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Chandlerbing1

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART -1 The wonder on sea

It is a busy Sunday at the goa port. It is the first cruise of " ATLANTIS " . it is not just a ship but a paradise on sea. A hundred times more marvelous than the titanic . the ship is now the talk of the town no no the world. the most luxurious ship mankind has ever designed is going to make its first cruise from goa to London. The first cruise is very special and many famous faces are going to be on board today. But these famous people have not arrived yet so guess we have to wait. This is nita Sharma reporting for HTV with camera man Kaushik Kumar .

The cameraman switched off the camera and took a deep breath.

Uff yaar nita kaise ithne saare baathein karthi ho tum.

Yaar tumhe abhi bhi mazak sooj raha hai. dekho ab sirf 15 mins hai rest karne ke liye. Kyunki uske baath bahuth important people aa rahe hai jaise ki Mr . Singhania of singhania jewelers and gems and the whole Dobriyal family owners of dobriyal exports.

Aur tumhare favourite hero ' bollywood rockstar rahul agarwal bhi aa rahe hai WITH HIS WIFE he said stressing on the last three words.

So what if he is married he is still the hero. Aur yeh sab chodo. Bahuth important baath yeh hai ki Maan khurana aa rahe hai . KHURANA AND SONS ki malik. Who bhi unki fiansi sameera khanna ke saath.

She was miss india last year right.

Haan yaar. Aur waise bhi un dono ki saagaai yahi goa mein do din pehle hui thi. Aur haan hum dono ko unki joint interview leni padegi. Yaar yeh sagayi ke baad unki pehli interview hai. agar humne acchi tharah se liya nahi na tho boss humein pakka kha jaayenge. Samjha.

Haan haan teek hai.just then he looked behind and noticed something. hey !! lagtha hai mr singhania aa rahe hai . yeh unki hi ghaadi hai ! chalo !!

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A sleek black mercedes made its way through the crowded goa port . it came to a halt infront of the vip entrance. The car door was opened by the driver and there came out ' MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

He then extended his hand and another hand took his and soon came out his fianc sameera khanna .

The reporters rushed towards them but were soon blocked by their body guards. Amidst the chaos a few reporters did manage to ask some questions.

Rep 1 : mr. khurana aapki engagaement do dino ki pehle huyi thi. Aapko ab kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai.

Its good and I'm happy about it.

Rep 2 : miss khanna , engagement ki baadh yeh aapki peheli trip hai.aur who bhi atlantis ki pehli cruise mei. Aapko kaisa lag raha hai.

Well atlantis is like a dream on sea. And its first cruise is really special . we are hoping to have a good time on board. Now if you please excuse us.

Through the crowd of reporters maan and sameera were escorted by a group of bodyguards into the ship through gate no. 2.

At the same time a huge queue of passengers were wating for gate no. 6 to open. Amidst the queue stood a girl with a picture of atlantis in her hand. She looked at the picture and then at the cruise ship in front of her.

Atlantis here I come !

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Edited by sarkh26 - 12 years ago

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Chandlerbing1

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART – 2 The room partner

As maan and sameera entered the ship ; they were greeted by the cruise men and were directed to the reception.

Good morning sir.welcome to cruise atlantis . Your tickets please. Said the lady at the reception

Maan handed over their tickets.

Mr. maan , maan singh khurana room no 507 and miss sameera khanna room no. 508. Saying so she handed over their passes. Your lugguages will be delivered in your room sir . have a nice trip on board atlantis.

Thank you.

As maan entered his room he noticed his lugguages were plaed neatly in a corner. He looked around and found the room tp be posh and elegent with all the luxuries of the world. He went to the balcony and observed the wide spread of the sea. Just then he received a phone call. He took out his phone and told " dadi ".

Hello dadi kaise hai aap.

Hum teekh hai bte aap kaise hai

Hmm… fine dadi.

Dadima took a deep breath.

Maan bte mein abhi bhi aapse keh rahi hoon. abhi bhi waqt hai. ek aur baar apni faisla ke bare mein soch lijiye.

Dadima please. Mein iske bare mein faisla kar chukka hoon .

Lekin…..

Mein aapse baad mein baath kartha hoo. Saying this he cut the call.

Maan took a deep breath and stared at the vast sea. The ship had already started its journey to its destination. And so had he. He has already decided his destination in his life and now there is no turning back. But does he really want this . he doesn't know.

Just then he felt some one near him.

Hey maan. Kya kar rahe ho. Sameera came close to him held his hand and leaned on his shoulder.

Its beautiful, isn't it.

mmm.

vaise meine khana hum dono ke liye yahi mangvaya hai. socha tha ki hum dono saath mein khana khayee.

mmm.

vaise maan you know what . I'm really excited about the crystal ball. Dekhna tomorrow's evening will be the best evening of our life. And I've already bought out fits for us.

mmm.

just then they heard a knock on the door.

Who is it.

Madam your lunch.

Come in. turning to maan. Mei dekhthi hoon.

Maan just smiled a bit and again turned and stared at the vast extent of the sea.

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Uff finally !! said geet as she thumped on the bed. Hers was a very small compartment with just two beds a small table and a window. She has to share her room with another person.

Hey babaji please ek ache bolne vali insaan bej dena. Mein bore nahi hona chahthi hoon. just then she noticed another girl enter the room.

Excuse me is this cabin 211.

Yah.

Oh well said the girl and arranged her lugguage.

This is geet.

Nice meeting you geet. I'm nandini. The girl fished something from her bag and geet noticed it was an i pod . The next minute she was engrossed in her music neither caring about the world nor the person sharing her cabin.

Babaji meine aapse kya maanga aur aap ne mujhe kya de diya. Chodo mujhe aapse baaath nahi karni . cribbed geet.

Not noticing anything interesting geet thought of taking a tour in the ship.

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Chandlerbing1

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Posted: 13 years ago

INDEX

PART 1 -PAGE 1

PART 2 -PAGE 1

PART 3 - PAGE 5

PART 4 - PAGE 8

PART 5 - PAGE 13

PART 6 - PAGE 17

PART 7 - PAGE 20

PART 8 - PAGE 22

PART 9- PAGE 25

PART 10 PAGE 27

PART 11 - PAGE 30

PART 12- PAGE 33

Edited by sarkh26 - 12 years ago

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angelic_cute

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting start

awesome update

thanks fro pm

bye

take care

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats on the new story

Love on the high seas

The concept is very interesting

Update soon

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Krupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

it is different and interesting please give regular update other wise dont want to disappoint if U live halfway like other ff people do and than regret to read it.