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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
loved the updates dear...
loved maaneet's unconditional love...
part2 was really painful...
waiting for next part..
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So painful story yaar. Tissu paper sath me leke pdna pdta h. Update soon. Superb update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS WAS SO SAD AND EMOTIONAL
THEY WILL MEET AGAIN, BUT MAAN IS MARRIED
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Yar koi itna acha kaise ho sakta h geet almost gave her every happiness fr maan par maan ki bhi koi galti nai hai its just time taking toll on them superb sobia no words i m waiting fr ur next update jaldi dena
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
part 2
nice part...
poor them...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz update the title with the update and page numbers? like part 2@page 7 and the date...
Edited by spvd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
EK DUJE KE VAASTE..
..an un-conditional bond of pain..😭





hi friends ...
hope every one is fine n liking the story hopefully koi boar nahi huraha ...
before reading part 3 ....i would like u all to consider the line from the prologue ...😊
waqt .. halaat .. kismat .. aur kudrat ke khel mien kya mil payeeinge ye do dil ...jo sirf ...
ek duje ke liye dharak te hain ...??
friends 1st part me ...it was the nature that was testing them ....
2nd part mien it was there fate ...bretaying them ....
n now destiny is playing its game ...

last two updates mien buhat roolaya so aaj thora light update with a song sequence ...😉


ENJOY ...😊


PART 3

after sometime maan got a call and went at a distance from the gathering to attend it ...but froze in his way as he saw a girl standing in red churidaar behind the pillar facing her back ...he did'nt needed to see her face ...he knew its her ...her presence ...her feeling engulf his surroundings ... unknown to himself he started moving towards her ...😊


...but before he reach to her ...he felt a bang on his heart ...seeing a handsome guy holding her from her shoulder and gets her out of his vision ... he felt his heart would explode any moment ...she is here ...o god ...her face it was same as i saw last at the airport ...pail and full of pain ...guilt again took over him as he again got lost in his past ...every second in these 18 months he have been punishing himself for giving her soo much pain ...for breaking her heart like that ...for snaching her smile ...for each n every tear that scape from her beautiful almond eyes ..just because of him ...

he was again feeling the same pain and remorse ...he felt at that time seeing her in the mandir...her face the way she was looking at him ...her painfull eyes ... her pain never left him alone in peace even for a second in these 18 months ...every time he close his eyes ...her teary eyes came in front of him ...making him realise how bruthely he has torn her heart ...her heart which was full of love ...but the thing which bothered him the most was her leaving him without even a single question instead she hugged him and tried her best to vanish the pain ...LIKE ALWAYS but alas this time the pain he was suffering was more than anyone could ever imagine ...the thought of her pain made his life a living hell for him ...

his thoughts were broken with a hand that was kept on his shoulder ...he turned around making his face blank like always ...

SAMEERA :.aap yahan kya kar rahe hain ...everything fine na maan ...look u are sweating ... ( she tried to touch his forehead with a tissue to wipe the sweat but he stopped her mid-way )

MAAN : sameera ..tum ab aai hu ..where were u ? RV was asking 4 u ...

Sameera : Sorry maan woh actually ..my car's tire got burst so i got late ...

Maan : no problem ...go n meet RV se he was asking about u ...

Sameera : Umm ...Maan ...hum sath chalien ...?

Maan : okii ..

on stage ...

RV : hi sam ...meer this is sam ..my cousin n maan bro's beloved wife ..

Sameera : n your bhabi also rajveer ...

RV : ya rite ...par bhabi ji aap tou ghayab hi hogayi ..
mana aap MBA kar rahi thi ..par hum itne bhi low profile log nahi ke Mrs. MSK hum se baat bhi na kar sakein ...

Sameera : kya yr Rajveer ...tum bhi ..u knw na MBA is a tough job ...

here after a bit of bhabi and devar talks they proceeded toward the dinner arrangements along with the newly weds ...

on the way RV pointed out on GEET AND ARMAAN ....who were sitting on a cornered table ...he insisted to join them as they dont know any one else here ...
Here GEET was trying hard to stop her tears ...and Armaan was consolling her ...and pointed out 2wards Maan and others who were now heading towards them ...geet instantly wiped her tears and made a happy face and pretended to be in-talks with armaan...

RV : hi frnds...can we join u 2 ...

