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Posted: 13 years ago
#31


to Adi bhi issi ship mein hai...

wonderful update...

next is Maan-Geet's meeting...

continue soon...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesome update
loved it
please update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
lovely...

excited abt precap...

continue soon..

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
LOVE THE IDEA OF ROMANCE ON THE HIGH SEAS
SO WILL GEET BECOME THE UNOFFICIAL COOK AS I HAVE A FEELING THAT ADI WILL LEAVE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
i love ships and sailing ,thats why reading it
not bad not bad ..nice update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

PART 4 THE TWO WISHES

Are !! wah !! yeh curry tho laajawab hai !!! exclaimed the manager .

Thank you sir replied geet politely.

Is curry se thumne mera dil jeet liya . tho teek hai bataoo ki thumhe kya chahiye !

Geet was shocked the man whose anger had made adi turn white with fear was talking so sweetly.

Wo '..

Are bathao na !!

Teek hai agar aap keh rahe hai tho kya aap adi ko do din chutti de sakthe hai ??

What ??

Please ''

Lekin chutti''

Dekhiye aap hi ne kaha tha ki aap mujhe kuch bhi denge

Teek hai manzoor hai .

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Baath kar liya thumne ??

Haan

Kya kaha un logon ne ??

Papa tho bahuth gusse mein the. Aur pinky jaise hi usne meri awaz suna wo rone lagi thi.

Dekha !!! what your one foolish act has done.

Haan geet !! mujhe yeh sab nahi karna chahiye tha !!

Ab yeh sab chodo aur bathaoo ki baath aage badi hai ya nahi.

Haan wo papa keh rahe the ki wo sjaake shaadi ke baarein mei baath karenge .

Waise mujhe yeh batha kit hum atlantis mein kya kar rahe ho .

Wo geet us din mein Mumbai pahunch gaya. Wahaan mera ek friend rehtha tha . thumhe patha haina raj jo mera saath catering institute mein padtha tha .

Haan raj !! yaad hai mujhe.

Jab meine sab kuch use bathaya thab usi ne mujhe is naukri ke liye recommend kiya tha aur lo mein pahunch gaya.

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Maan bte ab der nahi hua hai. Aap acchi tharah se sochiye . aapko yeh sab karne ki zaroorath nahi hai.

Mei rakhtha hoon dadima . said maan and cut the call

He hated to cut his dadi's calls but does he have another option ???

Keeping the phone on the table maan went back to balcony to continue his staring session at the sea.

Just then maan heard some sweet melodious laghter. As he looked around he noticed viraat jaiswal one of the famous business enterprueners playing with his child along with his wife.

That scene captivated maan. He was amazed to see contentment in that maan's face while he was playing with his child. The same contentment that he was searching since long back.

Wishing for such contentment in life maan took a deep sigh and started to stare back at the sea.

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What !! two wishes ??

Hello . meine thumhari naukrui bachayi hai. Pinky ke saath thumhari patch up karvaya . thumhare batameez harkath ke waja se jo problems hua use solve kiya. Aur uncle se baath karke thumhari shaadi ke bare mein bhi baath kiya. Aur badle sirf do hi wishes maang rahi hoon.

Adi threw his hands up in the air. Ok fine.. tell me .

Whats your first wish ??

Movie !!!

Movie ??!!!

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What do you want more than anything?

To be standing in the middle of the street in the pouring rain and have the love of my life kissing me.What about you?

To be the one kissing you !!

An soon he took her lips in a kiss.

Ewww !!! yeh kya kar rahe hai dono. Shram nahi aathi aise sab ke saamne ki'. I mean wo karthe huwe.

Aadhi !! geet was hell irritated. Since the movie had begun he had been giving comments like this.

Yaar . just grow up ok !!! you are just over reacting , geet whisphered sternly.

Mein over react ho rahi hoon ?? yeh dono over react kar rahe hai adi whispered pointing at the screen.

Urgh !! mujhe na thumhari chintha ho rahi hai. Patha nahi thum apni suhaag raat mein kya karogi.

Adi was hell embarrassed. His cheecks turned crimson red. Geet thum bhi naa'.

Ab chup chaap baitho aur mujhe movie dekhne do !!! samjha !!!

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Accha hua ki thum picture ke beech mein hi so gaya !!! said geet as they came out of the theatre.

Haan warna mujhe wo x rated scenes dekhna padtha.

Aadi !!!

Ok fine , ab thumhari second wish jaldhi bataao.

Well''''..

Geet bathana yaar .

The crystal ball !!

What ??

Haan the crystal ball !!

Thum pagal ho gaye hpo kya ?? mein nahi aane wala hoon samjhi.

Aadhi , dekho is ball mein sirf couples entry hai aur mein yahaan pe kisi aur ko nahi jaanthi .isliye thumhe mere saath aana hi padega

Lekin'..

Aadi !!! geet said sternly.

Aadi immediately shut his mouth and nodded meekly. One of the things he cannot handle was his best friend's anger.

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precap :

everything became more beautiful around me when i looked at her eyes.

Edited by sarkh26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awesome update
hope maan and geet meet soon
please update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
nice...

waiting for them to meet...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Voi maan geet epa than parpanga 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
hayee mujko b geet ki curry taste krni hai..😆😆😆
oops ye aadi schi apni sr pe kya krega..
bt bt maan me 😕😕😕
daddi kis bare mai baat kr rhi hai..
wnt 2 know abt maan...😃
crystal bal may b my maaneets' frst meet..😃😃😃
cnt soonnn yar

😃

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