she paused nt able to holds the tears anymore )😭

aapna aur apni poori family ka buhat khayaal karhooge aur apni her responsibility poori karooge ...( he nodded with tears ...coz he can never deney his mishty ..no matter what ) ...

seeing his face for the last time and wipping the trials of tear from her face she stood up and started collecting her lugage as her flight was announced ...

here maan was still lost in the pain he saw in her eyes and the love he felt in her word ...she was going collecting all the strength she had ...but voice full of pain stopped her mid way ...MISHTY..she turned back and ran to him hugged him tight and he pulled her even more closer from her waste like it was his life slipping from him they both cried ...cried alot hugging each other tight as if there is no tommorow ...

...indead it was there last meeting ...they stood there hugging each other crying their heart out in each other's embrace ...it felt soo soothing like all the wound were getting healed up ... it is what they want ...to be in each others arm forever...





... the second announcement of her flight to spain made her come back to reality ... she loosened the hug and kissed his both eyes sucking the precious tears away ...she stood there for a second to look at his face ...like wanting to pictures it forever in her heart ...then she ran away from him...knowing if she stood there any longer she will not be able to part away ...

he came to his sense ...out of the soothing feeling of her mishty which made his heart light ...after crying his heart out in her embrace ...the only place which could give him peace ...opening his closed eyes... seeing her running away ...guilt over take him and he sat on the shair like a lifeless body ...thinking about the blissful moments he spent with her in those 7 yrs ....and then last nights flash came in front of him making him all the more guilty for breaking his promise ...and snaching her smile ...then her word rung in his ears making him come back from the remorse ...

vaada karo aapna aur apni poori family ka buhat khayaal karhooge aur apni har responsibility poori karooge ...

he wipped his tears one last time and search throw the crowd in the hope to get just a glimpse of her ... but could'nt...






here geet was hidding behind a pillar ...remembering each and every moment she spent with him with eyes closed...their first kiss ...their non-stop talks last night ...a smile kept on her face ... she came back to her sense when MEERA kept her hand on her shoulder and said ....GEET ..

Meera : teri baat hui unse ...kya kaha unhoon ne ...kyun milna chahte thay tumse ...aakhir kya clarification di...

Geet : kya clarify karte woh meer ...unki aankhien khud hi bata rahi thi woh kitne dard mien hain... aur ye sab dekh kar mien unse kya pouchti ...jis waja ne unhe itna dard diya ...mein unse wahi waja pouch kar unhe aur takleeef nahi de sakti meer ...

Geet : aaj subha se jis dard ko mien apne andar mehsoos kar rahi thi meer ...woh galat nahi tha ..mera dil kabhi galat nahi ho sakta ...woh pareshaan tha ...mushkil mien thay ... janti hoo woh iss dunya mien sab se ziada pyaar dadi maa se karte ...woh kabhi keh nahi paayein ge par mien jaanti hoon dadi ko iss halat mien dekh kar unka kya haal hoga ...ye sab jaan kar apni aankhoon se maan ke chehre par woh dard dekhne ke baad mien kaise ...

Meera : unhe takleef nahi de sakti ...geet ab bhi yahi keh rahi hai ...jo kuch hua uske baad bhi ...tou ne apna pyaar khoya ...apni sarii khushiyan khoo di aur ab bhi tou unhi ke baree mien soch rahi hai ...geet mjhe ab tere iss pyaar se dar lag raha hai ...kahin iss pyaar mien tou apni zindagi sari khushiyaan na kho de ... uss ne apni zindagi ki rah chun li ab tujhe bhi apni zindagi ek naye morh se shuru karni hai ...ab bas hua uss pyaar ke peeche bhagna ...8 saal se tumhain dekha hai ...intezaar karte par ab aur nahi geet ....ab tujhe bhi aage barhna hoga ...

Geet : mera ye sach hai ke mein ab bhi maan se utna hi pyaar karti hoon jitna kal karti thi ...aur sach kahoon tou mjhe nahi lagta ke yeh pyaar zara bhi kam huaga ...aur tou fiqar mat kar ...maan ke sath betaye woh kuch pal mere liye poori zindagi guzaarne ke liye kafi hain ...un kuch paloon mien mjhe jitni khushi mili kabhi nahi mili ...aur r mien apni poori zindagi maan ki yaadoon ke sath buhat khushi se guzaar sakti hoon ....aur jahan tak kuch khoone ki baathai tou meer mere pyar ne mjhe yahi samjhaya hai ke

PYAR WOH EHSAAS HAI JO INSAAN MIEN SE KUCH KHOONE KA DAR META DETA HAI...

aur maan ke liye mere pyaar ne mere andar se bhi woh dar meta diya hai ...