Geet : common jij ...hum tou wahan se aagaye so that u people have a private time ...ehehe

Armaan : please join na yaar ..y formallities ...( all seated )

RV : oh sorry ...i forgot to introduce u all ...geet , armaan ...this is Maan...MAAN SINGH KHURANA ...my childhood friend and cousin ...and she is his lovely wife ...Sameera MAAN KHURANA ( geet made her eye lashed down with the mention of her name along with maan ...and said hi with a pleasant smile )...

.and... maan bro n sameera ...this is geet n armaan oopss ..Dr. Armaan Malik ...they are Meer's bestest friend from school time ...

Sameera : oh means tumhari saali ...aadhi ghar wali type ...winks😡( BAD JOKE SAMEERA _)

all the while geet did'nt even look at maan at all ...knwing he will got to knw that she was crying ... and then accidently poured some water on her dress ...she excused herself to clean it and armaan was watching her retreating figure ...only to guess did she do that deliberately or not ...

RV : maan u knw what ...mjhe meer ne jab kaha that her best friend is in spain doing some architect designing ...i thought she must be doing it like an interest or just time pass as she has a huge property here in India...but man she is such an ambitious person ...u knw what she is working as the head architect in the best europian construction firm ...and she is damn good with her work ...

maan had a smile on his face listening that she actually made their dream come true ...while sameera just kept watching his change of expression from the corner of her eyes and served him a bit of more main dish ...he was about to eat his porsel ...

when a loud sound came from back ...STOP MAAN ...

all looked at geet ...running 2wards the table ...

GEET : DONT EAT THAT MAAN...ISS MIEN THYME HAI ...AUR AAPKO THYME SE ALERGY HAI ...

Maan looked at her astonished ..she still had that same concern ...after what he did ...seeing his piercing gaze she broke the eye contact and step back ...while armaan made her sit beside him ...

Sameera : i am sorry Maan ...pata nahi mera dhiyaan kahan tha ...

Maan : its ok sameera ...tum ne jaan buj kar nahi kiya ...

geet felt herself guilty again to behave like this infront of every one ...than came the most expected question ...

RV : geet tumhain kaise pata ke maan ko heeng se allergy hai ...

Sameera : han ...hw do u knw ???

geet was looking down ...nt knwing wht to say next and a tear lingering on the edge of her eye lid ...threatning to fall ... just fearing the moment ...wht if sameera got to knw abt maan and her love ...NO

she cant let that happen ...never ...she cant ruin his life ...his family ...
...cursing herself for her deed and at first place to agree on coming back to india ...she knw if she faced maan she wont be able to hide her pain ...her love for him ...how can she ...he is the only one in this world who can read her inside out ...they does'nt need words to tell each other whts going in there mind ...and then before she could give any clarification ...maan's voice came ..

Maan : we were in the same school ...and friends too ...so may be i told her sometime ..

RV : woo ...thats intresting ...geet tum ne bataya nahi yaar abhi tak ...ke tum log ek dosre ko jante hu ...
Meera : umm ...wooo ..Rajveer ..actually ..

Armaan : oh commom .RV ...its been soo long we met aur maan tou humara seniour thay ...so we hardly met ...and about this scene ...may be it stricked her mind ...choro ye sab tum tou humien ye batao ...ke iss jhassi ki rani meera bai ko pata kaise liya ...geet knows all about u 2 but nt me ...

Meera ( throwing the napkin on armaan's face ) : shut up ...jhassi ki Rani ...uhh Armaan agar mien iss bhari bharkam dress mien nahi hoti tou tumhain sach mie batati ke mien kya hoon ...idiot

Geet : dont worry meer ...tujhe ye dress ab waise bhi ziada dair bear nahi karna ...winks winks ...( meera turned all red ..:D)😆

all the while maan was observing how deliberitely she was trying to wash off the visible pain from her face by her fake smile ... and on the other hand sameera was watching maan ...looking lost somewhere ...and recalling his word about geet n his friendship ...

maan saw some waiters coming their way with some sweet dishes n headed towards them ...

after sometime icecream were served ... the serving tray contained all different flavours ...2 chocolate, strawberry, blueberry n 2 butter scotch ..

