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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
NOTE


I SORRY SORRY SOOO SORRRYYY

I AM REALLY SORRY FOR THIS DELAY
BUT MY COUSINS 😡
THEY CAME HERE FOR THEIR VACATION AND DID NOT ALLOW ME OR MY SIS TO CUM NEAR THE PC
WE WERE REALLY HELPLESS AS EVEN MY DAD ASKED ME TO LEND THE COMPUTER.
I WAS HELL ANGRY ON THEM. AND NOW FINALLY THEY LEFT AND I GOT MY COMPUITER BACK.
BUT STILL FATE PLAYS WITH ME. I HAVE MY EXAMS GOING ON AND IT WILL GET OVER NEXT WEEK.
SO JUST A WEEK MORE AND I'L START UPDATING AGAIN.

PPLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR THE DELAY. AND CONTINUE YOUR SUPPORT GUYS.

- SARKH AKA SRINI
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
it was very good concept if you are regular in updating than i will surely like to read this ff but if not than ultimately will be forgotten like other ff.thanks for note and hope for future regular updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Wowww what a story osum story wonderful story no words to describe about this wonderful 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Wowww what a story osum story wonderful story no words to describe about this wonderful 🤣



on behalf of chinu - Thank you , thank you 🤢

I know its awesome , i cant help it 😉🤢


seri enna reply lam panra , IF vida poren nu yaaro sonnnanga lae
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: idunno

it was very good concept if you are regular in updating than i will surely like to read this ff but if not than ultimately will be forgotten like other ff.thanks for note and hope for future regular updates.



Well , sarkh is still a schooler

You know the difficulties right

We have exams every month , Class tests , home works , projects , comeptitions , blah blah blah blah


So just she is trying to complete all those works


And i swear , u will have regular updates till 12th september 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: -niti-




on behalf of chinu - Thank you , thank you 🤢

I know its awesome , i cant help it 😉🤢


seri enna reply lam panra , IF vida poren nu yaaro sonnnanga lae


I postponed it to october 😆 but soon quit panniduvan happy 😆




Akka mum thangachi Kum Enna thorathurathulaya koori ah irunga 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Ravi.


I postponed it to october 😆 but soon quit panniduvan happy 😆




Akka mum thangachi Kum Enna thorathurathulaya koori ah irunga 😆


nee mudhala confirm pannitu apram kelamburiya illaiya nu soll

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

PART 5 THE CRYSTALL BALL

Geet jaldi kar yaar !!! der ho rahi hai screamed adi looking at his watch for the umpteemth time .

Are ek second ruk na !!!!

Urghhh !!! I hate when these ladies take so much time to dress up

Waise adi , did you speak to pinky? Asked geet from the dressing room.

Haan hogaya , ab jaldi kar .

Lo hogaya !

As the doors opened adi was stunned to see geet. His tom boyish friend was looking like a girl.

You are looking like a girl geet ! said adi absent mindedly.

What ???? this is your so called compliment ?? adi for your knid information mein ek ladki hi hoon.

Accha ! mujhe tho patha hi nahi thaa !

Ruk mein teri chatni banakar teri boss ko khilathi hoon.

Adi dashed out of the room with geet chasing him.

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Geet yeh lo mask , said adi as he gave a mask to geet.

Wow adi kya mask hai yaar !!!!

Ab apni compliments apne paas hi rakho aur jaldi pehno . humein andar jaana hai.

ok fine !!!!!

as theuy entered the ball room geet gaping at the grandeur of the ball.




Wow !!! the crystal ball !!! exclaimed geet !!!

Geet thumhe patha hai . this is one of the grandest balls on cruise ships.

Haan wo tho dikh raha hai.

Hey there is an empty table over there chalo.

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Maan was sitting in a corner and sipping his drink watching sameera dancing with Rajat Shah one of his business acquaintances that they met on board.

Wasn't he supposed to get jealous he thought. Any man would have reached the peak of jealousy watching his fianc dancing with another man. He doesn't know why but he didn't care a damn when rajat asked sameera for a dance. Shrugging away the thoughts he continued sipping his drink.

After a while he noticed sameera taking the seat beside him.

Mr. shah was really a gentle man maan. And he was a really good dancer you know.

Just then the song was changed.

Wow !! my favourite song . common maan lets dance .

Sameera nahi……..

Common maan. Its just a dance.

Soon he was on the dance floor dancing with sameera.

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Ouch geet !!!

Sorry !!

Sorry ?? this is the umpteemth time u are telling sorry for stamping my foot.

Yaar thumhe patha hain nah ki mein ek bahut karab dancer hoon. aur upar se yeh heels bhi said geet as she was dancing or say stamping adis foot on the dance floor.

Jst then the dj changed the song and now it wqas time to change the pairs.

Adi immediately released geet and switched his pair.

Geet on the other hand was jerked due to adi suddenly releasing her and she lost her balance. Just then a pair of arms caught her.

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maan stared at the girl who had fallen in his arms. Sameera had switched her pair and when he turned to see who his pair was he was shocked to the girl next to him loosing her balance and falling right into his arms.

Her face was covered with a mask but her eyes captured his.

Maan 's pov

I don't know how this girls eyes started to enchant me but everything became more beautiful around me when i looked at her eyes.- her brown almound shaped eyes.

Soon I was brought back out of the revire when the music began.

I danced with her in slow move ments but our move ments were not synchronizing .

Just then the girl stepped my foot with her heel.

I immediately let go of her due to the pain.

I heard her mumble a sorry before she dashed out of the dancing crowd.

The pain on my foot vanished in a minute but I stood alone on the dance floor figuring out who that clumsy girl with beautiful eyes was.

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precap :

btw congradulations on your engagement with miss . sameera

thank you ... misss ... ????

geet ... geet handa


sorry for the delay dearies . please hit the like button and leave your comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was interesting meeting
but i wished they had danced for a while
hope maan gives her dancing tips next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
awesome update chinnu 😆

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