MG Love???Revenge??? link to thread2 pg 1 - Page 54

Originally posted by: maaneet5

hey harika nice one

well geet ne acha kaam ki

daadi ko esa nahi bolna tha

i hate pari

maan ne payal dedi what a scene hug one both hug each other

well prem ki smart work keliye waiting

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was a super duper update... but short... 😕

coming to the update... i loved it... Maaneet were just awesome...

and btw... i was the 60th person to like the update... 😃

so now u have got to update fast!!!

Originally posted by: mandymore

Awsome prt...maan ki dadima is blind for money... 😕

atlast maan returned her payal...
argghhh kitnabad teacher tha...glad geet reachd at right time.. 😊

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome update dadi ko kya ho gaya ..glad geet angry love it ..dadi should not treat her like this

Originally posted by: love2_soma

i dont like d attitude of dadima...i cant imagine dadima like dis...she made geet cry...she is such a disgusting...n dat pari also...i want her out as quickly as possible...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

Part 14:

Nt: nahi maan karthi baat nahi kar raha its been a week since he spoke properly

Maan: aint he speaking to u even?

Nt: No!!! he is not speaking to me he is scared so much that he hardly reacts to anything

Maan: try to recollect bhabi during this week did he react to anything? anyone?

Nt: haan maan I remember last wen he got a call from someone he behaved so normal I saw he was smiling bt I donno who it was

Maan checked out the list of incoming calls in the cellphone and found out it as GEET's. He understood his next step towards the plan

Maan: bhabi do u trust me??

Nt: aise kyun keh rahe ho maan? y will not i trust u?

Maan: kyunki ab jo main karne wala hoon uske liye aapka mujhpe bharosa karna jaroori hai

Nt: wat are u upto maan?

Maan: plz pack the clothes of kids for outing. I am taking them for two days

Nt: ok bt can u manage alone?

Maan: yes and don't worry bhabi I promise do din mein karthi thik ho jayega

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Geet: chotu '''' arrr''''''.. chotu kaha hai tu? Bahar aa warna ''''''.. chotuuu

Geet was running behind chotu since an hr bt this chotu badmaash is full on with her badmaashi.

Geet: chotu nahane mein kya prblm hai?? Yaar saara ghar sar peh utha raha hai tu''..bahar aaja main aur nahi bhag sakti chotu'''. Its always the same with her chotu weneva geet tries giving a bath to her. Chotu ran to the kitchen counter geet tried catching her bt she jumped on to the cooking slab spilling the can of aata on geet.

Geet: ahhh tune mujhe ganda kardiya chotu wat the hell mujhe phir se nahana padega I cant run like this plz yaar ruk jaaa'''' this time chotu made her way among the ducked clothes cuddling and hiding. Geet was busy cleaning the mess that chotu created in the kitchen. She came to her room for checking her out and understood where chotu is hiding. Ahh finally geet got a chance to reach her, she smirked and shouted

Geet: god my clothes!!! They got dirty it wud be better if I get them washed in the washing machine. Chotu heard this and started to panick and put her head out of the mess.

Geet: gotcha!!!!!! Ab kaha bhagegi?? She caught her bt chotu was giving all impeccable looks to make geet fall into her trap bt she understood NO!!! dont gimme those innocent looks they wont work on me now saying this geet took her to the bathroom playing the song loud on her music player.

Say Na Say Na

say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke

ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke

ho say na

Geet joined chotu during the bath. Both of them came out while geet wrapped herself in a towel she dried-up chotu. The volume of the song was at peak geet started dancing

seer pe duppatta lehriya

nachteen de kudi de naal chehriya

te dhol wajda ho kudiyo dhol wajda

kurti da rang gaya nooriya

sadi rab ne bana di jodiyan

ke dhol wajda ho mundiyo dhol wajda

maan stopped his car infront of geet's apartment got into the lift finding out her flat's number

say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na

Geet took out her duppata and caped it around her shoulder got on to the bed and started her boggie down

all of you thigh girls in the house
if you feeling what i am saying then shout it out
say dhol wajda oh kudiyo dhol wajda
all of you desi boys in the house
just put your hands up and join the crowd
say dhol wajda oh mundiyo dhol wajda

maan reached geet's apartment, rung the door bell(budhu maan she is busy sunaayi kaise dega bachi naachne mein busy hai). No respone'''' he rung it twice''' thrice'''.. and he lost his patience as the song was louder than the sound of the door bell. Then looking at the door he understood it's not locked he made his way into the apartment skeptically.

Maan: geet!!! He roared ''' uff no response he again shouted finding no answer he went into geet's room and stood rooted looking at geet then leaning on the wall as she was nowhere to pay heed around she was all wet dancing on the bed looking ever so alluring

say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na
say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
oh oi oi
oi oi oi
oi oi
oi oi oi

say na say na how you said it to me
sone do na do na how you did it to me
dholi dhol baja raj raj ke
ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke
ho say na

as the song ended she swung her duppata into the air and it fell on maan's face veiling him from geet. This dumbo girl looked at the direction where the duppata fell and was shocked (me thinking ab kya hoga?)

PRECAP: AS ALWAYS!!! I AM NOT GIVING IT!!! THIS TIME I NEED "ALMOST 70 LIKES" NOT BCOZ I AM GREEDY JUST THAT I WANT TO KNOW AS TO HOW MANY OF U ARE ACTUALLY INTRESTED AND ALSO I FIND MANY NEWBIES JOINING THIS FF I FEEL HAPPY SEEING NEW ONES COMMENTING HERE SO I GUESS I WILL GET THEM

i am sorry for the short update my mind is not working me getting confused a bit and by the time u give ur almost 70likes ill get into the track hopefully😆

and i have replied to max comments bt nt all sorry for that and yes ill do it after this update on both of the update comments as i had to rush on giving an update coz u fulfilled my demand of likes and thanks to all my frnds and also honest readers request to silent readers plz hit a like

P.S: for pms add me and those in my frndlist not intrested to read my ff plz remove me pm karne mein prblm hoti hai i am telling this everytime bt no one is doing it 😭

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