geet, meera n armaan made the most wierd faces lookin at each other while RV took a bowl of chocolate ice-cream and geet signed ..
Geet : thank god meer teri choice kuch better hui ...
RV : matlab ...
Geet : matlab aap meer ki choice n aapko chocolate pasand hai na ... iska matlab aap inn idiot ki tarha nahi hoo ...god mujhe aaj tak samaj nahi aaya ke log ye ajeeb-o-greeb flavours khate kaise hain ...
Meera : dare u say anything about my strawberry ..
Armaan : gudya i know tujhe blueberry se nafrat hai ..par plzz let us eat na ..
Geet : han tou mene kab roka hai ...but plzzz iss ko mujh se door rakhoo .. iss ki smell meri chocolate ka maza kharaab kar de gi ...
Meera : geet kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta tha ke tou dunya mien one piece hai ...par nahi teri choice na bari hi common hai ...CHOCOLATE hadd hai yrr bachpan se aaj tak ek hi flavour ...
Geet : han tou iss mien kya hai ...adhi dunya ko chocolate pasand hai ...aur shayad 15% log bhi nahi hoon ge dunya mien ye ajeeb strawberry ..blueberryy n butter scotch khane wale ..
Meera : right hum hain unn 15% unique logoon mien jo different hain ...samjhi
Geet : wrong tum log hu unn 15% stupid logoon mien jin ko chocolate ki value nahi hai ...
Meera : geet tu ...

in the mid of all this sameera was shocked to see the sight far away from the table ...

maan singh khurana whose is considered to be the most serious cold hearted person in the world is now smiling whole heartedly seeing these 3 fighting for no reason ...






least did she know the reason of his smile was non-other than his mishty ...
he was successful to make her smile ...
yes he made the waiters serve the ice-cream knowing what will happen next as always ...n it did ...the fight started n geet began to forget the moment passed a minute ago...

after sometime when RV n Geet were busy talking with eachother exposing the school event of meera in front of RV ...armaan n meera were looking at her smilling, giggling ...laughing full of life ...

Meera : amy aaj kitne time baad geet ke chehre par ye khushi dekhi hai ...
Armaan : han meer ...shayad iss liye ke woh yahan hai ..
Meera : ajeeb baat hai armaan ...jis insaan ne geet ko sab se ziada dukh diya ..woh aaj bhi geet ki muskurahat ki waja hai ..

Armaan : jab geet spain aayi aur tum ne mujhe sab kuch bataya ...uss waqt dill kiya ke jis ne meri gudya ko dukh diya hai ...uss se uss ki zindagi le loon ... par geet ne rook liya ... mien uss waqt bhi samaj nahi paya tha ke geet aisa kyun kar rahi hai ... shayad iss liye ke mien uss waqt pyaar ko nahi jaanta tha ..par aaj meer aaj mien pyaar ko jaanta hoon phir bhi geet ke dill mien maan ke liye jo pyaar hai mien uss ko nahi samaj paa raha ..
Meera : samajh tu mujhe bhi nahi aata ...na jane kaisa rishta hai inn dono ka ..door reh kar bhi paas hain ...jo udaasi mene geet ki aankhoon mien dekhi hai ...wahi udaasi maan veerji ki aankhoon mien me pechle ek mahi se dekh rahi hoon ...pata nahi kismat ne inn dono ke saath ye kyun kiya ...







on the other hand RV was insisting geet to sing as she use to sing in the school time as told by meera along with armaan, meera n maan but meera didn't mentioned about maan in there group ...& geet was refusing ..

Geet : plzz jij mene gana buhat pehle chor diya hai ...ab tou kafi time hugaya mujh se nahi hoga ..
RV : par kyun yrr ...meera ke paas mene tum log ki ek CD sunni u were dam good ... phir kyun chor diya singing ...

Geet : bas ye samaj lijeye ke mera school meri insperation tha aur jab school se dor hui tab se inspiration bhi door hugayi aur singing bhi ...

RV : but i wld still like 2 hear u singing once atleast ..

and in a corner maan was listening to RV n Geet's convo ..
n gets to know the unsaid words ... yes they were each others inspiration just coz of him she started singing n when they parted they both didn't liked to sing alone ...thinking about her words he went to the past ...

SOME YEARS AGO AT DEHRADUN

its the annual function n maan, geet, armaan & meera have decided to give a performance for the students in there last year of school ..

maan on piano .. was playing some random keys and geet armaan n meera were just sitting there thinking what to do ...n maan played this tune ...