Geet : ..tu ne thek kaha mujhe ab zindagi ko dobara shuru karna huga aur mien karoon gi meer ...ek nayi shuruyaat iss khushi ke sath ke koi hai jo maan ka khayaal rakhe ga ...mata hai meer pechle 8 saal mien mene humesha socha hai ..pata nahi maan apna dhiyaan rakhte bhi hain ya nahi unko tou apna khayaal rakhna bhi nahi aata ...par ab nahi ab mujhe sakoon hai ke koi tou hai jo maan ka khayaal rakhe ga ...

Meera : aur tu ...tere kya ...

Geet : mien ...mien wahi karoon jis ka vaada mene maan se kiya tha ... world ki best architect designer ban kar maan ka aur mera sapna poora karoongi ...jaise unhoon ne best bussiness maan ban kar mera sapna poora kiya ...ab tou ye zindagi sirf maan ke liye ...

Meera : geet ye pyaar nahi hai ...kuch aur hi hai ...ye kaisa pagal pan hai geet ...uss ne tujhe choor kar kisi aur se shaadi karli aur tou ab bhi ...

Geet : Meer ye sach hai ke ab mien maan ki zindagi ka hissa kabhi nahi ban sakti ...magar ye bhi sach hai ke woh meri aatma ka hissa hain.... meri har saas unhi ka naam lekar chalti hai .. aur mien unka naam apni saansoon se alag nahi kar sakti ...chahoon tu bhi nahi .. ...mene maan se vaada kiya hai ke jab bhi unko meri zarorat hugi mien zaror aaongi ...aur abb ye vaada hi meri zindagi ka maqsad hai ...mien jiyoon gi magar sirf maan ke liye ...MERI DHARKAN CHALE GI SIRF UN KE LIYE ...

with that both headed towards each others destination ...as maan met adi outside the airport to get the news that dadi has started progressing and is in semi-consious candi. asking 4 u ...and geet borded her flight to spain ... they both were convinced that this was their last meeting and now they will lead there life as promised to the each other ...least they know they are bounded together forever ...

love is missing someone when u r apart ...
but somehow ...
feeling warm inside coz u're close in heart ...

DESTINY HAD SOMETHING ELSE STORED FOR THEM ...

they met after exactly 1year 6 months ...

Its Meera's marriage ceremony ...

After alot of struggle by Armaan and Meera ...geet finally agreed to come back to India ...and attend the wedding ceremony of her childhood friend ...oblivious to the fact that Meera is getting married to maan's childhood friend and cousin RANVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT ...( RV )

here enters the most dashing, successful, ruthless bussiness man in india ...MD of KHURANA CONSTRUCTION ...

THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA ...

Geet standing at the stage ...talking and teasing meera and RV ...suddenly felt her heart beating 100 times faster ...trying alot to concentrate but her gaze imitiately goes towards the main door ...and she felt her self loosing and tears make there way out of her eyes ...seeing maan busy replying his mails and heading 2wards the stage ...she imediately left from there and hide herself behind a pillar at an aloof corner ...just stealing glances of him ...watchng him from far ...

For how many times in these months her heart wanted to see him ...listen his voice ...but she always suppress her thoughts and holds herself guilty to even thought about him like that as he is now married but could'nt stop herself from loving him ...how could she ...this is something beyond her control ...😭

after sometime maan got a call and went at a distance from the gathering to attend it ...but froze in his way as he saw a girl standing in red churidaar behind the pillar facing her back ...he did'nt needed to see her face ...he knew its her ...her presence ...her feeling engulf his surroundings ... unknown to himself he started moving towards her ...😊

but before he reach to her ...he felt a bang on his heart ...seeing a handsome guy holding her from her shoulder and gets her out of his vision ... he felt his heart would explode any moment ...she is here ...o god ...her face it was same as i saw last at the airport ...pail and full of pain ...guilt again took over him as he again got lost in his past ...😭






okiee so 1 clarification geet ..maan .. meera n armaan r awl frm one school so know each other atleast by face ..😊
sorry awl my friends ...4 such a rondoo update ..par kya karoo IT AN UN-CONDITIONAL BOND OF PAIN ...

PRECAP
sameera meeting geet n gets to know about them ...😲
armaan's entry ...😉
another maaneet hug ...😳

part 1 is on page 3 n prologue on page 1 ...

PART 3 :-

plzzz do let me know hw did u find the update n give me ur response as it will help me do better ...plzzz 😊



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago
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maine already apni first place book kar li😆

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