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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
i love voyage stories so i find this one very interesting and different than others and will be only interested if ur updates are regular other wise will be forgotten like other half wrote ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART - 3 LOST AND FOUND

Ummm !!! its smells really delicious ! said geet. As she was taking a stroll on the ship she came across one of the restaurants in the ship.

Chal geet 1 jaake dekh ki kuch khaane ke liye milega ya nahi.

Geet was awed at the restraunt's grandeur look.

It was really posh or u can say lavish.

Unknowingly she entered the restaurant's kitchen and just then she felt something or may be some one hit her . and the next second she noticed curry spilt all over the floor and huge gasps.

Hey !! babaji !! yeh kya hogaya !!

Geet's head snapped and the next thing she said was " AAdi thuuu !!! "

Geet ???!!!

Oye !!! thu yahaan kya kar raha hai. Patha hai uncle ji kithne pareshaan hai. Thumne ghar se kun baagha ? aura b yahaan kya kar rahe ho ?? thum atlantis mein kya kar rahe ho ??

Her tirade of questions were stopped when they heard a voice.

Hey !!! what the hell is going on here !! aadi !! screamed the manager of the restaurant

Sir wo …

Wo kya are poora kitchen kharaab kar diya thune!! Aur poora poora curry ko gira diya !!! akal nahi hai thum mei.

Excuse me uspe math chillayiye. Mei hi isse takra gayi thi.

Oye thum kaun ho ?? aur yahaan kya kar rahe ho ?

Wo sorry actually mein galthi se aagayi . lekin aap please uspe math chillayiye. Yeh meri hi galthi hai. Mein hi ise teekh karvaaungi.

Agar aapko chahiye tho mein curry bana dungi.

Tum curry banaoge !

Haan kyun nahi kar sakthi kya !!!

Bus mujhe thoda time dijiye mein jaldi se bana dungi.

excuse me yeh koui ordinary hotel nahi hai. yeh ek 5 star hotel hai. do you know the quality of food made by these hotel chefs .

excuse me . khana banane ke liye chef banna zaroori nahi hai. aapko sirf curry chahiye na. mei bana doongi. agar aap chaahe tho aap serve karne se pehle taste kar sakthe hai.

Teek hai . dekhthe hai kit hum kaise banathi ho. Aur haan jaldi banana . 45 minutes mein banana hoga.

Teek hai. Done.

Geet turned to aadi.

Chal aadi mujhe saari ingredients dede.

Geet thujhe karne ki koi zaroorath nahi hai yaar. Mein manage kar loongsa.

Are chup ho jaao aur mujhe saare samaan dedo

While preparing curry

Waise aadi tum ghar se baagh kar kyun aaye ho wo bhi apni shaadi ki waqth par !

Patha hain uncle ji kithna pareshaan ho chuke hai. Then mahine ho chuke hain . aur abhi tak thumne kisi ko phone bhi nahi kiya. Aur pinky. Kya thumne socha ki uski upar kya beeth rahi hogi .

Wo kyun pareshaan hogi. Wo tho ap apni zindagi khushi se jee rahi hogi !!

What !! thum aise kyun keh rahe ho . aur ye bataao ki thum ghar se bhaag kar kyun aaye ho.

Tho mein aur kya kartha yaar. Papa meri shaadi koi aur se karvaane jaa rahe the jab mein pinky se shaadi karna chahtha hoon.

Kyaa !!!

Haan , thum tho jaanthi ho na geet ki mein aur pinky ek dusre se kithni pyaar karthe the lekin ab usne bhi mujhe dokha de diya. Jab mein uskai ghar gaya thea thab patha chala Wo bhi kisi aur se shaadi karne jaa rahi hai.

Oye gadhe ! ull de paate !! you stinking swine …

Oye !! thum mujhe kyun daant rahe ho. Meri best riend hone ke naathir thumko meri help karni chahiye. Lekin thumne tho mujhe ….

Oye shut up ok just shut up !! thum samajthe kya ho apne aap ko.

Geet……

Chup kar. You are the biggest fool in the world you know. Are jo ladki there papa ne there liye chuna hai wo pinky hi hai. Aur jab mujhe yeh baath patha chala thab meine hi uncle ko bathaya kit hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karthe ho. Yeh sunkar wo bahuth khush hue.

Kyaa??!!

Aur haan yeh baath sab ko patha chal gaya hain. Pinky ke ghar waalon ko bhi.

Kya ???!!!

Haan, aur sab milkar thujhe surprise dena chahthe the . isiliye kisi ne thumhari hone wale biwi ke bare mein kuch nahi kaha.

Tho isiliye thune meri shaadi rokne ki koshish nahi ki.

Haan ab samaj mein aaya ullu !!! bechari pinky…

Yaar yeh kya hogaya mujhse !!! ithne badi galthi kaise kiya meine.

Teek hai. Ab shaanth ho jaao . jab mein yeh curry banana finish kar doongi na thab usi waqth mein there papa ko aur sabko phone karke batha doongi teek hai.

Thanku so much geet. Best friend ho tho teri jaisi !!!

PRECAP :

What do you want more than anything?

To be standing in the middle of the street in the pouring rain and have the love of my life kissing me.What about you?

To be the one kissing you !!

sorry sorry sorry !!! everyone are throwing chappals at me , i know. lekin kya karoon i've been busy in my school preparations. isiliye plsss forgive me and like and do comment . this is ur sarkhs humble request ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
brilliant update
loved it to the core
i love the way the story is shaping up...its just awesome.
keep writing😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24







SUPRBBB START
LVD IT.
AWSMMM YAAR...😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Awesome start of the cruise dear..👏

Keep it up Srini..👍🏼

Thanks for the PM..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Lovely Story
keep it up
PM me when you put the next part

Thanks
idunno thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
ek to itne din bad update diya who bhi chotasa mogembo khush nahin hua...!bus ab jaldi se bada wala update dedo to hum manenge aapko...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
interesting
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

nice start

plz cont soon
thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
part 3
awesome...
Adi is an idiot...
cont soon dear...
the precap is fantastic...

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