Geet : waoo maan aap ne ye kitna acha music prepare kara ... hum iss hi ko song mien convert kar ke perform karte hain ...
Maan : f9 mishty as u say ...par ek shart pe ..
Geet : uff maan aap aur aap ki shart ...boliye kya shart hai ..
Maan : mien ye tune tab hi bajaonga jab tum gao gi ...
Geet : whatt ...maan me n singing ...aapko logoon se tomatos khane hain ..
Maan ( in a stern voice ) : MISHTY ...!!!

n he came back to reality with a strong voice of thunder outside ...
his eyes got fixed at the serene sight in front of him ...geet standing in front of the window with her stand outside feeling the rain drops on her hands n enjoying the rain like always ...






Maan ( st ) : mishty tum kabhi nahi badlo gi ...aaj bhi khud se pehle mere bare mien sochna ...kitne saal guzar gaye par tum nahi badli ... jaanta hoon tum kabhi kisi aur ke saamne nahi gayoo gi ... uss waqt bhi poora 1 week laga tha tumhain manane mien aur phir bhi tum ne sab ke saamne gane se mana kar diya tha ... aur mien jaanta hoon tum aaj bhi kyun mana kar rahi hoo ...taa ke tumhare dil mien jo dard hai woh mujh tak na puhanch jaye ... par mishty mene tumhara dard in 18mahinoo mien har pal mehsoos kiya hai ...

unknowingly he was walking 2wrds geet thinking all that ...

and here geet was in her own world when she realized him stepping toward her and turned back in a sweft moment only to get tripped due to the water on the floor ... she had closed her eyes and her heart was beating 100 times faster ...as he grabbed her in his strong grip before she met the hard gound ...

PYAAR BHARE EK MADHOoR SPARSH NE BHEED DILLON KE KHOOLE ...
SPARSH KI BHASHA NE KITNA KUCH KEH DALA BIN BOLE ...

feeling his touch after such a long time was a blissful feeling ... there eyes met finally after such a long struggle to hide every emotion from each other but guess destiny is always against them ...they were stairing at each other endlessly oblivious to their surrounding ... shairing the pain .. the turmoil they were going through ...







there beautiful moment was disturbed with the gathering sound of everyone ...and they straighten them self while maan headed towards an opposite corner ...

every1 inquired geet if she is ok and then

got distracted with a piano tune ...
armaan n meera were shocked and
geet started moving towards the source ...
and her eyes got filled hearing that tune again ...

it was the same tune he played last ...yes it was the last time they sung with each other ...and it was the same tune he prepared for annual function but never played it in front of others as it was special ...special for him coz its the first tune ever on which she sung ...

THE PIANO TUNE STARTS FROM HERE DO LISTEN THE SONG ...ITS AN AWESOM 1 ...

maan finished the tune and geet ran from there leaving the shocking audience behind which were engrosed in his eternal music ...

RV : woo bro ..mujhe nahi pata tha u play it soo well ..
Sameera : man apne kabhi bataya nahi aapko music pasand hai ..
and suddenly there came and angelic voice ...
..which maan was expecting ... this was an indication for geet that he wants her to sing ... sing like she did years ago ...sing with her heart n soul ...4 which he was carving for ...but the words broke him apart and guilt took a toll on him ...

geet was passing by the hall towards the huge window and with a smile she started ..

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi
shikwa nahi ...shikwa nahi ...shikwa nahi ...
tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi tu nahi ..
zindagi nahi .. zindagi nahi .. zindagi nahi ...

geet was again standing in front of the long window seeing the rain endlessly ...

Jee mein aata hai, tere daaman mein, sar jhuka ke ham
rote rahe, rote rahe ... roote rahein ...
Teri bhi aankho mein, aansuo ki kami to nahi hai ...
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi ...

with that she turned around n looked at maan and saw the same pain and their met ..the same emotions were depicting from those dark eyes of maan...

the beautiful lyrics made them go in there own world of imagination and here standing in front of each other stairing endlessly ... maan started ...

