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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rose And Water.
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Especially For You!
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PART-7

he shouted "geeettt". he is like this from two year, i tried to make him understand that she is gone, but me dont belive it, after that day, he gave himself to police and slowly and slowly he lost his mental balance, he is in mental hospital, he was send here during his punishment day. when i used to go to meet him in jail, he used to sketch geet name in jail wall, i used to cry seeing him, i already lost yash and now maan, how i wish geet to be back, please god please bring geet back, or he will die, today is punishment day were over, i took him by saying that geet is waiting, he quickly asked me like a small child "mein acha tho lag raha huin, will geet like me". i nodded through tears, geet please come back, see your maan. needs you please...

i remembered when he saw you first, in your dad's office where me, he and yash worked. you entered the office, from that time he fell for you and your innocence. you were wished by us and all. but he wished you from his heart, though he never accept that, but he had fallen for you from then only. we all lived in same house, one day i went to kitchen to take water, while returning i saw him inscribing something, i quickly went inside, but hide it

i know it is something special because he never hide anything from us, later when i took holiday to set the house, then i saw that paper in a dairy, he wrote..

May be thousand of words, May fall short to

describe your magical eyes,

May be thousand of words , may fall short to

describe your attractive smile,

May be thousand of words, may fall short to

describe your simplicity,

may be thousand of emotions, may fall short to

describe my feelings for uh...

(by me)

(i know it not that good, but i have written for 1st time)

he was crazy for you, he used to complete each and every work before time, so that he can go and meet you, but his seniors to stanch file and praise themselves before you, you know geet, he used to so angry that whole house used to burn in fire. sometime i used to see some sadness, i wonder why, than one day i understood, he thought that he is not capable for you, as you were owner of handa construction, while he was just a mere employee. Firstly i thought that it was only attraction, slowly i thought its a crush, but was never able to understand that it was his deep love for you, that even i cant measure.

who knowed that our life will take a huge turn..and tears made way through my eyes...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
nice update...
so maan fell in love at first sight
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update...
maan's love was so deep...
loved the poem...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update
Loved it
Maan s in Love
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update dear...I av't read it from starting completely but ya I started days back ...plz pm me for nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Maan in mental hospital...😭

they are thinking Geet is dead...

now u have started past story...I really want to know that what was the reason Yash died and why Maan always pushed Geet away from him...

waiting for next part...

very painful and emotional part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update dear
so short
continue soon pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz geet come back to maan...plz plz plz...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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