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi
shikwa nahi ...shikwa nahi ...shikwa nahi ..
tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi tu nahi ..
zindagi nahi .. zindagi nahi .. zindagi nahi ...

un-able to hold herself she dis -continued and moved at a lonely corner away from every1 ...RV wanted to go to her but meera stopped him saying she needs to be alone ...

while sameera was standing as a confused soul ... not able to stand the bond between the two but was deeply effected by the words of geet nthe music played by maan ...





AFteR SOMETIME THE NEWLY WEDS BID BYE TO EVERY ONE N PROCEED TO THERE ROOM ...😉

while maan was busy with his mails and armaan was in his room ...

here geet was roaming in the hotel garden and then started stairing the dark sky...and sameera walked to her ...

Sameera : hi geet ...

Geet : oh..hi sameera ...tum kab aayi sorry mjhe pata nahi chala..

Sameera : its oki ..waise mien abhi aayi ...par tum kahan khooyi thi ...

Geet : kahin nahi bas yu hi aasmaan mien taroon ki roshni dhoondh rahi hoon...it sooths me lot ...

Sameera : hmm .. pata hai maan bhi aksar raat bhar iss aasmaan ko dekhte rahte hain ...aur wohi ek waqt hai jab mein unke chehre par ek halki si hassi dekh paati hoon ...

geet smiled weekly remembering her past ...how they use to sneekout of their rooms in their hostel and sit together beneath the tree and talk endlessly stairing at the heavenly sight of full moon ...

while smeera got confused seeing the same smile on geet's face ...the same feeling which she use to exprience when maan use to stair at the moon ...just the same ...puzzled she continued ...

Sameera : ajeeb baat hai na geet ...tum aur maan dost thay par maan ne kabhi mjhe tumhare bare kuch nahi kaha ...un ke zubaan par tumhara naam bhi nahi aaya kabhi ...aur tum...tum bhi tou kabhi nahi aayi ...maan ne mjhe humari reception party mien apne sab collouges ...office staff ...college mate ..sab se milaya ..bas tum hi nahi thi wahan ...maan ki kisi bhi party mien nahi thi but y ...

Geet : woh ...actually .,..mien Spain mien thi n maan ke 12th ke baad we could'nt contact each other ...iss liye nahi aa sakii ...( avoiding her gaze looking towords the sky )

waise u are very lucky to have him ...he is really a nice person ...with a golden heart ...bas upar se hi ghussa dekhate hain ...aur sab se ziada ghussa tou us par kartein hain jis ki sab se ziada parwa kartien hun ...

( a smile kept on her face ...remembering the time of her fight with him at school ...his scolding ...his concern ...) ...unka pyaar jatane ka andaaz alag hai ...magar galat nahi lagta ..balke acha lagta hai unka haqq jatana ...

( looking back to sameera ...who is now lost in her own world ..)

Sameera : sahi kaha tum ne ...a person with a golden heart ...sach mien ...woh meri veeraan dunya mien ek roshni ban kar aaye ...pata nahi kab hum ajnabi se dost ban gaye ...kuch pata hi nahi chala ...unke sath rehte rehte kab unhoon ne mere dil mien apni jaga bana li mjhe bhi nahi pata chala... unhoo ne kabhi mjhe kisi cheez ki kami nahi hone di ..humesha ek dost ki tarha sath diya ...har kadam par sath thay ...

Geet ( seeing her lost ...abruptly asked her ) : buhat pyaar karti hu maan se ...

Sameera : han ...karti hoon ..par ye jaan ne mien mene buhat deer kar di ...1-1/2 saal maan mere saath thay mere paas thay par phir bhi apne dill ke ehsaas ko jaan nahi paayi aur uss raat jab maan bukhaar mien tarap rahe thay tab unki takleef ke aage kuch nahi dekha ...kuch bhi nahi aur mene apna sab kuch maan ko de diya ... ..uss ek raat mien poori zindagi ka har sach mere saamne aagaya ... apne dill mien chupe uss ehsaas ko mene humesha maan ke liye izzat ka naam diya ...magar uss raat mujhe ehsaas hua ke woh kuch aur nahi balke pyaar tha ...uss raat mene apna sab kuch apni aatma bhi maan ke naam kardi ...

lost in the past sameera confessed ... ...

humari shadi jis tarha hui mjhe kuch samajhne ka mauqa hi nahi mile ...aisa nahi tha ke mien iss ke liye raazi nahi thi magar bas pata nahi kyun us waqt mien maan ko woh jaga nahi de payii jo ek pati ki hooti hai ...par shaadi ki pehli raat jab mene unse waqt maanga aur unhoon ne bina mjh se koi sawaal kiye mjhe woh waqt diya shayad uss pal hi maan ne mere dil mien apni jaga bana li magar mien humesha apne dil me chupe iss ehsaas ko unke liye izzat ka naam deti rahi ...

1-1/2 saal ke baad bhi mien maan ko samaj nahi payi ...aaj bhi unki aankhein nahi parh pati ...lekin aksar lagta hai unko kisi ka intezaar hai ...last year bhi best bussinessman of the year ka award unko mila ...magar talliyoon ko us goonj mien ...mene unki aankhoon ko kisi talaash mien paya... najane kis cheez ki talaas hai ...pata nahi kya hai jo unko sakoon de sakta hai ...pata nahi ...par itna zaror hai ke mien maan ko unki khushoyan wapis dena chahti hoon ...jis tarha unhoon ne mujhe meri zindagi ke saari khushiyan di ...mien uske chehre par bhi muskurahat dekhna chahti hoon ...

Geet on the other side was happy ...happy to knw that her love have somebody in his life to take care of him... to give him all the happiness ...listening to sameera's talk ...now she was sure that one day maan will come out of his past and will live a life full of happiness coz sameera's love has the capabiility ...

Sameera broke apart from her thoughts and hugged geet ...

Sameera ( in the hug ) : pata nahi tumhain ye sab kyun keh diya ...jo baat aaj tak apne aap se bhi nahi keh payii woh tum se keh di ...geet .. thank u .. ...aaj pata nahi kyun tumse baat kar ke sach mien dil halka hugya...

while the long held tears of geet made there way out of her eyes and she instantly wiped them off ...and said parting from the hug ...

Geet : mien dua karoon gi ke tumhara relation bilkul perfect hujai ...aur maan ko unki khushi aur unki hassi dono wapis de sako ...

both gave a warm smile to each other and made there way towards their room ...

NEXT MORNING AT THE AIRPORT ...GEET IS LEAVING BACK TO SPAIN ..

on RV's constant plead maan n sameera agreed to accompny them to the airport to see off geet ... as everyone was proceeding 2wards the airport ...a strong ...good lucking charming guy came out of the entrance with a sweet smile ...

Randheer Aluhwalia ...

Randheer : hi geet ...surprised ..!!

arre woh kya hai na mjhe mumbai aana para kuch kaam se tou mene socha kyun na saara kaam aaj hi khatam kar ke tumhare sath wapis jaya jaye ...waise bhi dad ko tu tum janti hi ho ...unhoon ne tou saari tyarii abhi se shooro kardi hai ...and let alone him ...dayi jaan ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai ...

while Meera , Armaan n Geet was shocked to see him here ...

on the other hand RV , Maan N Sameera were confused ...maan was feeling restless n was constantly w8ting for an answer ...though he knew he can't ask anything directly that would lead to many other questionn ...

seeing all this meera cleared her throat and started introducing ...

Meera : hi Randheer ...Rajveer this is Randheer ..geet' fiance ...

note :- maan n sameera did make love ...under which conditions/situations it will be revealed in next few updates

PRECAP

sameera gets to know the truth ..
n maaneet hug ..

Part 4 :-


Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
nice part...
poor them...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz update the title with the update and page numbers? like part 2@page 7 and the date...


thnk u soo much 4 liking my work ..😃
n about title ...i am sorry i am a new user of IF n still nt very fond of it but try to do it ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

Yar koi itna acha kaise ho sakta h geet almost gave her every happiness fr maan par maan ki bhi koi galti nai hai its just time taking toll on them superb sobia no words i m waiting fr ur next update jaldi dena


thnk u soo much suhana ... 🤗 n yes they r selfless lovers ..😊
n i said that destiny fate n time r playing its game ...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

THIS WAS SO SAD AND EMOTIONAL

THEY WILL MEET AGAIN, BUT MAAN IS MARRIED


thnks a ton 4 the appreciation ...😊
hope u like the further twist in the story ...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smallville

Awesome !!!!
Loved it !!!!!


thns a lot 4 liking my work ..
hope u enjoy the further story ...😃

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